Maaneet scenes(FF)-Thread 2-Update p.145(3/2)

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#781

nice update.. maan speaking to the baby was cute.....continue soon

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#782

wow so finally maan found a way to tell geet things wch he knows she will not follow if maan tells her and loved whn geet turned the tables towards maan

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: sharmishtha01
Sweet One. 😊

Thanks sharmi.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#784

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

Opti, thanks. Good one. Maan is really sweet. He keeps doing things for her. I would now like Geet to do something for Maan. I know it is your FF but since you are the one who writes so well, no harm in putting in a small request.

Will look forward to the next one. take care

usha

Yes, Maan seems to be doing more for Geet than Geet for Maan. I've planned something big that she will do for Maan, but that will take time as I want to first cler a few pending things before I go on to that.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: zahra15
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aarthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#786

opti me loving it again... Geet is getting more smarter than Maan turning the table...want more baby papa scene

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: zahra15
coming 2 the update...nice prt.....luvd how geet played along wiz maan weh he was giving her those passionate looks....
....luvd the following lines:

Whenever she overworks herself and you, you give her a nice hard kick on her tummy so that she is reminded that you are around and she needs to take care of your interest too."

.......how nice wud it b if the baby really kicked her...maan wud b so happy that the baby wud have listened 2 him........continue soon.....

....zahra....

Geet knows how to make her man hyperventilate. It is too early for Geet to feel the baby kicks but the kicks will come in due course.

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553993

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Posted: 14 years ago

#788

OH MY GOD OPTI

what a sweetttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt update

Maan such a darling

love this line I'm really feeling hungry.....

chooooooooooooo swetttttttttttttttttt

this is called swettttttttttttt &cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee update:D

love it

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Esha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#789

Really nice update Opti....I esp. liked the way u showed small happenings like belching and drooling in sleep.In general we don't give much thought to such small things in FFs...that happen in everyday life. We generally will be under the illusion that our imaginary characters are much above these small functions of body and they're not effected by them.But that will not be the case.Its just that we don't think of them in the lines of belching,snoring,drooling or any other such......but I liked your attention to such things and the way u showed them as a normal part of life is sweet.I also liked the fact u depicted through Maan's actions towards Geet that We don't have to be embarrassed about such things when we're with our loved ones.

All the Maaneet scenes were nice....Geet is understanding Maan much better now...and Maan is taking care of her as always....liked his concern for Geet n baby's health....and his admonishing is cute....

And yeah I wanted to ask u why haven't u yet decided a title for this wonderful FF?Is there any special reason?

Edited by esha143 - 14 years ago