Maneet ff:~A Drink~ UPD: pg 59,60 - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeee the part.
Continue soonnn.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
awww geet and maan r so close
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really interesting, love the way u r bringing them together!!😊 Plz add me to the PM list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys!! here is another update!! love all of u for commenting!! MUAZ!!

Part 5: Kya hua? Kaise hua?

She had drifted off to sleep. He looked at her smiling.

She needed the rest, he thought.

After a while he saw her shift, and move and furrow her eyebrows in her sleep.

He went over to her and he sat beside putting her head on his shoulder.

She snuggled closer to him clutching his arm.

He saw this and was a bit surprised because she never did anything of that sort ever. But he never thought she would do something like that even in her sleep.

"All humans aren't Saints" he said smirking while he looked at her peaceful expression.

He continued to study''.when it was 2:00 am he decided to stop.

He sat there thinking resting his head on hers'.

He was overwhelmed that she could finally sleep in peace, he hoped that she would think about it and come with him. She was a very special friend now, and he wanted her to live a stable and happy life.

'''''

She woke up, and felt her head moving up and down slowly, almost as if''''..

"OH NO!" she thought as she glanced over to a sleeping Maan.

Her head was on his chest and his was leaning back on the couch's.

She looked at him smiling now'..he was soo caring. Before, she had thought that he was one of those selfish, stuck-up snobs but now she had seen a very different man'..she blew on his face''''..

She giggled as she watched his twitch.

Then she suddenly stopped herself.

"NO! stop it Geet, what are you doing?" she said to herself.

"This can't be you cannot do this!!!!!! He is a friend who cares. You have responsibilities, you don't have time for this. Time for WHAT?? When there isn't anything" she said fighting with herself.

She sighed closing her eyes'..she saw the man from her dreams he was moving away she ran towards him and quickly hugged him from the back. He turned back and OH MY!!! It was Maan??

She opened her eyes breathing heavily as she met a pair of eyes she knew well.

"Thank God you got some sleep!" he said smiling.

"Huh? How did I fall asleep?" she asked still blinking trying to make the image go away, the thought disappear but it didn't instead it replaced the image with a real life standing form of Maan'.

"Like how every normal human does" he said smirking.

"Funny eh?" she said pouting.

"Very'.I'm hilarious, actually I'm AWESOME!!" he said winking.

She smirked.

"So c'mon let's go eat breakfast" he said.

"Thank god you woke me up I have work today!" she said blinking.

They sat at the table as Arvin their very old and most trusted employees served them. Geet looked at the dining room. Correction HALL! It was a huge room with a 20 seated dining table made from pure wood. The hall was red and had many dangling lights.

It was a very beautiful mansion. And she felt out of place.

"Maan I will leave now thanks" she said getting up.

He pulled her wrist to sit back down'

"No, finish breakfast besides you don't have work until 4 hours relax it's only 8:00 am" he said smiling.

"But I'.."

"Shhhhhh" he said placing a finger on her lips.

She froze and again the buzzing in her body started as soon as he touched her.

He chuckled seeing her widened eyes and a shocked expression.

"So what have you decided?" he asked casually.

"Maan I don't know yet" she shouted from inside her room.

He waited for her to come out as she was getting ready for work.

"Geet you better decide I don't even know why you're thinking about it. You will get more than what you have here" he said frowning.

She came out rushing she quickly grabbed her bag.

"No Maan it's not that simple, I have started working here'my life is stable here"

"Stable??? Look at you Geet!! Something's clearly wrong" he said walking closer.

She looked down tears in her eyes.

"Don't cry I didn't mean to''I'm sorry it's just that I care about you!" he said picking he hands up and caressing them with his thumbs.

She was tingly again. His touch made her jittery and mixed up. She removed her hands away slowly.

He leaned in closer and he raised his hands.

She had that horrified expression. What was he doing?!

His scary expression changed into a playful smirk as he fixed her collar.

"That's the way we do it" he said winking.

She laughed'.

"You are one of a kind aren't you?" she said smiling.

"C'mon let's go you'll be late. Or else you'll blame me" he said taunting.

She turned to glare at him.

When she looked ahead he smiled loving her expressions.

She sat in her room thinking how her life had changed since he came into her life'''why couldn't God just leave him out. Turn everything back to normal. Why did it sting when he took other girls home with? Why did she avoid looking in the direction he danced with other girls? WHY? Why did people have to barge in and then leave to go to India'''.

She sat frustrated'

Today she had served someone rice when they asked for noodles'these small distractions bothered her.

And it was because of him.

When he had asked her if she would go with him she was scared. Scared f she let someone come this close to her she might break'''''

Why now she wanted to rest on his shoulder forever?

Pyaar hua ikraar hua hai

Pyaar se phir kyun darta hai dil

The song played in her mind again and again.

"STOP!!!" she shouted covering her ears.

"I CAN"T LOVE HIM!!!! I DON"T HAVE A RIGHT" she shouted to herself.

She then started to sob'

She closed her eyes again'

Now she saw the man lead her towards an open garden, there were blossoms everywhere'.she was running and he chased after her. He caught her waist and spun her around.

He then leaned in to kiss her and it was him again.

"Maan" she said opening her eyes'.

"I LOVE YOU!!" she said as a tear slipped down her cheek.

PRECAP:

"Geet this is choco-mint, you hate that flavor what's wrong with you?" he asked concerned now.

She looked at him dazed.

"I think we should go to the hospital" he said worried'.

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Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
and here i thought the I love u was gonna be for real😆, so much for scanning the end b4 end, but yea knew it was to early for that!!! Loved it OMG the way u described them sleeping..adorable!! loved it!!!! and just loved how Maan is soo caring and Geet developing feelings for him and making silly mistakes loving it!!! keep it up bf, muah!!😉
Edited by desigirl_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww geet's in love
Edited by kellz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
loved this part!!!
they are soooo cute!!
please continue sooooooon!
thanks,
Sanju
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update...
so now geet is clear abt her feelings.. when maan will realize 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow so geet finally understood she loves him
hope she agree to his proposal
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part
geet is so in love
but i think her past should be revealed now.. its like she is hiding some big, dark secret
con't soon!

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