'Ready To Get Married' ( Part XVII) Story ends - Page 22

hi bhoomi di......

i am bak and first search anything written by you

i know i missed almost six months........

so i will read slowly slowly

and will write my views

thanks for this lovely tittle

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

hi bhoomi di......

i am bak and first search anything written by you

i know i missed almost six months........

so i will read slowly slowly

and will write my views

thanks for this lovely tittle

Originally posted by: sri_4

Bhoomi..its been more 3 months i sooo wanted to read n comment on this..n i only got time today..extremely sorry..
Loved the story of Raghu n Rama who decided to marry bcoz they had no choice..but they ended up knowing eachother much more than they expected..shared their relationships..emotions n also helped to make eachothers future life better..
Coming to people like sridhar ..i feel angry n frustated..how can they cheat people n think such low..😡
What i really liked is the TRUST n BELIEF raghu n rama has shown on eachother in no matter what situation they came across..a new beginning in their life and they wanted to make it go happily..
Loved it totally..do keep writing more..
i know i have a long list of stories of urs to read n i keep forgetting..will surely complete one day..😆
Good wishes..🤗
Sri:-)

Originally posted by: Athena.

Bhoomi,

Just read this story now. It was so beautiful, but i'm a little disappointed you ended it so soon. Would have loved to know more about what actually happens to Arundhati and Sridhar; i have a strong feeling their relationship would not survive but it would have been nice to know whether Arundhati continued to live in her world of pretense and lies.

To be honest, at first I was a little surprised that Raghu gifted a mirror. Maybe it's just the cynic in me, but I was thinking why is he gifting a mirror? -does he want to make her feel like she has to be more vain and groom herself? LOL obviously I just didn't like the idea of gifting a mirror. But then I thought about it and I realised that perhaps the mirror reflects many other emotions, and I understood the symbolism behind this gift all the more as I continued to read the story. It was very thoughful!

I still wish you would have continued! I know this is a story depicting their journey to marriage but these characters felt so real! The story was not like "filmy" even though there were so many fimly/cheesy dialogues :P They were fitting because of the characters. And they are both so level-headed, strong characters. They were etched out so well!

Thanks for a wonderful read :)

-Anushka

Originally posted by: dashingtusha13

hey,

this is the first time i'm reading your work and i'm glad i did!

i luved it immensely and loved the way you showed the developing and beautiful love between raghu and rama! it was too cute!

and then the little gifts they gave each other and rama blushing at raghu's comments...wow, too cute!