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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

wow nice update... cant wait for the next part.. do continue soon


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayadika11

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pickachu

Loveeeee the part.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aminakhan

as usual great update👏 i really enjoyed it😊 n yeah plz update soooooooooooooooon!!


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Posted: 14 years ago

Next part:-

Maan hold her tightly more and said shhh.I know everyting, it's my fault that I don't …but I know….. geet, pls forgive me I'm sorry.

Geet:- aap chale jao iha se.

Maan:- geet

But no response from geet,

Maan held her shoulder and said pata hain aaj tumne mujhe jo trust dia , sab ke samne mere paas aake , mujhe sirf iye sach bata ke, par mere galati nehi gunah hain ke meine ek pal ke liye, geet, I know it's my fault that I … but geet,I ….

Geet:-aap ghar chale jaiye.

MAan:- ha oh toh jaunga par pehele aapne patni ko iha se leke.

Geet look at maan blankly.

Maan slowly weeps her tears and said I promised I'll never do anything hurt u. but pls say something.I know I'm at fault then punish me geet.

Geet just hold him and said aap chale jaiye.

Maan:-I'll not go without u.I know u r angry on me but geet snapped him and said I have no rights to angry on u?Who I'm .

Maan:- u r my wife, well may be still we r not married to each other in front of the world but I …any way,U have full right , aur jab chahe mujhpe gussa karo,par, no more argument for this marriage or engagement. We will talk about this matter later. Now go and ready.

When rajjy and rano enter the room and said r geet agree for this engagement.

Maan:- yes then He looks at geet for her approval but she still sit there silently.

MAan to himself I'm sorry geet for this pressure but today I realized u feel something for me. Aaj tumne mujhe oh baat batayi jo baat sirf aapne ko iya aapne ma ko bole jate hain, par it's my fault that I don't' trust u that time when u need my trust, I'm sorry geet.I broke ur trust but trust me I'll give u more than this from now.I feared about ur rejection and don't realize the depth of matter.

Maan left the room and give them space to make her ready for the engagement.

Ranveer asked maan what happen suddenly?

MAan:- nothing papa, geet daar gayi thi, actually, today I scold her during her study time and so. Nothing more.

Ranveer:- don't tell lie beta.

Brij:- nehi uncle may be, she is very sensitive , choti si choti si baat ko dil mein laga leti hain.

MAan weakly smiles and said Iknow it now.

Ranveer:- all cause of u and ur anger.

Maan:-I'm sorry.I'll make up for this .now give me some time for engagement.

Ranveer and brij left the room.

Maan and geet ready for their engagement, both are for different reason.

Guest are arrived and yash saw rahul also there and said to Vicky but before they said anything to granny goes there and said are rahul y r u standing there, come here. Wait ur bro and bhabi will come here any time.

After some time maan reached there and saw rahul there.Rahul came and congratulate him but maan ignored him and left the place.

He is worried for geet now more.He looks at the door and after some moments geet is coming from there with her mother and sister.

Geet looking gorgeous in red lehenga with cream color duppatta. Maan stunned to see his beautiful geet but still geet looks pale and tired. Her eyes look dull.

MAan understand it.

He come and forward his hand for geet.Geet still stand there blankly. Rajjy placed geet's hand on maan's hand and maan clasped it and take her with him. both stand in the middle.

Granny and dar jee came and granny told every one now thanks for coming here and here is she , my would be daughter in law Geet Handa.

After hearing geet's name rahul shocked and chocked his drinks and look at geet who is standing close to maan and her hold by maan tightly.

Rahul cannot take it.

Dar jee:- now both of u exchange the ring.

Pandit jee:- ha, subh muharat is near.

MAan look at geet who is still looking at the ground.

Every one think that she must be shy .

Maan placed the ring on geet's ring finger when geet is still standing there still.

Rano smiles and said geet beti,

Rajjy whisper geet pls didi.

Geet slowly looks at maan who is looking at her with expectation.

Geet put the ring on his ring finger.

MAan slightly kiss her ring finger.but geet pulls her hand .

Every one congratulate them .

Pandit jee said after 4 days both of them got married.

Every one happy but rano said itni jaldi kaise? Kitna kuch reayd karna hain par itna kaam time meine hum kaise manage karenege.

