New AR ff:Everything You Want*Pt11*20|5.Pg35 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear,
nice concept.
nice part........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi Dear How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one so got lift and its like she ordering him going to be fun plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Nidha


me ok a little busy with exams still writing to satisfy myself,well i may write one more part n after that i write after my exams
thanks,she will be ordering help like always
i like ur cats too😆
swetha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: soul_desire

hey dear,

nice concept.
nice part........
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hey sonu
thanks
yeah sure will add u in the list
will try to update soon next part
swetha
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nyc swe😃😃😃add me in ur pm list plzz😃😃
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awesome start....cont. soon and do add me to your pm list....

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thanks priya,
yeah sure will add u
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awesome start....cont. soon and do add me to your pm list....


thanks,yeah will continue soon
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nice part
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Part 2
So sitting inside the car he smelled a musky odor emitted from her beaver suit which reminded him of his school locker room, so he pulled down the window couple of inched before they are on road
"So where are we off too?" he asked
"Go straight from here till u see a muddy road" she said fanning her self
She is sweating footballer on the ground, so he turned AC on
"Are there a lot of opportunities in beaver work?" he asked sounding amused
Her mocking look said that she knows how much entertaining he found the situation is "I was doing some promotion to the Hotel over High Way to attract Kids, okay? His business down lately or I was told so"
"Okay" he silenced himself seeing the seriousness in her face
"Every Weekend the owner tries to hire someone to stand out on high way with sign "welcome" to attract the people, I am his new fool coming to stand out two weeks in a row" she said sounding indifferent of the situation
"Where is the sign, Never mind You must left it with your beaver suit head" he said trying to make her become normal
"I could hardly walk back in town with that" she said irritated
Finally seeing her back herself, he thought as if walking with a beaver suit is no difficult
"I didn't see any car parked there, How did get in first place?" he asked
"The owner wife drops me n she should come an hour ago to pick me back but she didn't when I am figuring out the way to go, I saw a loser with his latest obsession" she said like a super fast express
"You're Boyfriend?" he asked
"Ex-Boyfriend" She said clearing him n herself
"The one you are going to murder"
"Pretend that you don't know anything, I don't want to leave proofs behind me"
"If I drive to crime sight, do I be help for u?"
"You want to be?"
"Sure, why not" he turned his new pajero car to bumpy muddy road, thanks to beaver girl without the name
"That's the one with sign TO-LET" she said
He saw girl quite short n lots of makeup quite opposite to the beaver girl by his side, sitting on the bike as if driving it
"That must be Maya, Summit's latest loser obsession, me being her predecessor" she said searching for some other
Then came out a person with quite artistic looks, totally nerdy, unexpected taste of this girl side of him, he stopped in his track seeing a new car with confused look n joined with his already confused new loser obsession
Armaan took his time to come out n go to the girl side n open door for her, quite a royal treatment for a murderer but unfortunately her tail came in between her legs making her loose balance n fall flat on her face at his feet.
Quite a lot damage to image he wanna built up
"Riddhima" he heard the nerdy one say, so finally he gotta know her name, Riddhima, different in name too
"That's Riddhima?" said the girl beside him n continuing "Is she a clown or what?"
"Not the last time I saw her" summit said honestly which sounded funny to others especially riddhima, he turned his attention to Armaan from Riddhima who is trying to come back on floors without help asked "who are you?"
"Loved by some, feared by many" he said with strong attitude that made summit step back
Riddhima who is finally back on to the floor started saying "Kutte,Kaminey,Sand,kan kajure,dhoke bhaj'" started her nonstop hindi mixed Punjabi ghaliyan astonishing summit along with armaan,armaan stayed back to see how the beaver girl handle it
"maine jhoot nahi kaha hain Riddhima, maine sab kuch letter main bol diya" summit said backing step by step
