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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

sweet update

bechara benji.....mayank ia soooo cute yaar


awww thank u!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely Update dear.
Thanks for Update and Best of Luck for Your exams.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Lovely Update dear.
Thanks for Update and Best of Luck for Your exams.


Awww Thank U Soo Much!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Very interesting intros of all the characters. Looking forward to reading the entries soon:) Again I loved the way u made all the characters so cheery and happy:) Excellent job Annie, I can keep on praising u yaar👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Rocks

Very interesting intros of all the characters. Looking forward to reading the entries soon:) Again I loved the way u made all the characters so cheery and happy:) Excellent job Annie, I can keep on praising u yaar👏


Awww And Can Keeep On Thanking U For Ur Lovely Comments..U Cheer Me Up! Really!
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Posted: 14 years ago
dia sushil nd gharalu...........yeh joke tha kya............superb update...........love mayank benji part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

dia sushil nd gharalu...........yeh joke tha kya............superb update...........love mayank benji part

Hahha thanks for commenting
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys here the update goes
now
as u know
reshma aunty has arrived the station
and now
benji sees her
goes and hugs her
benji:maa...
reshma:mera beta...kitne yaad ate the tu aur gunjan..
benji:ap bhi..
reshma:haye..mera bacha..kitna dubla ho gaya hai..kuch khata peeta nahi hai kya..haye iss mumbai neh tera yeh haal banaya hai toh gunjan ko toh dhancha hi bana dia hoga...
benji:maa relax karo..aur yeh samrat
samrat:pranam aunty..
and bows to take ahirwaad
reshma:jeete raho beta..haye kitna sanskaari larka hai..benji kuch seekh..aise milte hain bado se...
samrat:safar kaisa tha aunty..aane mein koi masla toh nahi hua?
reshma:nahi beta......sab theek se ho gaya.....ab ghar chale?
benji:han maa chalo...
now cut to the house
nupur:sab tayar hai na..
mayank:han...
nupur:aur tum?
mayank:main bhi!
nupur:dia kahan hai..
dia:main yahan hoon dii...
everyone sees dia..she is in mini skirts
nupur:hey bhagwan aaj keh din toh nangi na ghoomti..kuch toh pehen le besharam teri saas aa rahi hai...
dia:its fashion dii..
nupur:oho..fashion dekh dia kuch acha pehen roz toh dress pehenti thi..aj aik dam se itni choti skirt chee chee chee...
mayank:kuch nahi hota nupur..achi toh lag rahi hai is mein kya hai..
dia:sach jiju...awww..thank u soo much..
nupur:achi toh lag rahi hai magar...
mayank:dekho nupur..dia aisi hi hai...aur aunty ko dia ko aise hi accept karna hoga..isse badal keh accept nahi karna hoga...
nupur:janti hoon..phir bhi
dia:relax di..i am sure woh aise kuch nahi kahe gi...
nupur:i hope so...
mayank:main bhi...
gunjan:guys...i am quite sure keh maa kuch nahi kahe gi....
now they hear a car horn
and rush there...
and reshma is here...
now
gunjan goes and hugs her tightly
gunjan:maa! i missed u soo much..
reshma:maine bhi...
gunjan:ap neh apna khayal rakha na...
reshma:han..aur tune apna aur apne bhai ka khayal rakha na?
gunjan:han maa..rakha...
reshma:chal ab rulaye gi kya..bas kar
she finishes the hug ri8 there...
and now she moves forward
dia:namaste aunty!
she bows and takes her ashirwaad
reshma:beta tum dia ho na..
dia:ji aunty...
reshma:kisi ki nazar na lage..kitni sunder ho..
dia:thank u aunty...woh actually aunty benji neh apse jhoot bola tha keh main gharelloo sunder susheel types larki hoon...
reshma:toh is mein jhoot kya tha han..gharello na sahi tum sunder aur susheel toh ho na...
dia:awww thanks again aunty...
reshma:betiyan thanks nahi kehti ...
dia hugs her
dia:love u aunty...
reshma:love u too beta..
everyone smiles seeing both of them
now cut to inside
reshma:safar lamba tha leikin yahan aa kar main aik dum fresh feel kar rahi hoon..
dia:aisa kyun?
reshma:dill khush ho gaya tum sab ko dekh kar...
benji:phir manti ho keh nahi maa..meri choice ko?
reshma:maan gayi beta...dia hai hi itni achi...aur samrat bhi..yeh dono toh bilkul waise nikle jaisa maine socha...
benji:toh maa..kya ap engagements keh liye tayar ho???
reshma:han han beta kyun nahi!
benji:maa..waise main soch raha tha keh agar dono sagaiyan aik hi din ho toh...
reshma:koi baat nahi beta..mujhe koi aeitraaz nahi..
benji:OMG love u maa...
reshma:love u too...acha ab mujhe bohot neend aa rahi hai main chalti hoon han
benji:aiye maa main apko apka kamra dikhata hoon...
reshma:chal!acha bacho...
everyone:ok aunty..bye!
reshma:bye
now everyone leave for their houses
@sayank place
samrat and mayank lying on their beds
mayank:waise chotte...tujhe koi excited feeling nahi aa rahi?
samrat:aa rahi hai..actually mere sar mein bohot dard ho raha hai!
mayank:kya sar mein dard
he sits
he checks samrat's forehead for fever
mayank:kahi bukhar toh nahi ho raha na tujhe..tabhyet theek haina...
samrat:han bhai tabyet theek hai...woh shayad subah se kaamo mein laga hua hoon na issi liye..
mayank:toh kitni baar kaha hai rest kiya kar...aise har waqt kaam karna teri sehet keh liye acha nahi hai chotte...
samrat:acha bhai..ayenda se nahi karoon ga ab khush..
mayank:kya khush..mere bhai keh sar mein dard hai aur main khush hoon..ruk main tere liye dawai le kar aya...
he goes and brings tablets and water
mayank:chotte uth aur yeh dawai kha jaldi...
samrat sits..
mayank gives him the medicine
mayank:dekh..ajkal excited beshak ho...leikin bimar na hona...please...
samrat:kyun
mayank:kyunke agar tu bimar padh gaya toh dulhe keh baghair engagement achi nahi lage gi..
mayank:abe tu baitha kyun hai chal wapis let ja han...
he makes him ly again
and now lys with him
and gently moves his hand through his hair...
samrat:bhai...
mayank:ssshhh...subah baat kare ge..ab tu so jayega...ok?
samrat:ok!
mayank:chal ab acha bacha ban ..aur so jaa..warna main tujhe aik typical bada bhai ban kar dikhaoon ga...
samrat:bhai...
mayank:kaha na so jaa... chal ab mujhe teri ankhein khuli hui na dikhe ab bandh kar jaldi..aur so jaa...
samrat:ok
he closes his eyes
and sleeps
mayank switches the side lamps off
and goes back to his bed
and sleeps!



ok guys that was enough for today
hope u loved it
do rate and comment
do share ur views/comments/suggestions/ideas with me
precap:a day before engagement!
sherwani and lehenga selection!
thanks for reading,
love,
annie

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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update love the bonding between two brothers
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aancchal

very nice update love the bonding between two brothers

Thank u !!

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