Here rahul to himself I have to stop this marriage. This girl ruin my position and I guess now maan also know about it, aaahhh no I cannot let her win,I'll take revenge sure but at first I have to stop this marriage.

Rahul suddenly said well aunty jee said right thing, how could we manage this marriage so soon. Bahut si kaam hain.

Here, geet heard rahul's sound and look at him and shocked there.

She wants to leave the place but stood rooted there. her hands automatically clutched maan's hand.

Maan pull her close and said papa, we have no problem, me and geet already decided that we will marry each other soon.

Granny:- but maan.

Maan:- dadi , aap log arrange kare.waise bhi saare guest aagaye hain, aur bhi jo log ana hain ajyenge.

Darjee:- well, we will manaege then,

Ranveer:- yes,hume bhi koi problem nehi hain.

Rano:- but there are lots of work.

Brij:- we will manage ma.

Rahul looks pissed off and left the place.

Every one enjoy the party.

When geet feel tired and dizzy.

Maan asked her what happen geet?

But again no response from geet.

Maan:- geet, , let's go from here.

Geet:- no.I'm fine.

Maan:- but ur face is pale.

Geet:-I'm fine.

Maan:- geet pls listen to me.

Rajjy came and said didi, let's go. mama give me permission to take u with me.

Geet left maan's hand and said ok.

Maan:- rajjy.

Rajjy stops and said yes sir.

Maan:- called me jiju. Not sir.

Rajjy:-I'll try.

Rajjy take geet with her.

Maan stand there and feel sad for geet and angry on his own behavior.

Maan's p.o.v:-

All is my fault, mein agar uski baat sun leta, meine apane aap meine itna busy ho gaya, uske rejection se daar gaya , k eek baar bhi uske baat nehi suna, kyuon kyuon? aaj mein iye ek aise geet ko dekh raha hoon, jo,,,kya karu use phir se hasau…….

Vicky came and said bro , rahul is here and I feared about geet's safety.

Maan:- I know and understand it but here is lots of guest and he will not do anything.

Yash:- bro , uss din bhi bahut log the, phir bhi.

Maan look at them and then ok.I'll handle it but three of u take care of geet, . wait ,I'll introduce all of u tomorrow , her health is not good today.

Dev:-it's ok bhai.but where is bhabi?

Maan:-oh , toh rajjy ke sath gaye hain,

Yash:- ekele.

MAan understand the meaning of word and left the place quickly.

Here rajjy and geet going towards geet's room when rahul came and blocked their way.

Rahul looks badly at geet and rajjy and said two sister and both are damn hot, so what's up girls, let's have some fan, oh oh if want to shout then forget it cause no one is near and all are busy to enjoy the party.music on loud who will heard ur voice darling geet? Du forget that day but damn with my own brother who spoiled the fun but today I have double bouns and I'll and grab geet's hand and pull her forcefully. Geet try to protest but he drag her with him, rajjy shout but no use.Rajjy try to fight with rahul when rahul push her forcefully by another hand and rajjy falls in the floor.Rahul drag geet and take her with him.

Here after some time, maan reached there when he saw rajjy on the floor and crying bitterly and said where r u didi?

Maan :- kya hua rajjy?

Rajjy turns and said I lost didi , he came here again.

MAan:- what? Who came here?

Rajjy shouts ur brother rahul and take my didi,I cannot stand up properly.

MAan shocked to hear it and asked kaha le gaya.

Rajjy:- uss taraf.

Vicky came there and heard it and said bro go and save bhabi.

Maan runs in that direction and here Vicky help rajjy to stand properly.

Here in the terrace , rahul take geet and throw her in the floor and said so u want to marry maan? Well, well,I'll not let this happen? I hate u and ur maan geet.I'll kill him. Just cause of his intelligence every one praised him from childhood, everything is his control, if he will say this right then right, yash, dev, Vicky every one are prasing maan , y now he want to marry u after couple of years he agree to marry some one , u r beautiful , hot and u reject me , slapped me, insult me in front of whole college and now u'll live happily . every time if maan think he will get best thing then it'll be wrong tonight,I destroyed his one of best thing then I'll take revenge from both of u.

Geet:-pls leave me.I'm ur bhabi, I'm only maan's pls leave me.

