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Posted: 14 years ago
nice, lovely part.
loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part dear...plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
please update soon dear.... we are all mising this!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
X-mas SPECIAL…. the Bitter Truth…. SS… pls pls pls do leave me some comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi udate soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Keyama!
This is very moving FF...Geet went through so much in 6 years. Keep fighting, Geet!
I'm glad Prem came into her life. Atleast, she experienced true love!
Maan...has very sad life. He thru away the best thing that he had (Geet!). That's why Sameera has not recovered. Pls bring out the secret - why Dadi doesn't like her?
Pls update soon, it's been 4 days!
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
i got the link of the ff just in the afternoon when i started to read it was shatered to c man's undying love for sam...then i thought u were going to make it sam-maan luv....felt the pain geet went thro...she found her true love in prem then shocked again to his death...also feeling sad for maan bcoz he threw away his life for sam and i am sure there is going to b something shocking abt sam...i just feel that there is something fishy abt her treatment......hey pls update soon and also cud u pm me abt the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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intezaar ki seema rekha kya hai ?
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Posted: 14 years ago
I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

***Intezaar***

part 16


Geet calls maan... She wasn't sure exactly what to say. She didn't want maan to be separated from his family because of her. No way. She could never efford that. She belongs to a different family now. Moved on. Khurana khandan have to accept this. They just can't think like this. Maan is the eldest in the family. All his friends and family needs him. If they don't support him in his need then who will.
Geet looks down. And eventually dials the number.

Geet- hi maan....
Maan- hi Geet....

Geet- actually au me...
Maan- bolo...
Geet- me chathi hu ke... Ka Tum Meri aur Imran ki sath khurana mansion me aha sakti ho?
Maan- Geet! You know I can't. Dadi don't even want to see my face.
Geet- you have to try at least. I don't want any problems between you and your family because of me.
Maan- Geet....
Geet- please. I feel guilty. I want to get rid of this.
Maan closes his eyes. He wasn't hasetating but he was scared. He wasn't sure how they will react...
Geet- can you pick me and Imran up?
Maan- sure....


Driving to the khurana mansion...

Imran- pappa....
Maan- bolo...
Imran- I am really exited.
Geet smiles.
Maan- why beta?
Imran- Dadima always cook my favourite. Which I know it's yours.
Geet gives him a glare to be quiet.
Imran shuts him self up.

Maan notices...

Geet and imran walks in flowed by maan. Dadi hugs Geet and then Imran. She was shocked to see maan. She didn't like it.
Dadi- what are you doing here?
Geet- Dadima please.
Savtri looks the other way. She couldn't stand maan. Because of him everything is in a mess... Sh was more then happy that Sammera not getting any better. She hated her to the core. She have spoiled her grandsons life. There was one chance for him to move on with Geet. Even then... She didn't like to think. The deed was done. There are no way you could change the past. But future maybe.
Maan was about to leave Geet holds his hand and drags him in with her.
Maan and Imran sat in the living room while Geet flowed Dadima. She was trying her best to convince.

Geet- Dadima please. Au apki pota hi... I don't want his family to be upset just because of me.
Dadima- beta... He have done a great mistake. If it was one I could have easily forgive him... But it's one after another and every time a life changing mistake. I curse that Sammera.
Geet- please Dadima. Don't say that. He loves her. Hurting her means you hurting him.
Dadima- what kind of love? She is still lost in her dead husband. It's been 7 long years Geet. There are no hope. And him... Still under falls elution. If she cared for him even a tinny bit....
Geet- she is week and need to over come this situation. All she need is support fro maan and maan his family.
Dadima- no! If there are anything els he wants my support in, I will be happy to provide some. But not with Sammera.
Geet- fine... Do that Dadima. But please tell him to come back.
Dadima- no...
Geet- I am feeling guilty Dadima. I feel like it's my fault. Please don't do that. I am in depression enough for Prem...... She stopes. She didn't want to talk about Prem... But she couldn't help it. She just couldn't. Life is unfair for her. And this....
Dadima didn't want to push any further. And she defiantly didn't want her to be upset because of her.
Geet closes her eyes in pain...
Dadima- beta... Don't think like that. Please.
Geet nodes... She was trying her best to control the tears.
Dadima wasn't sure what to say...
Dadima- he can move in...
Geet gave her a force smile and ran in to the washroom. She didn't want imran to ask why his mama crying.

After 30 minute Geet walks out... Imran was playing with maan.
Geet- Imran....
Imran- mama.... He runs up to her jumping on her lap.
Geet- we have to go now.
Imran- can we stay few more minute please.
Geet- no beta. Apki shiv papa and Dadima will be waiting for you.
Imran- per mujce maan papa ki sath rehna hi.
Geet- Imran... Don't argue with mama.
Imran nodes he didn't want to make geet upset. He hugs her resting his head on geets shoulder.
Geet- we have to go maan. I have spoken to Dadima. Everything will be fine.
Maan- thanks.
Geet smiles...
Maan- shall I drop you...
Geet- no... It's ok. I have rang home. They sending me my car.
Maan- ok....
Geet- just talk to Dadima she will be ok.

Geet smiles and disappears....

Geet arrives home. Imran was sleep on her arm.
Gauri- how was it?
Geet- I managed to convince Dadima. Hopefully everything will be alright. I didn't want to feel guilty.
Gauri- it's not your fault geet.
Geet- I know... But I really don't want to feel responsible.
Gauri smiles... Taking Imran and both walks towards imrans bedroom.
Gauri- how is Sammera? Are there any sign if improvement?
Geet- I really don't know. I am not sure actually. He never talk about it that much.
Gauri- I hope she is alright!
Geet- yea...
Gauri- I think you should keep Imran way from him.
Geet- I was thinking the same. He is becoming to close. I really don't want that.
Gauri nodes.
Geet- I was thinking taking 2-3 weeks off and go to holiday.
Gauri- I think that's a great idea.
Geet- it will be nice for the children to.is Shive free?
Gaur- I will ask him tonight. Hopefully....


next- holiday plan… geet had to cancel on the last minute… what she will do???? stay here in deli with maan while everyone go to holiday… or she should go with them???


hay you all… :D well what should geet do??? stay with maan or with her family???

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sorry for late updates. well I LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS. PLS PLS PLS do leave some mre lovely comments… and do say what geet should do… i might update another later today

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