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Posted: 14 years ago
omg😲😲😲😲😲 i cant bliv wen raj was introduced i hated him so much i thot he wud cum between maneet ...........bt i was so wrng ......musky u r amazing wat twist 👏👏👏👏


😆😆😆😆😆😆😆i was waiting for this moment since long finally finally she knws MSK .........😔 bt wer did he cheat her nd wats der in name why so much of anger .......i so wanted to see geet reaction nd knew she will react llyk this only 😆😆😆

geet has manofy maan 100 of times bt i guess this is maan's turn why is he showng anger he shud understnd her poor gal shock pe schock she got in this cast away 😆.......wud love love to see maan gng behind her evrywer 😍😍😍😍

this was amazing update 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update di...
All the cries & pleas & hunger strikes were worthwhile...
Gosh I never realised wen I got so addicted... But now I cant see a way out... TM rocks...
Maaneet part was really cute...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow................... i m loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
pls update soon..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh luved d way maan is teasing geet
bt precap is a bit ahummmmmmmmm
maan missing geet
y did he hv 2 b angry on her
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Posted: 14 years ago
I hope Geet don't go with Maan..Maan told her that he love her..let see how they stay without seeing eachother..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

-truly magical-
part 58

they reach the army hosptial near the border.
Next day morning geet lieing on the bed,
Dr. naina checking her, raj walks in smiling at the ladies
dr naina - good morning capt
he smiles delightfully - goodmorning dr.singh
geet jumps up - aap naina ho
raj smiles inwardly
naina - geet right!!, raj ki gudiya soni ki pudiya and kissed her forhead
geet smiled weakly - raj aab to mama papa ko bata do naina ki bare main
you promised this time u will
raj - hain baba I will, aab tone bhi aapna mr.perfect dhond liya hain
geet ignored the last part
naina looking into geets reports - waise umm..ko hosh aagaya hain
& he was asking for u
geet was curious to know how maan was but did'nt want to show it
she looked at raj - mujhe ghar jana hain
raj - I thought u will say u want to meet Maan Singh Khurana
geet - i don't know any Maan Singh Khurana
raj - teehk hain waise he is getting discharged in 1hr & will be flying back to delhi
geet pretended to ignore that
raj - mama se baat karloo bahut worried hain
geet - aur papa
raj - don't ask, I just managed some crap, ki college camp se u got lost & all
geet hugged him & thanxed him
raj - waise I like this Maan singh Khurana
naina - kyun na ho aapki naukri jo bajgayi unki wajah se
geet looked at them confused

naina - raj ka court marshal order nikal gaya tha for shooting at Maan
geet why did u shoot at him
raj kept quite looking down
naina - he felt maan was trying to
geet promptly - nahi woh aise nahi kar rahen the..hum tho
naina & raj smiled inwardly
geet - u risked ur carrer for me
raj kissed her forehead
naina - lekin today the higher offical came to take Maan's statement
& he said raj was firing at some terrorist & woh bech main aagayen
geet eyes felt a burning sensation, tears forming , she looked away sniffling
raj held geets hand - after they all left, he thanxed me for saving u both & said
I understand, agar main bhi tumhare situation main hota to shayad yahi karta
geet calls rano
rano - mera bacha kaise hain
geet started to cry sorry mama
rano - its ok ...jaldi ghar aajvoo
geet umm
rano - take care, raj ko phone dena na
raj - ji aunty
rano - tumne papa ko sab samjha diya na
raj - ji
rano - bahut gussa ho rahe the
raj - abhi worry kar rahen honge
both of them smile & latter hang up the call
I will take u home latter in the evening
she huggs him & says buy to naina

