~Madhoshi Maaneet thread 5~ - Page 80

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Originally posted by: muskanp

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~madhoshi~
part 80

those lines haunted maan for 6 years day & night...
~Rooh se rooh ke darmiyan,
ishq ke hain hazaro jahan
ya khuda ya khuda mujhko dede agar ek jahan
to maang lu tere liye,
Jism paak aankho mein bhar lu,
saans saans mein shamil kar lu,
is duniya mein jaan gawa,
tujhe us duniya mein hasil kar lu...~

~Tere sajde mein sir hai jhuka,
tu ibaadat hai tu hi duaa
maut ke baad bhi jo mile bandagi ka sila,
wo maang lu tere liye~
maan closed his eyes...his hand was cold num...her body lied in his hand
soaked in blood..he could not bear the sight she was in, when he lifted
her to rush to the hospital his hand could feel her skull smashed..it was not hard
any more..it felt hollow..he jittered ..her eyes still kept him capitive...
it was not tears which flowed out of her eyes it was blood now, from every where her eyes,
her nose her ears. her hand felt lifeless..last she said is duniya mein jaan gawa,
tujhe us duniya mein hasil kar lu...dr rushed her to the OT
parents & friends every one rushed, took the statement.
he just stood away watching not even able to be part of anything
police - it was an accident, she slipped from the bridge & hit
her head on the rock below, some one tried saving her but
father - who tried saving her
he just left from there without making his presence known...
she held his cold num hand & hugged him he cried cried out loud burring his head in her
geet - aap wahan se chup chap chale aaye taaki kisi ko pata
na chale. she loved u..she jumped off the bridge because of her love for u
taaki uski abbu ke saamne uski ruswai na ho, taaki unka gumaan na toote
he cried cried & just kept crying like a baby
the tears which were hidden for 6 long years had found their way out, it was pain
sorrow, fear, guilt, loss,
geet - itna dard akela hi sehte rahe, kisi se kuch nahi kaha
he hugged her closer
geet - mujhe se bhi nahi, she cupped his face itna pyaar karte rahe mujhse
ki mujhe khud se doar kar diya he broke away from her hand & broke into her arms
har baat jhooth thi aapka, aap sirf mujhe pyaar karte rahe, mujhe kuch ho na jaye
iss darr se pata nahi kya kya keh diya, kar diya..yahan tak khud ko bhi galat saabit kar diya
kaise maan leti main aapko galat..umm..aap to kabhi galat ho nahi sakte
maan - mat karo mujhe se itna pyar his tears wet her shoulder.
she let him cry, he had not let his bottled feelings out for six long years, no one knew
this even daadi did'nt know sameera was no more or she killed herself for their love
he moved out of the mansion because he could'nt bare them talk ill about sameera
nor could he tell them the truth. he was fighting all this alone untill now.
he suddenly pulled away getting scared
she moved closer looking lovingly in his eyes - aur aapko lagta hain ki, aapke pyaar ke wajah se mujhe bhi kuch ho jayega lekin aap yeh bhool gaye ke main zinda hoon aaj to sirf humare pyar ke wajah se
he looked at her in shock, how she knew every tiny bit in his heart but he moved away
his fear of his love hurting her was drifting him, he could never imagine any thing
happening to her, the sight of his love in pain he definitly could'nt take it again
geet - us din I almost killed myself but u put the life back in me
maan - lekin tum wahan tak pahunchi meri wajah se
she snapped back in anger almost losing all her patience now...umm thats why STEP 3
she knew the fear in him was so deep it could not be just be removed with few loving words. she gives the divorce papers to him I have signed it all the pages
his heart was shattered into pecies a pain probably was more intense than he ever felt
maan looked at the paper in disbelief & shocked to see she had signed all the sides
geet - aap ko lagta hain main aapke paas rahogi to marjavoongi
aur mujhe lagta hain main aapse door hoke jee nahi payungi lets see who is right
she removes her magalsutra & gives it to him lo ho gayi main aapse alag..that is if I can ever be let me see how long do I live now. she just leaves to the hospital holding her stomach
maan looks on the floor & notices fluid he realized she actually was in labour while talking to him
he ran behind her. geet reached the hospital with the papers & got her self admitted
maan rushed to the hospital few mins apart, he looked for the room where she was
nurse pointed at the labour room.

