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Posted: 14 years ago

#951

hi di . . . just read all the parts will give a proper comment later when i stop crying

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

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Posted: 14 years ago

#952

i read the whole story in one stretch ...

and lovely...

u r the best...

i almost had tears...

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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#953

A beautiful journey of love...love that had no bounds...

Love that began with the breaking of any boundaries that could have existed between the two people!

They had fallen for each other that night itself, yet the realisation took time...

their hearts were beating for each other since long, it was just the synchronisation that took time...

she was innocet, she was naive...

he was scared, he was broken...

Behind the ruthless man the world saw, was a man who was dead...

dead the day he lost his love...

dead the day he saw his love leaving this world for their love...

dead the moment he held her dieing form in his arms...

he died thousand deaths everytime his pure love was insulted...

dead each time she was blamed, everytime she was insulted...

everytime her love was questioned...everytime her intentions insulted...

he knew the truth...he knew the pain,

Yet, he was helpless...the helplessness killed him more painfully each day!

But, when she came, she made hi alive again...broke the wlls of his heart bit by bit...

everytime he tried to go away, he failed...such was their bond...

her pain killed him, her happiness filled him...

her innocence cured him...her loved poured into him...

their child bound them into the holy bonds of matrimony...

they were bound for life...bound beyond life...

yet the fear was there...he couldmn't lose her...he wouldn't lose her////

the fear overtook the loev...yet the love kept bursting out from the iron walls that he sealed it in...

her innocent love could melt even the toughest of walls that he could ever muster...

he was scared////scared of hurting her y the truth...

yet, he failed to realise, she worshipped his love...is truth...

he pushed her away, yet she was ther when life was pulling away...

he tried hard...she disguised her love as revenge...

he was hurting to see her hurt...she was healing him with her love...

the wounds of six years...the pain of the love that he lost...the hurt that he faced...

the unshed tears...the muffled cries...

she cured the wounds...she drank the pain...the soothed the hurt...she washed away the tears...she took in the cries...

the part that he lost, she made him whole!

Sometimes love is hindered by boundaries...the madhoshi of their love was REYOND BOUNDARIES...

It is a great piece of work di...

thanks a lot!

Love

Swati

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chingaming

@chingaming

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Posted: 14 years ago

#954

ur tooo good of a writer!!! *big round of applause*

i had tears in my eyes after finishing the whole ff :)

thanku soo much for entertaining us ❤️

xoxo!

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810Kankana

@810Kankana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#955

u r super-cool Di 😛,,,,,lov MADHOSHI..👏.its like a heavenly experience, 😊thnk u so much for such a lovly story.😆...God bless u...muhhh🥳

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#956

i just finished this ff once again
beautiful it is di...
can't stop crying..😭
their madhoshi is way beyond n e words...
just awesum..
am totally speachless..😭

this is the 2nd tym am crying after reading madhoshi again!!!😭

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#957

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
i just finished this ff once again
beautiful it is di...
can't stop crying..😭
their madhoshi is way beyond n e words...
just awesum..
am totally speachless..😭

this is the 2nd tym am crying after reading madhoshi again!!!😭

THANKS A LOT
thats so so sweet

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#958

Originally posted by: kathrina7176
beautiful perfect

thanks a lot

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sharan

@danno

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Posted: 14 years ago

#959

ohh muskan
this FF is just awesome
love each and every bit of it
the way u write the whole think
the pain,the love all are just superbbb
love u r writing dear
u r a fantastic writer
and which u write in urdo is just awesome