FAN FIC-RISHTEY-FINAL PART pg.71-3/13 - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz continue soon dat waz awesome šŸ‘
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plz cont. it was just great
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JOSHS PLAYED BY THE ONE THAT WAS KILLED IN KAISA YEH PYAAR HAI

Part twelve


Angad stood up and was about to leave when kripa caught his hand.

Kripa-angad tum suna nahin chate ho?

Angad in disbelief nods his head.

Kripa-to phir suno

SIX MONTHS AGO

Kriap(narrating)-in college there was a guy named josh, we became good friends, and how our friendship changed into love I don't know. We were going to tell our parents that we loved each other and wanted to get married, we had a month left till college was over.

It was a Saturday night, and it was joshs birthday, and we all went to his house, since he lived alone. Josh was from a middle class family and I didn't care and I knew my parents wouldn't care either.

Well we were all enjoying the party then around eleven-everbody left. I stayed back to help josh clean. Josh had drunken too much and that's when the real him came out.

He took the garbage bag from my hand and threw it on the floor he then grabbed my arms and said.

Josh(drunk)-kripa main tumse pyaar nahin karta, main to sirf tumhare pasy(money) sai pyaar karta hoon. I was going to divorce you after marriage and take half of your money.

Hearing this I slapped josh and ran to the door, he also ran quickly to the door and locked it. He then threw me on couch and held my arms and started kissing my neck. I was able to free one of my hands. I grabbed a beer bottle and smashed it on his head. He let go of me and instantly fell on the floor. I quickly picked up my duppata and ran out of the door.

I ran downstairs and saw arjun there, he saw what bad shape I was in. I ran to him and gave him a tight hug and started crying. I told him that josh tried to rape me. He was about to go and beat him, when I stopped him.

BACK TO THE PRESENT

Kripa(crying)-angad josh tried to rape me and tabse mere vishwas pyaar se nahin hai

Angad was buring in anger over what josh did to his kripa. He gave kripa tight hug, now kripa was crying even harder in his arms.

Angad-kripa I'm sorry. Par mujhe and josh mein bot farke(differences) hain. I love you, he only pretended to love you. Vo ek janwar(animal) hain, aur main insane(human). Kripa main tumse vada karta hoon ke until you love me our relationship will be that of friends, aur main tumhe cewanga(touch) bhi nahin

With that angad took his pillow and blanket and headed for the couch. He layied there thinking of what happened with kripa, and burning with anger over josh.

Kripa on the other hand layied on her bed and started crying. Angad heard her crying.

Angad-kripa don't waste your tears on the person that has hurt you so much, he is an insult to mankind

With that kripa stopped crying and gave angad a sweet smile, and angad gave her a cute smile back. They both then went to bed.

Preview-nainas surprise for all the newlyweds




Edited by kuch kuch hota - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww...poor kripa...but wht an awesome hubby angad is!!! lovely part..pls cont soon.
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wah kya baat hai tum tho jadugar ho please continue karo tumhare fanfic mein jadu hai please continue please continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi i will continue on monday, due to christmas sooooo busy

MEERY CHRISTMAS TO EVERYONE

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Posted: 19 years ago
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when you continuing?...plz cont soon
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I started reading this story today. Loved reading teh story its a sweet story. Pls cont 😊
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i'm going to post the next part tonight still trying to write it, hace writers block right now

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Part 13

The next morning angad got up and remembered what kripa told him last night. He felt horrible for what she had been through. All he wanted to do was give kripa a big hug. Remembering kripa he quickly got up. He looked over at the bed and saw that kripa wasn't there. He was about to walk over to the washroom door when suddenly it opened up. Angad quickly sat back down. Kripa walked out the washroom with a pink bathrobe and a pink towel around her head. She saw angad staring at her and felt uncomfortable. Angad knew this and quickly got u and went to the washroom. Before going in he turned to kripa.

Angad with passion in his eyes looked at kripa and took her hand and kissed it "good morning kripa" he said. He let go of kripa's hand and walled into the washroom. Kripa stood there smiling and blushing at the same time "pagal" she said as she started to dry her hair.

Thirty minutes later angad walled out of the washroom with black pants a blue shirt and a white jacket on top, he looked so dashing and handsome. He looked around his room and found that kripa wasn't there; he then went over to the sofa and sat down to read the newspaper. Few seconds later kripa walked in. kripa was looking gorgeous; she was wearing a yellow sari with beautiful hemming on it. Once kripa walked in angad stopped reading his paper and started looking at kripa in amazement. All he could think an=bout was how lucky he was to have kripa in his life.

Kripa was in front of her mirror she was finally ready all he had to do was put on her maglasutare.

Kripa tried putting it on put it wouldn't close for her. Angad saw his and started to quietly laugh.

He walked over to kripa and turned her around. They were now standing face-to-face angad put his hand out in front of her. "kripa mujhe do main panata hua". Kripa handed over it to angad. She shyly looked down. While putting it on her angad was looking at kripa and wasn't able to take his eyes off of her. He finally got it on.

Kripa looked at angad and smiled "thanks angad". She was about to walk away when she turned around. "oh angad I forgot to ask, main kasie lagate hu?".

Angad starts looking at her and then picks up something and hides it in his hand, "kripa tum bhot khubsurat lagte ho, lakin ek chez missing hain" kripa looks at herself in the mirror, "kya missing hain angad?".

Angad opens his hand, he shows kripa the sindoor ka dipa, he opens that up and then he fills her maang, "perfect, now you look like Mrs. Kripa khanna".

They both smile at each other. Then they walk downstairs to have breakfast wish everybody. Nania and didlip were waiting for them, along with mishty-kartick, aaliya-priviti. Niana told all the married couple that dilip and her had a surprise for them.

Preview-the surprise and a scary turn of events.

Oh I wanted to say that aaliya and pritvi live righ next door to the khaanas the boses and the khannas are next door to each other.

Sorry about the little post sorry if it's boring having writers block but I promise that the next part will be longer and better and exciting. I'll write it tonight, it'll probably be up by tonight.

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