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Butterfly28

@Butterfly28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: Dmg8594
Heyy guys! Sorry I really wanted to complete this part today, but there's some problem with my laptop so it's gone for repairing... It'll only come on Monday, and since there's a holiday on Wednesday, I plan on completing the part on Tuesday! I'm so sorry!!

Regards,
Shrutika

Awwww...no worries...Complete when you can....

I came across this ff recently, and have to say you do a marvelous job with the story telling. Riddhima is so confused and can't see what's staring right in her face....I'm sure you'll make her realize in due time...

Continue soon...

Love,

Rinku

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: meow23
hey shrutika,
jus caught wid dis ff.. luvd d concept intially did gt cnfused wid d past n d present bt i guess neccessary 4 d story 2 proceed..
wasn't ammy already in luv wid ridz..
d 1st nite at the dorm he went 2 pick her up on the pretext of his mom sayng soo.. the gifts.. i guess nikki speakng abt ammy n ridz fallng in luv wid each oder was also ammy's plan..
he gettng angry wen she said dat she is dating..
d pics which peanut clicked jus showed dat nw ridz needs 2 understand..
n he even said abt d givng gifts weneva she wantd dem...
cld u plzzz post sumthng frm ammy's pt of view
contd soon

Hey thanks a tonne for reading!! Actually this FF has been very spontaneous! When I wrote the first part, I didn't even know what I was gonna write next! I actually thought of ending it or discontinuing it! But then a story finally formulated in my head, and so I had to make the earlier parts as flashbacks from Riddhima's diary! I kew it would be a bit confusing, but I tried my best! Hope it wasn't too difficult to understand pr anything!!!

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lakshmi

@meow23

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Posted: 14 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: Dmg8594

Hey thanks a tonne for reading!! Actually this FF has been very spontaneous! When I wrote the first part, I didn't even know what I was gonna write next! I actually thought of ending it or discontinuing it! But then a story finally formulated in my head, and so I had to make the earlier parts as flashbacks from Riddhima's diary! I kew it would be a bit confusing, but I tried my best! Hope it wasn't too difficult to understand pr anything!!!

i understand.. i guess it was neccessary..
n no discontd..kz

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jannat4ever

@jannat4ever

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#584

superb update dear..........👏
loved it........

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Niharika

@Altaira

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#585

awesome update dear i loving this ff a lot 😃

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vidu87

@vidu87

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: Dmg8594
Heyy guys! Sorry I really wanted to complete this part today, but there's some problem with my laptop so it's gone for repairing... It'll only come on Monday, and since there's a holiday on Wednesday, I plan on completing the part on Tuesday! I'm so sorry!!

Regards,
Shrutika

its ok shru

no probs dear. but plz complete d part on tue.

will b waitn eagrly.

neways

superb part

luvd it

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Ishaqzaadi

@Ishaqzaadi

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#587

OMG I loved this update SOOOOOOOOOO MUCHHH!

Im in a rush atm so I cant comment properly but I'll be back to comment later =))

Honestly the only thing I'm not liking is that S*d is gonna be coming to the wedding -__- I thought that was that with him in the FF :(

Otherwise, really awaiting the next updates! x

Edited by Preeti_285 - 14 years ago

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samiyah

@Samiyah258

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#588

Beautiful update <3
I can't wait to read the whole part :) I'm so excited to see what happens next! I can't wait till AR confess their love for eachother it's going to be awesome even though there is still time lol

Update soon!!!!

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Rabia Amla

@-RabiaKSGKaJen-

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#589

Great Update.. Loved It <3

Best Line Frm Da Update Was Dis One

""I love strawberries!" I heard him say and turned, only to find him inches away from me. Retreating a little as a reflex, I saw him grin and wink, as he followed the rest. Looking at the chap stick in my hand, I realized what he meant '

'L'Oreal Strawberry Shine Lip Gloss'

One Thing Im Nt Happy Wiv Is Dat Sid Is Comin To Da Weddin.. Dunno YY I Have A Feelin Smin Is Gonna Happen.. :(

Anyways Update Soon..When U Gonna Update ??

Lots Of Love Rabia Aka Rabzy KaJenian ARian

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Jia

@pinkss

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#590

Hey Shrutikaa...

awesummmm update hun....simply loved AR.....i can really feel KAJEN sayin all dose words :)))

its superb....keep writin :)

oh n btw....i din get any PM's 4m u 4 da last 2 updates....hope u havnt 4gotten me.....plzzz PM me da next tym u update hun...its much easier 4 me....newyzzz....tc...

lotsa love

JIA<3