FLASH BACK TUESDAY
geet was preoccupied!!!!
she went to sameeras house again but still not able to meet her
ON WENESDAY
she again went to meet sameera waiting the whole day but still no chance
ON THURSDAY
geet had made up her mind
sameera's mother met her outside the house
mother - tumhe sameera's se milna hain
geet - umm
mother - took her to sameera's kabr.., her abbu still not able to recover
from the shock that sameera died, so we all potray at home that she is alive
woh unki zindagi thi
geet - yah kaise huwa
mother - she slipped from the bridge &
geet sat at her kabr the whole day. she rested her head on her kabr & kept feeling his pain
but still confused..then she noticed the carved date on the kabr..same as the torn
pages of the dairy.. she could not believe what she saw..babaji
woh unse mili thi...she looked around...she saw a kabr..next to her
her heart bleeded to see the name just Maan written on that
same date...she could not believe it..she hated that name to be written
on a grave...she started to rub it, scratch with a stone madly when a box slipped out
she opened it ..it had the torn pages of the dairy.....which had those lines written on them

PRESENT HOSPITAL
he heard the baby cry. he ran towards the door
dr - we were just looking for u & handed the baby in his hand
he kept looking at the tiny life wrapped in a white cotton crying. he hugged the baby close to his neck & asked the dr geet!
dr - sorry we could not save her
maan rushed in with the baby
maan - GEET GEET
she was life less...he remembered...I promise u will have ur baby in ur hand..
he kept the baby close to her ..baby kept crying loud like he knew she was no more
he caressed her check & remembered let me see how long will I live without u
he tied the magalsutar around her neck. he did'nt fear any further, he believed he could love!!
he knew like nothing could happen to her if he was there with her, the belief she filled
him with..he leaned forward & took her lips in & kissed her, like it was the first time they
kissed she cuffed & choked doctors ran with the oxygen mask
dr - she is reviving
maan - no she does'nt need anything
he just kisses her passionately again & again again lieing next to her on the bed
his hands passionately moved all over her feeling the life in her
baby lied between them feeing her warmth now sleeping peacefully
maan - i love u ..love u ..2.3.4...10...
baby~snugged ...smiling
geet - u can say that again & again & again..I can never have enough of it

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maan comes in rushing to the kitchen she stood there wearing a salwar
& apron , with a spoon in one hand & locks teasing her cheeks
I had enough of ur son
geet - kyun bura bol rahe ho mera bache ke bare mein woh bhi aaj ke din
maan - I brought him what ever he asked for now he is saying why did
I buy that? woh uske age ka nahi hain.
geet - usmein age kya likha hain, geet murmering zaroor uske age ka nai hoga
maan rolls his eyes
geet - ok ok...where is he?
maan - he is in the car & not coming out
geet removes her apron & comes out to the hall
SAMEER SAMEER in the house in count of 3, 1...2...
he came running & hugging her mama ..mama mama..
maan kept looking at them in shock..that was easy
..papa ne mujhe koi bhi toy nahi leke diya
geet - ole mera bacha, lekin papa ne to saare gift aapke room mein rakhe hain
sameer - sachi &kissed maan..thank u papa..love u papa..ur the best papa in the world ran to his room

maan came & hugged her from behind - tumne pehle se hi gift le aayi the
she turns to see him - umm
maan - tum jaanti thi woh mujhe pareshan karega
she smiled
he lifts her & takes her to the room - mujhse nahi sambalta tumhara beta
mujhe ek pyari se beti chahiye tumhari tarah
geet - nahi baba, mujhse 2 bache nahi sambal the 3 kaise manage karoongi
maan lifted his eyes brows 2 bache
geet - sameer aur aur...
maan - aur?
geet - aur aap
maan - aacha main bacha hoon pushing her on the bed
geet - yeh kya kar rahe ho, sab log aate honge
maan - bache ki bachkani harkat
geet umm hugging him hidding her face in his embrace.

kabhi aisa bhi hota hain..madhoshi hi pyar ka izhaar hota hain...
har koi har waqt woh teen lavz nahi keh paate....lekin unki madhoshi
bahut kuch keh jaati hain...he felt some thing in him...which he never
felt for any one else...his madhoshi was always for her...even beyond his control

BTW dev & meera are happly married with a daughter now😳.
NT is in jail for attempt to murder.😡
that was muskan's ~madhoshi~