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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update
waiting fr mayank surprise
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thanks for pm and waiting foe mayur surprise date
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Wowwww awesomeee update maisha can't wait to see wat mayu planned for nups n loveeee sajan Convo n can't wait for der moments together do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fantastic update....armaan is still trying to figure out who gunjans bf is lol....cont soon
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aweosmee part loved it continue soon
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nyc part..

thanks for the pm..
plz cont soon!
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part84
nupur was searching clothes in her cupborad..when she remembers mayank had asked her to wear something in white....
n=by god...ab ye white kahase dhundke laungi ma?????? mere pass to kuch bhi white me nahi ha.....gunjan ko puchti hu...
nupur takes her phone n dials gunjans number...gunjan was drinking coffeee when nupur calls her.
g=hi di....kaisi ho???
n=ma theek hu..accha sun gunjan...woh tere to bohot sare white salwar kameezes ha na.. unmese mujhe ek white salwar kameez chahiye...
g=white???? tumhe bukhar aya ha kya?? tum aur white???
n=ufffo gunjannn!!! zyada bak bak maat kar....jaldi bata kaunse almarime rakha ha???
g=mere almarike seconnd side me...jaha outdresses rehte ha...
n=accha theek ha..thanks..
g=par di...tumhe kyu chahiye?? aj kiski shadi ha??
n=woh tujhe ma badme baataungi...abhi time nahi ha..bye..
g=par......ye di bhi na...kuch bhi bolti rehti ha...
nupur went to gunjans room..n took out a white salwar kameez....which was very simple... but beautiful.....
n=pata nahi logoko white itna kyu pasand ha......kitna uncolourfull lagta ha...aur mayank.. duniyake so rangomese usne mujhe yehi rang pehneko kaha...esehi usse sadu nahi kehti maaa!!!!!!
sanjeevani
gunjan was leaving sanjeevani...when riddhima comes to her..
r=gunjie...sun mera aj night duty ha...warna ma nupur se milne ati..aj woh duty pe bhi nahi ayii..
g=koi baat nahi di.....ma nupur di se keh dungi,..ap fikar mat kijiye...accha ma chalti hu... bye...
armaan comes..
ar=hi gunjan...
g=are jiju..ap??? hi...
ar=tum ghar jarahiho?? chalo ma tumhe chod deta hu..ma bhi gharhi jaraha tha...
r=sorry dr armaan..ap nahi jasakte..
ar=kyu???
r=kyuki dr mayank jachuke ha..dr gunjan ki duty khatam hogayi ha..aur hospital me kabhibi koi bhi immergency asakta ha..isiliye apko yaha mere sath rukna parega...
ar=par....
r=gunjan tu ja...byee..
g=ok..bye di...bye jiju...
ar=byee..
after gunjan leaves...
ar=tumne mujhe usse ghar drop karne kyu nahi diya???
r=kya ma nahi janti ke tum meri behen ki jasusi karraheho??? ya karneki koshish karraheho..
ar=nahi,..woh...baske....
r=dekho armaan...ma warning derahihu..meri behense door raho..samhjhee!! aur ha...subhahse pehle.sanjeevanise bahar mat hona...warna..gharme ghusne nahi dungiii..
ar=ok..ok....
mayur
nupur was almost ready.....brushing her hair......when mayank calls her..
n=hello..
m=nupur kaha ho?? ab tak kyu nahi ayi??? kabse wait karrahahu...
n=mayank...ma ek insaan hu...merre do hi per ha...gari gunjan leke gayi ha..to zahirse baat ha.. ke mujhe aneme thora der hoga,..aur tum to ese kehraheho..jaise ke tum humesha keliye abroad jaraheho..aur abhi airport pe hoo...
m=ha hu...
n=kya?????
m=meri maa...plzzz abhi sab accha accha horaha ha..sab bigad janese pehle...plzz jaldi ajao....
n=accha theek ha..arahihu..uffff!!!! ye ladka bhi na...meri jaan legaa....
nupur takes her bag...n goes to the place.....meanwhile..gunjan comes home..n doesnt fine nupur..
g=ye di kaha chali gayi????? call karti hu....
gunjan called her..but saw that nupurs cell was on the bed...
g=di to cell yehi bhul gayi..ab kya karu??? shayed mayank ke sath hogi... puchu??? nahi...chodo...agar hogi...to ma unhe disturb kardungiii.....koi baat nahi... are ha.. samrat ne khirki khula rakhneko kaha tha....nahi aj nahi rakhungi..to ghumke usse darwajesehi ana paregaa..haa!!!!