Rahul slowly come forward to geet and said oh really, u r my bhabi but when I want to marry u , u reject it and insult me but darling today,I'll take revenge from both u and then rahul bent and ripped geet's duppatta and try to hold her hand but geet push him by using her all force and stand on her foot , rahul again try to hold her hand when another came and punch him and said u r sick and u r shame on our family name. u r not a human and then again punch him . rahul saw maan punch him and rahul's nose already bleed.after 2-3 punch when maan again try to punch him yash came and said bro leave him, not now, we will take care of him later.

Maan:- leave him. No way.

Yash:- look at bhabi, she needs u.

Maan look at geet, who is standing near terrace and looks fearful.

Maan goes near to geet and hold her shoulder.

Geet who snaps his hand but maan said geet, it's me maan. and after this word geet just turn and hugged him tightly. Maan hugged him back,

Here rahul stand by help of Vicky and said kab tak bachayenge aap iss lerki ko.

Maan shout don't u dare to utter her name, she is us bhabi remember.

Rahul laughed and said oh really, she is not even marry u, just engaged with u and but again now Vicky slap him and said just shut ur mouth now.

Vicky drag him with him but still rahul shout,I'll not leave u or geet.

Slowly rahul's voice fade away.

Geet clinged to maan almost.

Maan patted her head but suddenly his cell ring and both came bsck to their world but geet still hugged him.maan attain his cell and said yes granny.

Granny:- where r u both, where is rajjy?

Maan:- oh geet is feeling tired so, I told rajjy to take her. Don't worry.I'm also feeling tired but try to join u all ina short while.

Granny :- ok beta, take rest.I'll manage them.

Maan then look at geet who is still hugged him.He softly said geet,and tuck a tendril hair behind the left ear.

Geet look at maan. Her face is still pale, eyes are red, swell. Any time she will falls in florr if maan couldn't support her.

Maan feels guilty for this misery of geet. He just hugged her back and said don't worry geet,I'm here with u.

Geet:-I'm feeling tired.

Maan :-ok, let's go and carried her in his arms.

Geet:-I can walk.

Maan:-but.

Maan left her and geet try to talk but her foot is give her support.

Maan saw it and with out any word he take her in his arms and walking towards geet's room.

Geet:-I… but stopped in middle after maan gazed at her.

Maan saw in geet's room rajjy, yash are waiting for them.Rajjy came close and said how r u didi.

Maan:- ur didi is fine,

He placed geet in the bed and said rajjy give a bowl of hot water and close the door and both of u wait for me outside the room.Pls take care no one know about this incident and no one came there .

Yash:- but bro.

Maan:- rajjy do as I say.

Rajjy brought hot water and said but I'll not leave.

Maan:- rajjy,

Rajjy:- no.

Maan looks at geet who is still have lots of doubt and hurt by many incident and said aap jayeiye mr khurana, meri behen hain iha . u don't need to be worry about me any more.

Maan feels hurt and said thanks geet, for showing me place.but u r my responsibility and I'll take care of u, either u want it or not.

Then he said yash go outside.

Here , yash see the tensed moment and he pull rajjy with him and said bro , take care of bhabi, we will come later.

Rajjy :- but, yash

Yash:-pls trust me, bro will not do anything that any one will regret , may be there is soemthing that, look rajjy something are personal between husband- wife.

Rajjy:- but both are not still,

Yash:- but will be, if u wask bhabi then she will agree and said she is already consider bro as her husband.

Rajjy:- mujhe iye sab samjah mein nehi aaraha hain.

Yash:- jab tumhe koi milega tab tumhe malaum hoga.

Here in side the room, maan slowly lift lehenga but geet said no.

Maan:-don't worry,I'll not cross limit,then slowly diped her legs on hot water and pressed the placed gently. Then lift the foot and weep water by towel and rubbed an ioiment there and said now don't stand up and lay here.

He calls rajjy and yash and said to rajjy, help her toeat dinner, and look she take lots of rest tonight and don't put any pressure on her foot.

Then he left the room hurriedly.

Maan straight goes to his room and close the door …..He feels guilty but now he is hurt more.

Here, rajjy :- didi, ek baat puchu?

Geet:- hmmmm

Rajjy:- did he hurt u?

Geet feel conscious and said who?

