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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#291

Okie sadly, I lazed around the whole day, so now I'm slogging it out here! 😆 And I'm not sure if the installment which I've written is good enough to be posted up yet! So I'll just wait for sometime when I'm free and edit it, make it good enough for a read, and then post it up....Till then I'll probably finish writing the whole part, so it's better! 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: Ankita.M
I agree with Moni here ,you are a brilliant writer and am sure you'll get loads of people reading and appreciating your work 😃.Your writing is so fresh and really makes one happy after reading !

Hey thanks you so much! Means a lot to me seriously! Thanks a tonne! 😳

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: sana.r
Awesome fanfic:D:D
I have an exam on sunday but i just cant stop myself frm reading ur updates :P

I totally love the friendship AR share, their comfort level and rapport.

Would love to know armaan's POV too.

Pls update soon:D

P.S u r an OSM writer :D

Hey welcome to AWOTB! Glad you enjoyed reading, but seriously I hope your exam went well! Armaan's PoV still has sometime to be shown!😊 Keep reading and commenting!

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: ARKJ_4EVER
nice one...even Armaan's being really annoyin', he's surely right in some points of his...he's like torn bet his best friend n girlfriend n is behavin' like a typical guy bt it's really nice dat he goes after Riddhima even after he tells her to go after their talk!1!
thank u 4 the pm😊

Armaan is right in everything he does!😆 I would support him even if he murdered someone! But anyway, you'll probably understand him better once his PoV is shown, because only Riddhima's thought process is being shown at the mo....

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: Ankita.M
Not a sad part at all as you said ,just a situation which makes them come even closer 😃
Like you said seeing this from a guys point of view he wasnt wrong ,infact he is stuck between the two.
Obviously Riddhima means more to him but he knows Andreah needs to get the priority he has promised to give her too .
He may have asked Nikki for help but his intention was yet the same,he missed her and cant stay without her.
They both feel so much for each other ,only they havent been able to point out that its love !
Armaans not going to drop her and only wanting to pick her up only proves how he cant just see her go .
The story is at a really interesting point and your beautiful writing makes it even more amazing.
Love the way you've shown AR here ,so real and simple !
Wonderful part <3

Ankita seriously thanks a tonne for such a big comment! I'm touched! I'm speechless so excuse me for lack of vocab!😳

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: zephyrr
Hey! i am sorry.. this is a long overdue reply.. but i've been keeping busy and hence didnt get to read all your updates when you put them up.. but now i finished reading them and i loved it all.. i love where the story is heading.. initially i was a little skeptical about the whole flashback system and also reading the story with Riddhima in first person.. but the way you've written it has convinced me of this style of yours and i dont think it could have been written in any other way than this.. i really like the way you've written the story.. its got depth, its not hurried or shallow and also its pretty much about feelings.. they always make a story what it is..
also about the latest part, i dont think Armaan is wrong.. both of them are.. an argument always involves both parties and the same is the case here.. its quite human to react the way he did.. so none of the hate business for me. .wonder what the turning point it?..
thanks for the pms.. and great work.. waiting to read more and soon!!

Hey Zephhyy! It's cool! I'm glad you found the time to comment! And about the whole flashback thing, and writing from Riddhima's PoV, both are getting a bit tedious and difficult, because firstly I'm having that famous disorder called the Writer's Block, and hence running out of ideas...Secondly, since it's all Riddhima's PoV, poor Armaan suffers everytime, because since Riddhima doesn't know what's going on in his mind, no one else does either, and you can see many people are not liking the way Armaan's behaved in the past couple of parts...But that actually builds up my whole track now, and now it's shaping up okay, I will be able to show Armaan's PoV very soon..I have something in mind...!

And the turning point will be revealed in bits of pieces and hints, so it's all up to how good you are at guesswork! I'll look forward to see how you interpret Riddhima's interpretations of Armaan's behaviour from this part on!

Glad you enjoyed! Continue reading and commenting!

P.S. Hope you get well soon! 😊

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: pixie_n
hey superb ff. wud surely luv to read more. plz add me to ur pm list

Added you!😊 and Thanks a tonne!

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: armaania13
Absolutely loved the update!!!
I empathise with Armaan -- poor guy -- loves his Best Friend but has to keep his girlfriend happy too!!! The way you described Armaan's anguish at being stuck in the middle was simply too good..
Love the way the story is moving!!

Please please please put up the next update!!! Your updates are like a daily necessity now!!!!!
Great Great FF!!!

Aww I understand, because writing has become a daily necessity for me too! Only thing is, work takes a toll on me then, so I have to resist the urge to just sit and write non-stop! Don't worry I'll continue soon! Thanks!😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: Kajenaliya
ok honestly i just started reading it my friends were on about it and i was like what does it have in it
So i read it and its amazing i love the way you write and the story is just fab and i seriously hope u continue soon :D

Hey thanks so much for reading my FF! I'm glad you liked it! And whoever those friends of your's are, I'm grateful to them as well! Love you all! Thanks!😊

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: Samiyah258
One of my friends suggested this FF to me and i read it all in one go! Its awesomeee one of the best FF's I've read :)
I simply lovee the storyline and its a very interesting FF to read!
Do continue it I'm waiting to read what happens next!!
Amazinggg storyy

Okie, again I'm very thankful, firstly to your friends, and secondly to you as well! Thanks a tonne dear! Hope you continue reading and commenting! Thanks!😊