MAYUR FF...The Lost Magic.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

nice part.... thx for the pm.... waitin for the next part... dont forget to pm me....

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Jaee Dev Rathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

I don't what to say - you are just outdoing yourself ... It was beautiful, the glimpse of lost magic; the mutual understanding; giving space to confidence; the pure care and love - everything was just marvelous ...

But what's with the cockroaches - I hater them!!

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Radha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

amazing part!!
superb!!
especially loved the lines 'she is just like a candle, u give her warmth and she will melt. u leave her alone and she will become stiff and hard..'
even i hate cockroaches!!
waiting for next part..
cont soon😊

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

Awesome part!! It was nice to see them trying to bring back that lost magic. Nupur admiring Mayank's smile, Mayank putting ointment on her, Nupur listening to Mayank and not going to work....it was all so sweet and it shows they are trying.

Mayank's gentle voice is her weakness....wow!! Mayank should use this voice more often...

"Bechara samrat!" -lol, it was too funny and then her reaction to it.

Cockroaches at the end!!! Lol, looking forward to see Mayank rescuing Nupur from the cockroaches...I guess we'll see some close moments during the great rescue!! 😊

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katherine123

@katherine123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

dat ws very well written .............jst loved it!

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#236

superb update Mehak!

loved it to the core

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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-Symphony-

@-Symphony-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

cockroaches😆😆LOL..even i am scared of them.

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

Awesome...amazing update Mehak..👏👏
I just got lost in them...

M..hmmm..so Mrs Sharma has entered the kitchen and she is welcomed by cockroaches..
🤣🤣🤣

Good one..😆

Cont soon..😊

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#239

aww.. mahek!!!!
part 7...... utterly cute!!!!!!!!!
mayu.. is such a sweet heart...
i soooooo luvd it!!!!!!!!!!
& i'm very much excitd 4 mrs. sharma's reaction on cockroaches!!!!!!
do update soon!

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#240

M..God!, she is just like a candle, u give her warmth and she will melt..*smile fading away*, u leave her alone and she will become stiff and hard..

kya dialogueeeeeeee

love it.........cont son

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