Rajjy:- maan singh khurana.

Geet:- no , he is nice,

Rajjy:- but .

Geet:- look rajjy, he is angry on me cause he has right on me , second, any one never think about his/her family member did bad thing, it's very tough and bitter truth.

Rajjy:- but y ru up sate that time? When u know this.

Geet:- rajjy, we r human and react quickly with out thinking too much. Like maan did and me did.but yes, soemthing has between us, that cannot share with u , cause it's very personal.

Rajjy:- hmmm, yash bhaiya also said like same.

Geet:-when u'll find some one then u'll understand now go and sleep.

Rajjy nodded and left from there.

Here geet want to call maan and say sorry but then said no, he should say sorry ,I'll not call him or say sorry.mana ke meine naraj kar dia abhi but phir bhi,

Ranveer came and see maan half lay on his bed but his face showing pain.He help him to sleep fully on his bed and then tucked him under the blanket.

Here in geet's room, rano came with shekhar and saw their little angel sleep.she has pain and her face looks pale.

Rano:- sorry beta, bahut dant dia and kissed her forhead.

Shekhar:- I told u , she is looking ill cuase of this sudden marriage , staying away from us. she is still kid.

Rano:- but after couple of days she will be married women.

Shekhar:-I think maan will handle her and take care of her.

Rano:- never expect too much.I know maan is nice , good person but he also has some expectation from his wife but geet.

Shekhar:- she will manage, don't worry.

Next morning, maan wake up but feel sad.

He look at the ring and feel more sad about geet.Some one knock the door and he said wait.

He open the door and found yash, rajjy and geet stand there.

He turns and said kya hua itna subha subha.

Yash:- oh aapko bhabi kuch kehena chathi hain.

Maan:- jo bhi kehena hain mujhe pata hain, meine papa ko bol dunga.

Geet softly says I'm sorry.

Yash take rajjy with him and close the door.

Rajjy:- all elders are going outside. And we r doing it, this is not right.

Vicky:- y, we r helping them to clear their mis understanding and u blaimg us.

Rajjy:- that rahul is still here and if he .

Dev:- don't worry, he is in deep sleep and nothing will happne to bhabi and bro, from now bhabi is not alone unke sath unke pati aur three devar and threee devrani hain.

Rajjy smiles thanks.

Vicky:- u r most welcome.

Here inside the room maan still looking at outside and said go to ur room.

Geet crying and said it's u who blamed me, who told me I want to reject u but ur brother want to r..but before she can complete the sentence maan turns and said chup. Bilkul chup.

Geet's eye full on tear, maan cam and weep them and said y geet, tum kyuon mujhe maaf maang rehe ho, jab galti meine kya tumpe trust nehi karke, but geet, kal tumne mujhe ek baar hurt kya, par tumhara galti nehi hain , meine jo kya.phele uss.I'm sorry.I'll go from here and never come back to ur life.

Geet couldn't take it more and hold his coller and said har time mujh pe gussa, meine oh kya , meine iye kya, ha, jab dil chaha iha aagye, jab dil chahe iha se chale jaoge. MR Maan singh khurana ,I know it's hurt and bitter truth to accept but let me tell u something u hurt me , atleast u want to listen to me but no u just gave me blame. Y maan ? y?I thought u'lll understand me but no.ek baar socha jo meine kaha oh kitna bari baat hain,mein agar aapke sath rista tor na chahithi toh aise hi tor sakthi thi, itna bari baat nehi kehethi, ek baar aapne mere baat nehi sune, ek baar bhi nehi, kal agar koi kuch bhi kahe toh aap phir aise kehenge. Koi bhi rista without trust nehi chalta , aap boliye iye kaise age bare,aaj jab mein aapse milne aayi, aapko laga meien rista tor ne aayi hoon, u never understand me, neither u'll, u only care for urself, what about me, A relationship is not about only u or me it's about us but …….I never want to marry any one.I want to be independent and still I want to be independent but after I met u I thought u'll help me and u raise my hope but if u not trust me then …….I … cannot leave u neither tolarate or forget that u blamed me , not heard me, neither trust me. Now tell me.