gunjan didnt open the window...n went to the washroom...
mayur
nupur came to the adress in which mayank had asked her to come...it was an old studio.....very spooky...n dusttyyy...
n=ewwww.....ye kaise jaga mayankne mujhe bulaya ha??? aur woh bhi white dress me?? sari dress me to dust bhar jayega.....usse call karti hu...
nupur put her hand in her bag to find her phone..but it wasnt there...
n=arre mera phone??? shayed gharme bhul gayiii!! shittt!!! is mayank ke chakkar me..sab bhul jati hu..chal nupur...andaar chal...
nupur came inside...n saw there wasnt any light...the whole place was very very dark..she even culdnt see herself..properlyyy...n was all the time slipping...
n=are...uffpoooo!! kaisi jaga ha ye?? ye mayank bhi na..... kaha phasa diya mujhe???
she was burburing to herself....when suddenly...a light was on..infront of her... there was a stage where the light was on..n the stage made was quite familiar to her......the another light was on the other side.....there was a set made of a barn... with some old curtains.. hay...a fire lighting... then behind was another light was on....it was a set of a train...on the railway trackk... the sets made were very familiar to her....when she heard a sound of the guitar..nupur turned n saw a guy playing the guitar....the guy turned n it was mayank...wearing the same black coat n pants...which srk weared in ddlj...(also in mjht)...n the stage was made like a sarso ka khet...yellow all around...n a place like a village...the second set was the set of the song zara sa jhoom loo main...nupur smiled seeing all this...n the third was same railwaytrack..in the last scene of the film ddlj...nupur was very much happy n pleased...mayank came infront of her playing the guitar..after the guitar playing was over...nupur clapped...
n=wooohhh!!! im impresseddd!!!
m=sorry...tumhara srk jo bajata tha..woh nahi mila..isiliye samrat ka guitar leke agaya...
nupur starts laughing....seeing her laughing mayank feels happy as she smiled..
n=mayank..tum itne cute kyu ho???? ddlj......woooohhh!!! wat a surprise...mane tumse ye kabhi expect nahi kia tha...ke tum....wohhh!!!!
m=actually...mane khudhi apne apse ye kabhi expect nahi kia tha.....par jab kaal tumhe upset dekha..to tumhe khush karneka....mere dimag me,..ye ek tareeka aya...
nupur was very much touched to hear...that he did all this to make her happy..
n=tumne ye sab isiliye kia??? ke ma concert me nahi jasakii..isiliye tumne ddlj wala sabkuch kia..kyuki ddlj mera sabse fav movie ha????
m=welll ha.......
n=mayank...ek baat kahuu....tum waseto sadu hoo...nahi bohot sadu ho..lekin jab uss sadu wale duniyase bahar ate hona..tab bilkul mere ddlj wale raj ban jate hoo jo apni simran keliye kuch bhi karsakta haa!!!...
sajan
gunjan comes out of the washroom.n
g=aahhhhh!!!!!!!tum..tum...kahase aye???
s=khirkise.....
g=par...mane to khirki khula nahi choda tha..phir???
s=wellll..is barese gharme..sirf tumhare kamreka khirki nahi ha..nupur ke kamreka bhi haa..
g=wat?? tum di ke kamrese aye ho???
s=ha..dekha ke tumne ye wala band rakha ha..to dusrese agaya.....
g=agar di rehti to???
s=are baba janta hu nupur nahi ha..isiliye to aya huu...
g=tumhe kaise paata ke di gharme nahi ha????
s=agar rehti//to ghar kapne lagta!!
g=samrattt!!!
s=accha accha sorryy..woh mayank ke sath bahar gayi ha,....
g=mayank ke sath>??//
s=are yaar...abhi tum unke bareme sochna band karo..aur..humare bareme sochoo...
g=humare bareme?????
s=ha...u noo......hardly humhe time milta ha..ek dusreke liyee..aur...
g=samratt....tum har raat mere kamreme ate ho..chup chup ke..
s=are woh nupur ko pata ha..
g=wat??????
s=ha usse permission leke rakha ha....
g=tum....
s=chashmish tum apne gharme mehmanoko ese treat karti hu??? kuch khane peeneko pucha bhi nahii..
g=tuum kabse mehman ban gaye?? tum to is gharke....da....
gunjan stopped saying..she was blushing..n not looking a him..while samrat was enjoying her exoression..he came close to her n whispered in her ear....
