varsh's mn os gallery OS-1 part 6(14/5) pg19 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

awesome uodate!

really luvd it!

now waitin for nxt part n some mayur moments!

thnx for d pm!

n do cont soon!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
nic one...plzzz update soon...the next part seems briliant.....
n pzzzz let it be a longgggggg update.....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
awesome part...
really loved it
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Fabulous update dear loved nup's plan fr benia cute part can't wait nup's delivery
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Hi Varsha
lovely update dear
very cute n nice part
keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
hi every one vashini here again.........sorry for not replying to your comments individually.....i read them.....it makes me feel so good ......i feel lyk writing more and more when i read your comments.pls tell me if iam too draggy or too bad....u can suggest me some scenes too to make it better.......
for part 4 scroll down....hope you lyk it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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DIA'S WEDDING
Dia's wedding is going on.......benji and dia are taking the vows......suddenly nupur felt something happened to her.......she was on a chair........before she could realise what is happening it started paining badly......she held her stomach......she didn't understand for a minute....she kept telling herself that it might be some cramps.........Benji & Dia exchanged the rings..they were declared as married couple....Benji kissed her.....Nupur felt happy...but tears started coming out of her eyes........Mayank noticed her... he went to her
M: Nupur......i kya hua.....i know u r happy...par ye aansoo??
she can't even speak....she couldn't control anymore....mayank held her tight
N:Ma....ya..nk........mujhe bahut dard ho raha hai....
every one came to her......
Mm: mayank nupur ko labour pain ho raha hai.........jaldi gaadi nikalo hospital jaana hai...
M: ha ma....he is a state of shock
S: dude tu yaha raho mein gaadi nikalta hu....
G: di.....
Bui: nupur beta.......
Nupur couldn't control.....tears are coming out of her eyes......she held mayank and gunjan tightly......
Mayank is hell tensed.....her delivery is after two weeks....he got really tensed...what if something happens to her....his brain is not working.....
Luckily there was a missionary hospital run by the church nearby,church autorities informed the hospital before...they all reached the hospital......they took nupur inside the OT .........
Mayank sat on the bench all tensed
Mm: mayu
M: maa..yeh kaisa ho gaya......do hafte baaki hai delivery ke liye...maa mujhe bohut darr lag raha hai.....he hugged his mom and started crying
Mm: mayu......dekho pehli pregnancy mein aisa hota hai.......sab kuch teek hoga ......
every one is waiting outside , samrat , gunjan , dia benji , bauji , bui , maa , mayank...........
doctor naina cmae out after 45 minutes......
M: doctor...
doc: congratulations.....they both are fine...its a girl....
he couldn't belive it.....he got a cute angel..he hugged his mom.....
doc: u can go and see them.....
he ran inside .....he saw nupur inside...she is weak and tired.... still she is holing baby in her hands......she is staring at her 25 min old baby girl......sleeping....
he went and saw her




