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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
wow really loved it just superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
just loved the way maan asked for his hug and then geet and maan getting out of the lift together
hope dev's mom and his sisters dont create any more misunderstanding between them
plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
LOVED IT...... LOVED IT...... LOVED IT...... LOVED IT...... LOVED IT...... LOVED IT...... PLEASE CONT...SOON.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
OMG
Okkk firstly i am deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeply soorrrryyyyyy When i read the title and prologue - i decided not to read because woh actually baat yh hai i was spending far tooo much tym on IF n reading FFs that i had to put a stop sumwhere - sowiiii but today my brain challenged me to read despair and guess wat
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
omg omg omg omg omg omg im soooooooo glad i read it now!!!!!!! read it all in space of hours :)
thank u sooo much for PMing me but u myt wanna add my name to the list just in case
Thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
wowwwwwwwwwww nice awesome update thank god no miss understanding soooooooooo happy
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

hi

congrs for new thread ..... 🥳 happy to see the update ....... i really like it.. love both maneet. this stupid ladies . nt/shaha/tasha. throw them away. loved kids. they really like geet...... dev and meera r really nice .............😉 I hope in future BEEJi will teach some lessons to this stupid ladies😡. loved your writing skill.👏 and finally plz update jaldi jaldi kara karo😛. we have to wait a lot for your ff ................. thanks 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Part 22

At home

Devmom: to dadi "when you are arranging a proper reception"

Dadi: for what?

Devmom: Maan kai shadi...

Dadi: i never thought of that

Devmom: socha na

Beeji: kay

Devmom: when we are talking don't ..

Dadi: stopped her right a way.." she is part of family"

Devmom: she was Geet servant...she went out to talk to Rahul

Dadi: bus...sorry beeji

Beeji: why you are worried... hold dadi hand

Dadi: bus yeh ...

Beeji:i have seen many woman like her in my life you don't feel sad.

Dadi: till she is here she will daily raised a different issue

Beeji: kya bola aab

Dadi: proper shadi..

Beeji: tou iss mein kya problem ha.. kar data ha ..i also want to see Geet as bride ..

Dadi: it is also my wish,,,

Beeji: phir ...

Meera: what is the topic under discussion?

Dadi: a proper shadi

Meera: me from Geet side

Dadi: beeji dekha iss ko ...

Beeji:smiled

Meera:Maan will not agree

Devmom: on what?

Meera: on a wedding reception..

Devmom: why?

Meera: he had said ..i did marry in front if media i don't want any kind of party

Dadi: i have an idea.

Meera : what?

Dadi: lets got to our farm house there we can arrange a simple wedding at our holy place

Beeji: great idea.

Meera: we all will go first & ask them to join us there later...

Sasha: where are we going?

Meera: you all were feeling bore here

nt: hmmmm

Meera: lets go for shopping ... give them a real surprise...

Sasha: kya surprise bhabi...

Dadi: a simple wedding party at farm house...

Devmom: made face... oh my stomach...

nt: what happen:

Devmom: take me to Dr.. please...

Meera: chala... my in laws ... walked out...


At office:

Geet: kya huwa ...

Maan: let her free...

Geet: looked at him

Maan: who will arrange all these files... he showed her the cupboard which she was trying to arrange on first day of her office

Geet: sir i..

Tanu: oh you call mamoo sir

Geet: yes.. aur kya bolo

Ved: too bad mamoo..

Maan: she work's her...

Tanu: but she is my didi...

Maan: didi ghar mein... stare at Geet

Ved: i will tell grandmama

Maan:what you will tell?

Ved: you bring office didi to work like a

Maan: what?

Tanu: peon

Geet:smiled

Maan: you always smile like that

Geet: aur sir

Maan: yes go and bring coffee for me

Geet: looked at him in surprised...

Tanu:mamoo is she really a

Geet: wait i will bring...

Maan hold her hand.. while reading the files

Ved: oh

Geet: what happen?

Ved: mamoo hold your hand in office too..