"woh letter,jab mujhe mila tab maine teen clients ko reject karke, shahar chodke isiliye wapis aayi, kyon ki ek aadmi roj mujhe phone karke ro kar bata ta ki, main hi uski sabse achi dost aur uske zindagi ka ek hi aurat, n in that bloody damn letter u said that now u don't have any need of me n you have fallen with some bewakoof ladki, which is also saying me I shouldn't meet you as u don't want to talk to me in person" she said walking step by step which summit left all in a flow making armaan praise for the speed n managing Hindi n English n mixed one so well, she is definitely one jungle billi, now getting the exact idea how she got the loser
"Summit is right, u are a sound box" Maya said defending summit
"You don't even know me" Riddhima said
"Summit told me everything that you are jealous of his work n groW*H, n so he wants to be far away from u"
"But he writes projects for college students who are too lazy to write their own" said riddhima confused about what is there to get jealous
Armaan guessed guilty look on maya face that she met him in the same way, wow great twist, how I wish to have popcorn now
"You are right summit, she is poisonous" said maya infuriating riddhima making armaan say "masala" popcorn
"you said her I am poisonous, if I am so poisonous why can't u write one poem since u left manali n came to this deserted rajasthan" riddhima asked summit
"It is before he met me, now I am his inspiration" said without giving summit chance to talk
"You just met him two weeks ago"
"A hearts knows when it meets its soul mate" said in a dramatic way keeping her hands on heart
"Crap mate is more likely to say"
"That's cruel, there is no wonder all summit said about u is true that u are jealous and'"
"If u spoke another word, maa kasam main tumhari gala daba dungi"
This maya is getting on Armaan's nerves too, there is no wonder he saw the reaction from the beaver girl, too bad to see maya shutting her mouth as he want to see riddhima pressing her neck
"I know you are upset but some day u will be happy for me, I am not fighting with you, you always turns everything in to fight" said summit finally but being a stupid than he ever been, saying an ex-girlfriend that she will be happy to see him happy
"You do fight, riddhima" said maya gaining support
This more than anything riddhima can bear n the next moment u see summit on floor with a thud n riddhima beating the hell out him with her beaver suit paws n he crying like sissy for his glasses
"I paid for those glasses" said riddhima
"Get off him" said maya
"You're crazy" said summit
Armaan enjoying the show a way too much than he actually should leaning against his pajero, he never enjoyed any show this much than the last 30 seconds of final match of the season
"You broke my glasses" said summit seeming like he was about to cry
"First you're glasses n now your head" said riddhima blowing out the hair coming in front of her
Finally being a man, summit pushed riddhima from him n said "I am going to arrest for beating me"
Armaan could take any more n walked forward slowly, the walk itself gained some kind of impression for him with his strong muscles make work easy which were coming out the white folded shirt he wore along with blue faded jeans. He is certain he made an impression A Knight In Shining Armor already for summit n maya as they are afraid to walk to them while riddhima still blowing out the hair instead of using the her beaver paws which may hurt her pretty beautiful natural face
"You are the witness" summit managed to say
"All I saw is one more reason we're not inviting you for our wedding" he made his way to riddhima's side wrapped his arm around her shoulders n gazed fondly in to her Almond green eyes which are a way too big with shock "I am sorry sweet heart I should have listened u when u said he doesn't deserve a invitation to our wedding. Next time remind me to trust your judgment. But u should have changed your costume before coming here. It is not really any one's business what we do in our room"
He hadn't thought he could surprise riddhima much but he thinks he managed it
"You're marrying Riddhima" summit spoke first of three
"Who would have thought she would have me" he made his way to waist which is covered with fur but nevertheless he could feel her skin
There is nothing any one can say after that

P.S:As i already said it is a taking from a book,it is a Non Desi book,i made certain changes to make it look Desi one,so dont expect shaadi n all here,also i am writing this, coz i thought it is a pretty good one with fun element scenes which made feel this characters while i am reading, so wanna write it n share it with u,i also edit most of the parts which gives a lot explanation of many other characters n their lives which wont be that fun to add here n also there are some 18+ things,wanna know whether i can write it or not here,also will say the name of the book in the end n credit it
also plzz comment n criticize,it make me feel better that it is worth giving a shot,if not i will close writing it
Swetha😊

Edited by bary - 14 years ago

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