s=damad hu??
gunjan looked at him..n blushed.....
g=ma coffee lati hu...
gunjan moved from there..but samrat called her back..
s=chashmish...(she stopped at the door)...ab jab tumne mujhe is gharka damad already bana diya ha..to us hisabse to...ma tumhara already pati bangaya ritee???
gunjan blushed..more...n left from the room..
s=ye chashmish itna sharmati kyu ha??? jo bhi ho..sharmate hue boohot cute lagti ha...
mayuur
m=accha ab raj aur simran ki bohot sari bate hogayeiii..ab hum wapas mayank aur nupur me lot ke ate ha...theek ha..so kya kehti ho???? hojaye...ek new ddlj... mayank as raj....n nupur as simrann..
nupur smiled.....mayank went back to stage.....n started to play the guitar.... (bg do dil ek jaan)....
mayank started to play the guitar.....n nupur was looking at him.....
sagar me jaise ye lehre uthee...(mayank keps the guitar down)
dilko hua esa kyaa...(he keeps his hat )
pucho to na ye kahe kuch bhii....
tuhi bata ha ye kyaa..........(he opens his arms....)
mil gaye do jahan...
zameen asmaann...
ab hum banenge di dil ek jaan....(nupur runs on the stage...n hugs him) (mayank picks her up..(like the confession one...)
sajan
gunjan was making coffee....samrat also comes in the kitchen,....seeing him gunjan again starts blushing..n avoids his eye contact...samrat enjoys that...he sits on the stable...behin gunjan..n she was making coffee...
kya hua ye....jo hua ye (samrat hugs her from behind)
dil ne jo chaha...to hua ye..(he holds gunjans hand...n both make coffee together)
kab hua ye..jab hua ye.(gunjan pushes him back...n goes to take the sugar from the cupboard)
dil bhi na jane kyuu hua ye...(it was too highh....she looked at samrat....samrat came bhind her...n slided his hands over n reached the sugar pot..n gave it to her)
dhadkane bhi bin puche tham gayii...(gunjan blushing forwaded her hand to take it.. but samrat dikdnt gave it..)
sari hado ke par ha...kuch aur nahi ye pyaar ha...(gunjan tried to take it... but instaed of giving it....he pulled her closer pulling by her hand)
do dilo ki ye kahani....mithi se ye ki chatani...(both were lost in eachothers eyes)
hoth bhi to bin bole has gayee...(samrat leaned to kiss her...but gunjan pushed him back..n took the sugar pot)
sari hado ke par ha kuch aur nahi ye pyaar ha....(samrat smiled on his own..)
mayur
tare zameen pe agaye..(nupur was sitting on the barn place n mayank was throwing snow spray over her)
jab bhi pari teri nazr...
dil ye badolome ure....(then he gives her a red rose)
dilpe hua esa asar....
bahome teri sama jauu..(mayank puts a shawl around her n sits beside her)
kehta ha dil barbar...(nupur hugs him)
tere khayalome rehti huu...(pullss his cheeks)
tujhse kahu kaise yaar......
mil gaye do jaha zameen asmaan..(mayank picks her up...n dances)
ab hum banenge do dil ek jaan...(the lights became very dim...n mayank puts her down...)
sajan
dil se ma kahu..ye dilki sunu.. (gunjan comes to her with coffee..n sees samrat in the balcony sitti ng on the swing..)
kya karu tu bata...(she gives him coffee)
sapne dekhu khuli akhose ha ye kaisa nashan.(samrat takes the coffe...n pulls her on him...gunjan sits on his lap)
ho lamhe sare bin bole tham gayee(gunjan tries to get up..but sam doesnt let go her...)
saru hado ke par ha..(he picks her up..n stands up)'
kuch aur nahi ye pyaar haa....(twrils around..n dancies with her....)
mayur
chup tum rahoi chup hum rahe...(mayur slowly dances..on the slow music..n dim light)
akho akho me ghum rahee..(when suddenly the lights were off...mayank leaves nupur)
kehna ha jo phir bhi kahe...(nupur doesnt find mayank..when the lights were on... maank was standing infront of the train.holding a handle..)
bate dhadkanose kare...(he forwards his hand...nupur smiles...n gives him her hand...n he pulls her close to him....)
the scene divides in two.......sajan n mayur......hugging eachotherr.....in different placessss
PRECAP: 😛😊 ENJOYYY!@!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb update..sajan were very cute
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Wao yar awsm .plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Superb..
Love da romance of SaJan

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