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ruchi

@macho_muffin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#781

Heyy di!! omgg this was heartwrenching but just beautifully written!! first about the update....awww geet is taking soo much pain for him....she is ready to give her baby, go through all that suffering for him😭 but maan is just😡....i can't believe he is still not accepting his feelings for her and is not accepting their lovee....please make him realize soon!....guess the next update might be delivery...omgg i hope both her and the baby are fine but ofcourse they have to be or else you will many readers coming after you😆....jk, but i know you will make everything alright soon!😉...its been too long since some legit madhoshi romance!😉 now about the diction....omgg di i am just speechless cuz those were such brilliant lines on one's lovee....my every comment will appear soo little in front of your extraordinary writing....though it took me a while to read all the hindi😆, once i got it, i was just bowled over....really hats off to you for this amazingly written part!!👏...though, all you your parts are amazing, i guess in this update their confrontation was so intense that the lines spoken by geet really stood out....lovedd it!!😳...and lovee you!!!....pweez continue soon!!

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#782

Muski,

A wonderful update once again by you, but I am not happy. Day after day'I seem to fall down into the GHERAI of Dard/taklif..etc'etc.

Maan's words ' why don't you have the c-section and give the baby to me and find yourself a Raj.

Geet's response ' I did ironically'..n den 'Na chaho kisi ko itna, ki chaathat tumhari majburi ban jaye''

That is so sad Muskan'the irony'she wanted Raj'.hopelessly romantic in love'and here Maan was her Raj'she had married him, carried his child in her for almost 9 months now'but he did not love her'.he loved someone else and was not willing to let go of that someone else (Sameera).

I mean imagine'how much it can hurt in real life'.you love someone so much'.but that person does not want to love you back.

I hate (yes'hate) Maan's responses in this update..he is so DAAM (yes m using Daam) Rude.

He has crossed all the boundaries of being a human being..he has forgotten on how to be a human being'just because he is so adamant, egoistic, arrogant, rigid in his own thinking. He is not willing to bend even a little for the sake of humanity. 😡😡😡

I mean what would go wrong if he could just talk to her as a HUMAN!!!

Kisi ko agar dil todna nahi aata to please is Maan se sikho'.woh to ek hi baar me bata aur dikha dega ke kisi ka dil kaise choor choor karte hain'.aisa dard do, to samne wala dubara uth hi na sake'aur woh jeete jee hi mar jaaye'.ek zinda laash ki tarah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Muski, I do not care what excuse Maan is using rite now to keep Geet away from him. All is Wrong'.I do not agree'.sorry am being so frank'but enough'I am at the limits with this Maan.

I am sad with a capital S. 😭😭😭😭

Rachana

Edited by Water. - 14 years ago

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#783

Song update coming soon.

Edited by Water. - 14 years ago

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#784

Originally posted by: Water.

Muski,

Ever since you wrote back to my comment by saying....

'Sometimes love is just beyond you....it is difficult to stop yourself from falling deeper and deeper in love'

'That is why they say falling in love and not rising in love'.

After those lines, I recalled one of your earlier posts...

'na chaho kiki ko itna, ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jayee'.

Today's update... I can literally broke me after reading through what Geet has been going through for the past few updates....

I mean what is a person suppose to do ...if they love the other person so much that the other person's love flows in their veins and the air they breathe is theirs...

Love for Maan flows in her veins and the air she breathes is for Maan and of Maan...and I can imagine what she went through when Maan rejected her not once but numerous, multiple times...

After all this....what happens to a person's heart...only that person knows...how much they suffer...and Geet suffered tremendously.

What is she suppose to do....in each and every breath in her, each and every cell in her body breathes for Maan only....

Geet told Maan once, kaho toh jeena chodh doon, lekin aap se pyaar na karoon woh mujhse nahi hoga'....

I can feel her pain in this update and that is why I am going to dedicate a song to Geet...but will update it later on tonite....

Love

Rachana

Edited.....Continuation of the song.....December 1, 2010 (Eastern Time, US/Canada)

Muski....

Song...continued here.......

Girta Hua Woh Asma Se

Aakar Gira Zameen Par

(Geet was so happy when she married him...she felt that now her life was complete. She was with the Maan she loved....but when everything backfired....as fast as her hopes and dreams reached their peak and heights....the faster she fell down on the ground...crashing....and all she could feel, sense, hear, breath...was immense pain.

Khwabon Mein Phir Bhi Badal Hi The

Woh Kehta Raha Magar

Ke Allah Ke Bande Hasde Allah Ke Bande

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Jo Bhi Ho Kal Phir Aayega

(Geet - even though she was in so much pain, all she could think about was Maan...she was never able to let him go...he always stayed with her within her and in each and every breath of her...He was her ultimatium. Her life began with Maan and ended with Maan....she never gave up on him.....she kept telling herself...Geet you are God's child....keep smiling behind that painful mask..keep smiling...keep bearing all the pain...because she loved him and he was her life, there will be a new day tomorrow...do not give up...even in all her pain..she kept doing what she could to get Maan out of his horrible physical condition...she did everything...to make him better, so that he can walk again....feel again...live again, smile again, laugh again...cus she was God's child)

Rachana

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

@Lakshmi86

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#785

Hi,

Loved the update!!!!!!!

hmmm it was very emotional,

yaar abhi Maan ke insecurities ko bhi bahar nikal do,

i am not able to understand his rudeness towards her,

Step 3 kya,

geet put her life in danger,

uske marne ke baad, Maan ko akal aayegi kya,

uff i am so tired of his rudeness........

Love

Lakshmi

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#786

PLS MUSKI HELP US .............................. UPDATE SOON................ WAITING......................... VERY TENSED...................

WAITING......................... WAITING......................... WAITING......................... WAITING......................... WAITING......................... WAITING........................

WAITING.

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Kanishta

@Firegurl

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#787

Loved the update
waiting 4 nxt part
thnx 4 pm

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heermeher

@heermeher

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#788

I seriously want geet to go away after giving him his baby sign the divorce paper and go away how much poor girl will suffer

If someone luvs you set he or she free if he/she really belong to you he will come back to you or else move on

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nisharoyce

@nisharoyce

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#789

OMG
i m having labor now
tumhe bhi yehi stop karna tha kya
i cant wait yaar , why did i read even this part
it is so painful to see both of them in pain
serial tho painful hai hi oooper se tum bhi

waiting yaar jaldi karo

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pinky

@bpinky

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#790

muskan it ws sad, very emotional n i felt like crying for both maan n geet in this situation....😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 i m very tensed n worried abt wht will happen next now....why maan is nt saying tht he loves her.. n i loved it how she made him stand on his legs though he hs nt realizd it...bt now i wnt maan to confess his love n make his child n geet happy...n m evn worried for geet n baby's health...plz jst let go this sadness now n make our maan n geet happy now...plz continue soon dear...m very tensed aftr reading this update...

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