Maan heard her every accusation and said yes u r right,I'm not right for u but I feared to lose u.I cannot see u r leaving me.I know I hurt u , I'm sorry geet.I know only sorry is not enough but trust me ,I never want to hurt u but I'm very possessive about u and ,,

Geet :- aap bataiye kya karu maan, aab ek pal aapke bina nehi rhee jata , pata nehi kyuon, haar pal, haar lamha, sirf aur sirf aapko paas jane ka dil nehi karta.

Maan just look at her and couldn't find any word to console her or say anything or tell her about his feelings almost same.

He just hugged her tightly and said shhh. Kuch mat bolo geet, sab mere galati hain, mujhe sunna chaiye tha.

Geet snaped him and said nehi,

Maan shocked and said nehi, matlab.

Geet:- aapka galati nehi tha, sirf, mujhe bhi smajhana chiaye tha,oh aapke…

Maan:- oh mere koi nehi hain, samjhe tum . and again pull her in his embarace and said geet, I know it's very hard to forget my work but pls give me little time.I'll…..I don't know how to. But trust me …I…..just…….I don't know ……..I cannot loose u.I felt like whenever u go away from me.that day I saw u I just feel u r different from others. I don't know what happen to me , whenever I saw ur eyes I want to drwon there .I lost my self whenever I saw ur eyes, ur innocent yet gorgeous face.I lost my self in u.I cannot live a single moments with out u.

Geet look at maan and speechless then tell him r u trying to impressed me.

Maan look at geet in disbelife and said geet.

Geet look at him but maan just grabbed her more close and said do u think my feelings are not true, it's all false.

Geet:-oh nehi,

Maan: then .

Geet:- I don't know, after yesterday u …….

Maan:-I'm sorry geet.I never mean to hurt u,I feared about something else.I know ,I'm at fault but if u trust me then.

Geet:-I don't know.

Maan:-geet.

Geet removed his hand and turns to leave but maan grabs her hand and pull her forcefully.

Geet's back on maan's chest and maan slide his hand on her slim waist and said I heard enough ,I told u and again tell u that I'm sorry.if u want to punish me then go ahead .I'll give u time.I 'll tell ur parents that I marry u after ur post graduation. Now think, enough time u have.if u any feelings for me then u'll come back to me other wise…….

Maan leave her and said go.I'll talk with our parents , don't worry, no one will blame u.

Geet:-but.

Maan:-I have work geet . now go.

Geet opne the door and runs from there.

Yash and rajjy saw and looks more confused.

Rajjy runs after geet. When yash came and asked maan but maan said nothing , just take care of ur bhabi.I'll be meet u al at night.

That day maan is busy with that land deal then with some time spending in the mandir.

Maan to Shiv jee :- shiv jee, mein kya karu, kaise usse samjhau , mere dil mein kya hain? Pata hain mujhe meine galati kya hain? Uspe trust nehi karke , uski baat nehi sunke. Mujhe phir se uska trust jitna hoga.I'll never let down her trust on me again.

Maan take blessing from shiv jee and goes back to home.

Ranveer and dar jee talking with each other when maan entered the room.

Dar jee said are maan bete, where r u from long time?

Maan:- oh kuch kaam tha.

Ranveer:- abhi sare bacho , Paas ke Radha Krishna ke mandir gaye hain.

Maan:- oh, accha hain, geet bhi.

Ranveer:- ha, geet aur saare bacche.Yash try to call u but u phone switched off from long time.then vicky, dev, rajjy, meera, brij,pari, yash , rahul take geet with them.

Maan heard rahul's name and said rahul.

Ranveer:- yes rahul, btw, his face has bruise .I asked him but he told me nothing but he said u know about it.

Maan:-I. no.I'll talk u later .

Then he runs from there .Ranveer and dar jee said what happne to maan?

Granny came and said love. He falls in love and now after came back from home he want to meet geet but …..

Ranveer:- so my son also falls in love.

Granny:- and geet also. Look how she missed today maan, every time her eyes searching him.

Every one laughs .

Here, at the mandir, every one sit there,then rahul said le'ts go there.

Vicky:- no we here fine.

Pari:- let's go na.

Geet:- tum sab jao mein iha baithi thi hoon kuch der.

Vicky;- but bhabi.

Geet :- don't worry go.

Then they go from there halfheartedly when rahul wickedly smiles.

Here, geet sat there and think her conversation with maan.