he kept staring at her.......his baby.....his angel.......she is so fragile......so delicate....he even got scared to touch her.......she is sleeping with the cutest smile on her face.........he went near nupur....he kissed her on her forehead........
M: thank you nupur.....u can't imagine what im going through now........hamari beti.....god i still can't believe we made her.......she looks so ......he touched her......"she is so delicate....im so scared to take her in arms.. what if i can't hold her properly......." suddenly baby held his finger tight...
N: dekha.....even she trusts you blindly......you can never be careless.....lo apni beti ko she is waiting for you.......
he took her in his arms....he is shivering....baby is sleeping in his arms peacefully.....he kissed her forehead........
M: welcome .........daddy ki pari.......i promise...mein aur nupur world ki best parents banenge...... love u.....pata hai tum humhe kitna pareshaan kiya..kitna hungama kiya bahar aane keliye...hmmm nautanki maa ki nautanki beti
N: mayank....kya kaha tumhe...
M:ha agar maa itni filmy aur nautanki ho to kuch tho asar hoga ha bache par....he winked at her
Nupur was looking at them and she felt happy.....nothing is coming into her mind except the happiness infront of her.....she thanked god for giving them in her life
Mm: ahem ahem humhe permission milega kya
M: maa...
maa went and hugged nupur......she took her granddaughter from his hands.......she got tears in her eyes seeing her.....
all of them came and saw the baby.......
Gunjan took baby in her hands....
G: jiju isko dimples hai.....samrat dekho smile kar rahi hai......ohh how cute...
S:hmmm papa ki pari hai...par is angel ko apni mamma ki aankhen bhi hai.....
D: ha oh my god kitna cute hai.....
B: ha dia....so cute
U: meri bhanji kitni cute hai......hey guys.....coincidence....dia aur benji ki shaadi aur hamari angel ki bday ek hi din hai.....
M: uday pehli baar tumhe koi baat jaldi samajh aagaya
U: sadu kaika.......ab bhi mera piche padgaya hai....dekna darling tum apni paapa ki tarah sadu mat bano teek hai
M: uday...
Bui: shh app log meri nanni pari ko pareshaan mat kariye...bahar jaayiye sab log....nupur tum aaram karo....
S: par jaane se pehle yeh batana,mayank nupur kya naam socha hai...angel ke liye
N: papa ki pari hai tho papa ki responsibility hai .....pls mayank koi acha sa naam sochna.....
M: mein ne soch liya hai.......he took her in to his arms......meri angel naam.."ANYA"...hai
N: anya??
M: ha....anya means.....she is unique, different languages mein differnt meaning hai......i some languages it means....favor, grace,happiness......these all suit my angel......so she is anya.....anya sharma..........
nupur stared at him....he looks like a small kid........innocence in his face...eternal love in his eyes.....he is not leaving their daughter for not even a second......she closed her eyes in satisfaction.....what else a girl needs in her life......loving husband and a cute baby who is epitome of their love.........happiest day in her life...........
3 MONTHS LATER............
Anya is peacefully sleeping on the bed......mayank was staring at her........she is smiling in her sleep.....he quickly took is mobile and took a pic without disturbing her......
N: mayank....uffo abhi thak kam se kam ek hazaar pics aur videos le chuke hoga tum ne anya ka.....band karo......
M: shh nupur so rahi hai.......he went to nupur.....meri pari hai...mein uski har yaad sambhalke rakhna chahta hu......everyday with you and anya is memorable i n my life........i still can't belive im a father of a cute and lovely angel........tum jaldi se nahake aao agar anya ko bhook lagi tho.....
N: dekh rahi hu....ki beti aane baad biwi ko bhul gaya Mr sharma....har waqt sirf ussi ka khayal hai.....hmph....
M: nupur....kkyun aise baate kar rahi ho .....
N: arrey mayank mein tho mazak kar rahi thi......she kissed him on his cheek and she went to bath.
mean while anya woke up and she started crying......
M: ohh baby....kya hua....he took her in to his arms....ollo baby kya hua baby ko...kyun ro rahi hai mera pari...bhook lagi kya.....he took her and started patting her....he made her sleep on his chest...baby slept peacefully....even he dozed off......nupur came after bathing to see her loving husband and daughter sleeping.......it was such a cute scene to see...she took his mobile and took a pic....she took the baby...made her sleep on the bed...even she slept off...........
days were going great....mayank will not leave any chance to spend time with nupur and his cute daughter anya......
Anya is full dad's daughter....she will not allow hi to leave for college....he had take a kiss from her everyday before leaving.......she is a princess of all.....maa,bui,bauji,samrat ,gunjan ,dia, benji, uday all pamper her a lot........
6 MONTH'S LATER........
Anya is suffering from severe cold and fever.....mayank is really tensed while nupur is a bit strong.......
Anya is not able to sleep and she is crying all the time...mayank took her into his arms and he is walking from..one end to other trying to make her sleep......finally she slept after long...he gently made her sleep...
M: kya nupur...mujhe lagta hai yeh wala child specialist acha nahi hai.....1 din hogaya....bechari so bhi nahi paa rahi hai...chalo isse doosre doctor se paas le chalte hai.....
N: mayank...relax.....chote bacho ka body aise hi hoti hai......unka internal resistance bahut kam hota hai......it will take time......
M:nupur phir bhi
Anya started crying again......he again took her into arms and he made her sleep.....whole night went sleepless for them as they took turns to watch her and make her sleep.......

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PRECAP: 😉 guess😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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yahoO I am first to comment
Lovely and so cute update dear
Mayur are parents and wao Mayank is so cute dad
Loved it
and Precape kya Guess karo so confusing
chalo tum pa hi chora
Thanks for pm and cont soon
Edited by DhanakZ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
wow..............its so sweet...........nd the name........i just love it..........plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow this was awesome 👏
they had baby girl thats gr8 😍
anya -cute n sweet name
n mayu was such a adorable 😳father
waiting 4 the nxt part n thanks 4 the pm😊

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