Geet: try to removed from Maan's

Maan: pull her she was in his lap

Ved:oh laugh

Geet: you both are teasing me... try to get up

Tanu : didi i am with you

Maan: pull her"kya karo mein tumhari didi is so cute"

Geet: kuch na kara.. gets up...

Maan:cell rang.. he read the name.. kissed her fore head made her sit at his chair walk out ...

Maan: yes Dr

Dr:can you come

Maan: why?

Dr: that day i took sample of that girl for test..

Maan: oh i am sorry i forget to collect the reports of my wife..

Dr: wife

Maan: yes she is my wife ... looked in from the door

Geet: was trying to sit like him.. tanu & ved laughing at her.

Dr:can you come

Maan:sure i will send driver

Dr: you come your self please

Maan: is every thing fine

Dr: you come i will tell you..

Maan: i am coming right a way.. he closed call...

Geet: looked at his face .. he was looking bit tense.."kya huwa"

Maan: my cutti you take care of them & office i will be back in half hour...

Geet: how office?

Maan: we have to arrange a party you select ..Adi

Adi: yes sir

Maan: show her the design i will be back...walked out.. he drive as fast as he could to the hospital.."no more test"


At hospital

Maan: knocked the dr door

DR: come in have a seat

Maan: tell me why you called me

DR: tell me what is your relation with that girl..

Maan: she is my wife

DR: i am sorry to say your wife is suffering from tumor ..

Maan: couldn't say a word for some time...

DR: see the reports.. the test say that

Maan: just bit his lips...

DR: walk to him.. " be brave it is at 2nd stage, "

Maan: just got up walked out ... he didnot look around just walk to car..


Devmom: see Maan

Meera: yes Maan , but why he is here?

Devmom: go and ask him.

Meera: try to catch him but he drive


Maan:"why test for me? " with an empty mind he drive back to office

Adi: sir madam selected this.

Maan: saw Geet standing with Pinky... both kids holding her hands..Dr words echo in his ears"your wife is suffering from tumor.."he walk to his Cabin..

Geet: when you came back?

Maan:just look at her

Geet: is everything fine...

Tanu: didi we are going with pinky didi

Geet: ok close door...walk to Maan who was standing next to window.. placed her hand at his shoulder..

"kya baat ha why you are so worried?"

Maan: bit his lips to control him self

Geet:"did i said something wrong?" try to turn him he walk to the door..."tell me"hold his hand which was cold as ice... "look at me please"

Maan:composed him self

Geet: "kya baat ha..." just came in front of him

Maan: smiled walk forward.. she took step back door was behind her...

Geet: kya.. try to stop him

Maan:"you selected"

Geet: please dont change topic, tell me why you are so worried.

Maan:i am hungry that why.. turn

Geet:jhoot.. hold his arm pull

Maan:closed his eyes...took a deep breath.... turn.. started walking towards her .. should i tell you?

Geet; yes

Maan: really placed his both arms on wall...

Geet: yes..closed her eyes

Maan: charo jana do i will tell you later.. walk back

Geet: uncle called you again

Maan: hmmm.

Geet: i will not leave him give me his number. i don't want money, i will tell him... i want you should have a peaceful life..i can't tolerate he both you time & again..

Maan: grab her by her waist as she was trying to pass him

Geet: give me number..

Maan: chup placed his finger at her lips..

Geet:"look at your face"

Maan:what happen? pull her close

Geet: give me number

Maan: you k*** i will give you..

Geet: are you ok..

Maan: nai

Geet: then

Maan :pull her more closed..

Geet: what are you doing?

Maan: stared....bato

To be cont ... sorry for a sad track but as the title is Despair ... story will be bit emotional...

love you all for your support .. keep commenting

http://naddiya26.blogspot.com/

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Nice part!!!
Oh no!!!
Geet is suffering from tumor.
But she will be alright na??
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
AWESOME PART.WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT EMOTIONAL UPDATE. PLZ DO SEND ME P.M
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
hey pls continue soon and pls make everything right soon as can't tolerate sad version 😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50

i hope she serviour from the tumor nice update pls cont soon

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