FAN FIC-RISHTEY-FINAL PART pg.71-3/13 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow! your story rocks 😛 please con. soon can't wait to read more 😉
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Part six

Kripa quickly gets up feeling embarrassed and shy, angad slowly also gets up, not taking his eyes kripa. Arjun and kajol don't see this as they were talking to themselves.

Kripa-sorry angad, mujse dekare chalna si

Angad-no krpia it's alright don't worry about it

With that they all left the bowling alley. When angad reached home he quickly ran to his moms room and wanted to talk to her. He knocks on her door and nania invites his in.

Angad(nevrvous)-mom I need to talk to you

Nania-kya baat hain angad, tum to bot kush lar ra ho

Angad-han mom, mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe pyaar hu hai

Nania(happy)-KYA?

Not knowig this aaliya and anitha were at the door and they yell at the same time

Aaliya & Anitha-KYA

Aaliya(excited and confused)-tumhe pyaar hu hai

Anitha(overjoyed)-kiski saat?

Naina-han angad vo luky ladki kyoun hai?

Angad(haapy)-mom vo Kripa Sharma hai, mere nay personal assistance

Angad goes on and tell him mom, aaliya, and anitha, about kripa the first time she hugged him, decorated his office, and tonight at the bowling lanes.

Naina was overjoyed with happiness that she ran downstairs and told dilip and kartick. Everybody in the KHANNA HOUSE was so happy that finally angad had found his sapno ki rani

Sorry for the short post, I'll continue in Wednesday, but hopefully before that

Love you all
Bye

Edited by kuch kuch hota - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys i'm writting the next two parts they should be uploaded by tonight thanks for your support and love

rajni

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow i am so excited u going to write more plzzzz do continue so far it was just spectacular
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Part seven

The next week was spent with the Khanna family, and the bose family, decorating and getting ready for the wedding that was taken place the next morning. Angad told his family when kripas family comes not to mention to anybody about him loving her, he will find the right moment and tell her himself. They all agreed but not wanting to.

Angad and kripa sepent that week getting to know each other more. They found out what the other person like and dislike. They were surprised to find out that they had a lot in comman.

The big day was here the wedding. Naina called in aaliya. She told her to phone up kripa as she wanted to talk to her.

Kripa(putting on her jewelry)-hello

Naina-hi kripa beta, main hoon aunty, angad ki mom

Kriap(worried)-oh hi aunty, aap kaise ho, sab kuch teik ha na?

Naina(laughing)-han beta sab kuch tek hai, I needed to talk to you

Kripa-ji

Nania-hum sab soch re tha ki tum aur tumhare family, come to our house and be on the girls side

Kripa was touched after hearing this

Kripa(happy)-of course, hum abhi aate hain

With that they both hung up the phone. Kripa told her family and they headed to their cars, meeting them there was arjun. In one car were kripas parents and dadi, and in the other car was arjun and kripa.

Nania-there you go aaliya, kush kripa has accepted and she's on her way over

Aaliya-han mama, main to bot kush hu

With that aaliya left and finished getting ready. Nania told dilip, and kartick, and anitah that kripa was coming they all decided to keep it a surprise from angad.

Finally kripa aarived with arjun. The got out if the car and waited for hr parents. After a couple of minutes, kripa took arjuns cell phone and phoned her parents. Her parents were stuck in traffic and it would take them a while, they told kripa not to wait for them. Kripa agreed and headed inside. Kripa and arjun agredd and went inside.

Once inside arjun saw kajol and walked over to her. At this point they were now dating, kripa thought that they were a cute couple. He walked over to her and gave her a big hug, and they started talking. Seeing this kripa smiled.

Nania saw kripa standing alone and walked up to her.

Naina-hi kripa beta your looking gorgeous

Kripa-thanks aunty you look gorgeous too

Naian-kripa were are you parents?

Kripa-oh they are stuck in traffic, they're be here soon

They stared talking. A few minutes later angad walks down the stairs. He saw his mom and walked over to her.

Nania saw him coming. Nania gave a sweet laugh and walked away leaving angad standing there confused. Kripa was also confussed and turned around.

Once kripa tured around angad just stood there shocked and stunned, but at the same time happy. Kripa just stood there and gave angad a smile,

They were now standing there across from each other just staring into each others eyes.

Preview-surprise

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow nice part kiya karoon per yeh dil mange more
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It is veryyyyyyyyy intresting please cont. 😊
Luv,
Kashish
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was a nice part...plz cont. soon...can't wait till the surprise...
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hey i just red the entire fan fic.keep up the good work.you are absaloutlly

a great writer .cont with your story.👏....its superb.

looking forword to read the next parts cont

very soooooooooooooon plz

lob u all😳

maryam


Edited by nottyangel - 19 years ago
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Part eight

Angad and kripa were standing there looking into each others eyes, still when finally kripa broke the ice by laughing.

Angad(confused)-why are you laughing?

Kripa-because you have your duppata on wrong

Kripa then fixes it for him

Angad(confussed0-kripa tum yahan, I thought you were meeting us at the hall

Kripa(confused)-angad tumahre mom na mujhe lardki wali taraf bolya, ddidn't you know this?

Angad looks at nania who was enjoying this, when nanian saw angad look at her she quickly turned away

Kripa-angad I'll brb

With that kriap leaves to check on her parents. Angad walks over to his mom and puts his arms on her

Angad-smart mom very smart

Nana-(innocently)-kya angad, what are you talking about?

With that they both laughed and continued talking. Finally kriaps parents arrived. They saw kripa outside waiting for them. They all walked inside to the khaana house.

Kripa-chalo main tumhe Mrs.khaana go milate hoon

Naina was standing in front of angad. Kripa and her parents made their way there. Kripa was standing in front of her mother.

Kriap-aunty, they are my parents

Kripa stepped aside leaving a shocked nania and gayatri

Nania(yells)-GAYARTI

Gayarti(yells)-NANIA

Angad and kripa looked at each other, and where confused

Nania and gayarti just stood there hugging each other. Finally they parted and realized that both their families were standing around them in a circle. They then told them how they are best friends and the last time they saw each other was 20 years ago. At that moment everybody had tears in their eyes.

Nania then took gayarti to the side. They caught up and started talking about the last 20 yeas of there lives.

Nania(whispers)-guess what I have a surprise for you

Gayarti-kya

Nania then tells gayartri that angad is in love with kripa and how she wants kripa to be her bahu. After hearing this gayatri was so happy that they both started to scream.

Hearing this dilipa and survan who where talking to each other (at this point there business are working with each other, and they have also became good friends), come over to there wives and asked what wrong. Gayarti tells survan abou angad love for kripa. They were all so happy that they started hugging, after that they all quietly watched angad and kripa talking to each other.

Gayarti-agr yeh dono shaadi karte hain, then I would be so happy

Dilip-we all would be happy

Survan-we need to do something big at the reception party tonight

With that they all huddle together and discuss something

Preview-the wedding, a and a big announcement

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