Geet to radha krishna:- mein bhi galati kya hain pata hain.I want to say sorry but I feared if he not trust me again.

Maan:- itna hi jaan paye ho mujhe tum.

Geet turns and find maan standing there and breathing heavily.

Geet get up and said aap iha.

Maan looks at geet and said sab kaha hain.

Geet:- paas ke garden mein gaye hain .

Maan hesitate and asked aur oh.

Geet:- yes, he is .

Maan :- hmmmm.

Geet:-Maan I want to come back here tomorrow.

Maan:- nice, kab aana chaoge, bolo.

Geet:- subha.

Maan:-Ok,I'll. But geet cut him and said no,I'll manage.

Maan irritate and said I think aaj jitna time dia tum samajh jaoge but nehi.u want it or not I'll go with u.

Geet:- but.

Maan tunrs and said don't start here at least.

Geet :-hmmmm.

Maaneet take blessign from RadhaKrishna .

Then , maan:- let's go from that side .

Geet:- but.

Maan:- what happen geet?jo bhi kehe raha hoon, usse hi problem hain.

Geet:- nehi aise nehi hain.

Maan:- toh.

Geet:- uha andhera hain , jada uar mujeh dar lagta hain andhere se.

Maan:- geet, mein hoon tumhara sath, aur ek baat iyaad rakho jisse dar lage uska face karo.

Geet:- hmmm.

Maan:- now what do u want now?

Geet:- matlab,

Maan:- well would be mrs geet maan singh khurana u have three option, first go abck to home, second stay here with others, third let's go to that side.

Geet:- hmmm.

Maan:- what hmm?

Geet:-oh.

Here, vicky and others came and shout so, here r the reason . bhabi if u miss too much bro then tell us na. or u informed bro to come here.

Geet blushed and hide behind maan.

Maan whishper now tell me,

Geet:-I want to go with u.

Maan naughtily smiles and said ok.

Yash:- lagta hain bro and bhabi kuch apas mein baat kar rehe hain.

Rahul looks annoyed and turns .

Maan:- nothing , enjoy ur self and take care of my little sister in law.me and geet are leaving.

Pari:- but itni jaldi.

Rajjy:- mein bhi chalti hoon.

Geet:- nehi. Mere matlab tum raho meera aur pari hain.

Maan:- it's ok.

Geet whishper kya ok,

Dev:- go bro , take bhabi with u, we will be back soon. Let's go rajjy, show us some more place.

Rajjy unwillingly go with them.

Maan:- so, don't u have any dear to go with me.

Geet:- aab aapke sath mujhe sara zindegi rehena hain toh daar kaise, aur sab imp baat , ur eyes also give me that trust.

Maan feels shame about his own behavior and said geet, oh I'm. but geet cut him and said ek aur baar agar aap iye kaha toh na.

Maan:- toh aapne mujhe maaf kar dia.

Geet:- ha, but .

Maan:- aab iye but kaha se aaya.

Geet;-I have some fear that amy bein future if u again.

Maan:-I can understand but trust me I'll never repeat any of my mistake and I'll prove myself and u'll trust me more.

Geet:- hmm. Then a little pause and said maan.

Geet:- don't worry.I know u r worried about rahul, baas kalse function start and sangeet, emhendi, haldi and shaadi and tum mere paas, then u r mine forever. Don't take tension.I'm here , ur devar are here. Rahul will not do anything. Trust me.

Geet smiles and said aap car leke aaye han kya.

Maan:- nehi.

Geet:-toh iha aap aaye kaise?

Maan:- don't underestimate maan singh khurana.

Geet:- over confidence.

Maan:- only confidence.

Both reached their home and maan said thanks geet, Geet:- thanks to u also.

Then geet enter the home.

Maan in his mind give me little time.geet.i'll make sure everything will fine.I'll sure make my place in ur heart.

In night, maan makes a call some where .

Next morning, granny asked where is rahul?

Maan:-I don't know.

Granny looks at him and said but he is no where here.

Maan wickedly smiles and leaves the place.

Geet heard it but still doubt about their future.

Maan saw her face and understand her mind condition.

Maan to himself,I'll bring the old geet soon, u'll again trust me.I'll win ur heart.

Precap:-sangeet, mehendi, haldi, shaadi , vidaayi and …….

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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