geet sneaks out of her room & sees where maan was, she noticed few guards
gaurding a room, she knew it was him, she mumered Maan Singh Khurana & twisted her
lips, mujhe nahi bataya, aur main unhe hi unke bare main bol rahi thi.
he was just having fun listening to me blaber about Maan. mujhe nahi baat karne unse
she comes back to her room & restlessly ..lekin ek bar dehk leti ki teehk hain to tasali hojati
she walks into the room the guards stop her. sorry maam this VIP room u cannot enter
without permission from higher ups. geet mumers woh aab unse milne ki liya
mujhe permission leni pataghi, sab jaan buhje ke kar rahen hain. just trying to show
off. I am also Geet Handa dehkti hoon how can they stop me.
she goes into the nurse room & changes into a nurse attire & takes a tray with
medication & injections walks confidently into his room. he was working on his
laptop. he very well knew it was her. he just played along. she bend her head hiding her
face with the tray. there were few senior officers speaking to him & taking down some notes
maan thanxed then for all their help.
maan - i just send the mail as per ur requirement, is there any thing else
officer - no sir thanx a lot
geet pretended to keep the tray next to him on the table
she peeped to look at the bandage on his shoulder & felt bad. she wiped her tears &
turned to leave, he held her hand under the spread. she looked at him in shock. he was looking
at the officers & smiling them a good bye. she stuggled to let go softly as the officers
where just leaving. after they just walked out


maan - ho gaye tasali
she angryly snapped her hand
maan - naraz ho
geet - why will I be
he was taken a back
geet - I don't have any thing do with Maan Singh Khuaran
maan held her hand again & pulled her to fall on his chest - aur aapne bachne ke saat
she melted into his embrace fanning his chest with her irregular breath & then suddenly
she had that jhota gussa on her face & sits up at next to him - u are not my bachan
u are some Maan Singh Khurana, I don't know u & I don't love u aur main aapki GF bhi nahi
maan smiled - so u love ur bachan
she was cornered - I hate u. she takes his phone & delets her number
don't ever call me.
maan - XXX-XXX-9999 pointing at his heart yanha bhi lika hain isse kaise
delet karoghi.
geet looks at his chest & keeps looking at him. pulls his dress back closing his
buttons, pata hain work out karte ho, show off kyun kar rahen ho.
aap ko to bus bahan chahiye aapna numaish karne ka
BTW i am changing my number...to yah problem bhi solve ho jayega.
she gets up to leave
maan - waise maine suna thi ki bachan loves u
geet turns to look him delightfully this was the first time he had said some thing
so direct, he looks away making a mocking face. geet puts a gussa & baby face

& walks towards the door..babaji bachan hi aache thena..yeh kya kardiya aapne, unhe maan
kyun banadiya..
maan comes infront of her..she bumps into him..feels herself lost in
his closeness, all those cuddling up in the sleeping bag just flashes back in her
mind with butterflies her stomach.
maan - waise babaji ne kuch nahi kiya, tumne hi mujhe bachan banya tha
geet - aap mujhe bata sakte the
maan - I told u so many times
geet - nahi nahi nahi..u cheated me, I hate u I hate u & I hate u bus
maan hugs her I like u hating me also...
her hand invariable slips into his back snaking him
then suddenly she pulls out - I hate u.. & I am not ur GF..don't hug me..
maan smiled at her
she tries to leave he holds her back..waise main kuch hi deer main delhi
jaa rahoon
geet - janti hoon
maan - so thats why u came to see me
geet - nahi bitting her tounge
maan - mera saat chaolghi nahi
geet - nahi..main Maan ke saat kanhi nahi jaavongi
he turns her hand further - aur aapne bachan ke saat
geet - chodo mujhe..main ne kaha na I hate u
he gets angry & leaves her at once. she runs to her room & cries

precap
maan missing geet
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan

nice update plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
atlast u updated.... awesome part... loved it...Geet is cat on a wall... i love tat....i was thinking....Raj wud be in trouble bfore positng ma question to u but now got cleared...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reading this before the PM....lolz.....nice part! So Raj and Naina are also together.....Geet's friends are fast.....she was the only one single all these days.....but not anymore.....lolz. Geet and Maan both angry.....lolz....interesting! Do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskan i was so excitd 4 ths update, u wrote it so wel, atlast she knows who is msk, i thought is jhalli ko shadi ke baad pata chalega! Hi! Hi! Hi!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it dear
waiting for the next part

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