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Posted: 14 years ago

yaar ye geet hamare maan ko or kitna dukh degi. pls muski do some thing......feeling like 😭for maan.........

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi,

Loved the update!!!!!!!!!!!
Madhoshi is one of the superb FF,
I loved the revenge,
this revenge to show that Geet is so important in his life,
to teach him Love, dedication, faith, sharing, reluctance n all,
She is trying her best to cure him,
and she is immensively successful,
his hands have got life,
next update will be his legs.....................
Now i am truly satisfied,
Geet is not only a cute loving girl but also a fantastic human being,
she is not mean, selfish, and egoistic like Maan,
Maan ne socha if he will throw her from his life,
she can get better life,
but he never thought how she would get it,
instead he could trust her and his love and try to change himself,
he is so self centric, that he would not change himself,
but takes stupid decision to change everything around him,
Geet was not childish,
she started to adjust with him,
but he could never understand her strength,
always took her as weakness............
Now Geet is doing everything right to him.........
to show his rudeness have ruined her life, her emotions,
she is ready to give up her child, she will do too,
thats so hard,
Everytime she taunts him, will also be effecting her,
but Maan yeh sab thodi na sochega,
uko toh apneaap se matlab hain thats all,
I think his name would have been Mean instead of Maan,
IDK if I am overly reacting,
but Mann could have trusted her and would have tried to share his weakness to her........hai na..........
the whole disaster is coz Maan believes that he cannot keep anyone happy around him,
and so he pushed geet away from him,
but instead he could have shared the things with her,
Uff, mein jitna iske baare mein sochti hoon,
utna mera khoon kholta hai,
Please geet, tum jo kar rahi ho woh sahi hai,
please rukna nahi, teach him a nice lesson,
woh bachha tumhe nahi chahiye,
jiska baap uske existance ko apna bhool sanajta ho...............
Well, after bursting all my feelings,
my heart has gone lighter now,
Ofcourse Maan jaise kaminey ko kuch nahi hua,
toh Geet ko bhi delivery ke dohran kuch nahi hoga,
she is just a good human being,
she deserves to be more happy and contented........
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muski,
As per my comment earlier today...here is the song dedication to Geet of this FF - Madhoshi
Toota toota Ek Parinda Aise Toota
Ke Phir Jud Naa Paaya
(Geet - she is heartbroken, she did everything she could in her power, she gave her patience, her innocence, her love, her determination, her strength, her effort, her kindness, her generosity to one and only Maan Singh Khurana.....but unfortunately he did not love her back, he did not appreciate her, respect her, cherish her, adore her...what did he do? HE BROKE HER
Now here she is trying to mend her self...but she cannot mend herself, her heart, her pain, her sorrow, her grief, he emptyness, her loneliness...the scar that is in her heart is so deep that at this point in time it cannot be mended and she is not sure if it will ever be mended)
Loota Loota Kisne Usko Aise Loota
Ke Phir Ud Naa Paaya
(Geet..her first mulakat with Maan..she gave away everything that she ever had in her...to him..to Maan...now she was his and his only..mind, body n soul. Further to that...his seed was living inside of her...even if she ever wanted to fly like a free bird she never could because now she had the responsiblity of the child, his child..the child was even more important to her because it was his...her love's shadow....their shadow)
Now, what is she going to do...she has been robbed of anything and everything that she ever had in her life, that she could ever give to anyone....she felt like a failure...being never to get up again for herself...(do not get her wrong here...she can get up for him for her love Maan...but not sure if she can get up for herself)
.....to be continued tomorrow.....
Muski...I will finish the other two lines of this song along with description tomorrow...it is late nite here...I have to work early tomorrow.
Hope you like it.
Love
Rachana
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Posted: 14 years ago


update

pahle baby bolna shuru karta tha to chup nahi hota tha aur ab geet

maan - lekin I did'nt want to sign for the baby
geet - I am not giving u an option here.


precap
maan on his legs!!




waiting for next i think kuch zor ka jhatka bhi aye ga jis se maan khara ho pae ga.




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Posted: 14 years ago
yar it ws sad n now i m feeling sad for maan n geet...dey both loves eachothr bt i m worried why geet is ignoring her health??? m happy for precap tht maan on his legs n i really wnt maan to convince geet for C-Section n plz i wnt both baby n geet to be safe...maan loves baby so much n the reaon behind marriage ws maan wntd his baby to be vth him so i wnt baby n geet both n plz now end dis cold war betwen maan n geet...plz update soon....m jst bit worried now....
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update!!!

maan deserves this kind of behaviour!!!

continue sioON!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
i cant understand wat geet is doing.............hurting herself to improve maan's condition..... or hurting maan to take her revenge???? watever she does improves maan's health but makes him feel like hell...... n y is she hurting her baby anyways...... galti to maan ki thi na phir baby par gussa kyun😭😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

can't wait for the next update

continue soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
Di please please update next part na..please show maan struggling for geet...please..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey I miss your update today

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