Hello ji😊
Back from watching Geet. what an amazing episode! Loved it, specially Maaneet moments😊
Time for some comments on the last part now now😛
Well, my comments are divided into three parts-first one is on the last update and second one id for Madhoshi as a whole and last one for you😊
Part 1
What an amazing update!!! Beautiful!
When I started reading, I got almost scared-body, blood and all. Then realized that he was having a flashback of Sameera when Geet said those lines. My heart was crying out for him and Sameera. She loved him so much but couldn't live with him because she didn't wanted to hurt her abbu. She was torn between two people whom she loved dearly, madly. And the best she thought was to end her life but little did she know that her step would deeply affect Maan's and her abbu's life.
From the very beginning, we(readers) were complaining that why Geet has to suffer so much and why Maan is so reluctant, cold and indifferent to her causing her immense pain. But the truth is that he had more pain inside him. He had hidden the pain inside him for 6 long years and no one could understand except Geet, his Geet! He had enclosed himself in a shell which only Geet managed to break. She understood him, she understood his pain, she realized that no matter what he says deep down he loves her as passionately as she loves him, infact he loves her more than she loves him.
Maan cried his heart out, he let the tears shed which he had not since 6 years. Still he was scared that he might become the reason of Geet's life being taken away. He can bear the pain of not being with her but cannot bear the pain of anything happening to her, losing her. Geet realized his mental state, and moved forwarded with her Step 3. Liked the challenge she put up-whether Maan is right that she'l die if she'l live with him or Geet is right that she'l die if she lives away from him.
My heart almost skipped a beat when I read doctor saying that they couldn't save her.
But now Maan had the confidence in his love, in their love. Now he wanted to live with her. He wanted his son's mother to be with him when he will raise him. The same man who thought that he might become the cause of her death, today is confident that he, only he can infuse life in her. He realized that-Uski(Geet) har saans mein, uske har rom mein bas Maan hi basa hai. Maan hai toh sabkuch hai warna kuch bhi nahi.
Loved it😊
Realy loved reading this.
The mini epilogue was too cute. Loved it. Little Sameer having fun with Papa, his bond with his mama-wow, so sweet.
And I liked the name you gave him-Sameer! Sameera has been an integral part of not only Maan's but also Geet's life. And by naming their son as Sameer, she'l always live with them.
Loved reading this update a lot😊
Also, I really loved Tere liye lines a lot. I actually love its title track. Amazing lyrics!
Part 2
Some comments about Madhoshi
Na chaaho kisi ko itna ki uska pyaar tumhari majboori ban jaaye
Chaaho kisi ko itna ki tumhara pyaar uski liye zaroori ho jaaye
Madhoshi-an intense love story. Beautifully wriiten. Your words evoke emotions. They force the readers to smile, laugh and cry according to the words you write.
Beautiful portrayal, amazing character-sketch.
Enjoyed this journey beginning from a passionate night moving to cute, little sweet moments bringing Maaneet closer to antics of innocent Geet to cute baby talks to their realization of love to their marriage to Maan's cold behaviour towards Geet to Geet becoming mature giving her marriage a best shot to Maan sending her divorce papers to Maan's accident to Geet taking ample care of him but not letting him know her true intention to bringing life back in Maan, infusing confidence in Maan to love to the birth of the baby-Sameer!
What a wonderful journey!
Enjoyed reading this a lot, specially the poetic lines and the cute baby one-liners.
I really had a good time reading this story! To be honest, initially, I didn't like it much because I was so smitten by Pyaar ka Ehsaas that I didn't paid much attention to Madhoshi. But after a few updates, I began falling in love with this story and now its really close to my heart. 😊
Part 3
Muskan
To be honest, I am really not getting the exact words to express my feelings. But still giving a try-You are just like your name-spreading muskan in everybody's life. Your writing speaks for you-you involve all emotions in your writing wheher it is passion, love, gussa, naughtiness, bindaaspan, cuteness-everything!
You have been blessed with a beautiful talent/gift-writing. Use this talent to the fullest and spread happiness in everyone's life as you have been doing.
A big thanks to you for giving me an opportunity to read your amazing work.
Hope to continue reading your writing in future too.
(Don't end PKE and TM so soon and a new FF would always be welcome)😳
Love you lots and lots and lots😊
Big wala hug🤗
Shivangi
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
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