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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ramahesh

waiting dear update soon.....



Heyy Awhhhh Sorry For Keeping You Waiting Yaar. Will Update As Soon As Possible😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey just read your ff
It's really good
Please PM me if you can
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Okay Guyz! Sooo Sorry For The Delay!
I Have To Tell you all that after this Update, i'm going to be less active for at least 5-6 Months because😭😭 My exam results came and i seriously got a shock!😭 for my English i received a D! When i was targeted B/C!😭 And this will stay with me forever unless i work my socks off for the next few months left in school😭 So I'm Updating today but my next update will be after a long time. If i have time then i might try to update during the half term holidays etc but i seriously need to revise cz when i was supposed to revise, i didn't and the result is that My friends say i'm naturally clever but i'd say i'm naturally dumb!😡 Sorry Guyz I Hope You Understand😭
Okay Enough Of My Complaints Here's The Next Chapter And I've Made It As Long As Possible😳 Do Comment And II Will PM If I Can😳 Actually I'll Just Pm 😆

Enjoy My D Grade Chapter😭 What Am I Saying! It's Not Even Worth a D!


Chapter6

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Geet: What do you want?! Put me down!!
Maan: How many times do I have to tell you NO!
Geet punched him on his back with both her hands since they were tied together, but it didn't help.
She moved her legs to kick him on his face, but he held her legs together as well, with his hands.
"Hold still You ninja!"he shouted.
"Warna kya?!!"she shouted back.
He stopped walking.
"Uh Oh"she murmured.

Now The Rest:
Uh-Oh was the right thing to say at the moment.
"Umm...Why Did You Stop...?" she asked, confused
"You want me to walk then?" he mocked.
"Uhhh...No Not Really! You stopped walking so I thought maybe you just suffered another attack!" she said sarcastically.
"But if you ARE going to put me down then...go on" she said nicely, trying to fool him.
He didn't say anything. Instead, he started walking again.
"Ahh Nuts! Geet! You're Soo Stupid!!" she scolded herself, while Maan Listened *Self Talks 😆* And Smiled.
He walked fast while carrying her with ease.
Soon they were home *Homee? Apna Ghar? 😆*
He came to the front side of the house, more like the mansion and stopped as he saw an eager Dadima Running towards him but stopped instantly.

What she saw was shocking. A Girl Hanging Onto Maan Like he's just kidnapped her.
Because she was kicking and moving about.
"Dadi ma It's Nothing like that!" said Maan, after looking at her horrified expression.
"Dadima?" Repeated Geet, slowing down her kicking process.
Dadima was just standing there, mouth wide open. What the hell was Maan thinking?! she thought. Bringing a girl like THAT! On his back! she continued.
"MAAN! What the hell do you think you're doing?! Put Her Down! Now!!" she shouted, coming closer.
"Yeah! Put Me Down NOW!" Repeated Geet.
Maan huffed and puffed and put her down irritatingly. Geet gave him a glare before turning to Dadima.
"Hello Beta" Said Dadi Maa.
Geet stood there stunned while Maan Looked here and there, Mad at her for being so stupid.
"Na..Naa..Namasstee.." She stammered.
"Oh Beta You Don't Have to worry!" she glanced at Maan.
"Come" she held her and brought her in the house *Ooppss I mean the Mansion*
Geet thought "What the heck? Okay At least This creep won't attack me in front of his Dadima"
She sat down and so did Dadima. Maan just leaned on one of the sofas.
"Hmm So tell me What's your name?" asked Dadima
"Uhh'Umm..G..Geet" she stammered. 'Great! Now she wants to know my name! And you Ghadi! You just told her!'
"Hmmm So That's Her Name, Nice. Makes a great name..MaanEet" Thought Maan
"Nice Name Dear, I see my grandson has petrified you to death! You look so pale!" Said Dadima, holding her hand. Maan gave her a glare.
"Haan..Nahii'Uhhh" she didn't know what to say
Before Geet could say anything, Maan interrupted "Uh Dadi, Ask her where she lives'"
Both looked up at him in shock.
"Kya?" both asked at the same time.
"God Dadi! I Told you before I didn't know who she is! Still you're giving me those looks!" Thought Maan.
"Uhmm Dadi..I Mean Ma'am ..Can I go home?" asked Geet pleadingly.
"Ah Beta I know you're scared but you don't need to be!" encouraged Dadima.
Geet: Huh?! I Shouldn't Be?! I SHOULDN'T Be?! He Literally Kidnapped Me And I shouldn't be scared?!
Dadima: Geet Beta? You Okay?
Geet: Huh? Oh Umm Please Can I Go? My Family Will be waiting for me
Dadima: Oh, Um Maan Beta
Maan: Ji Dadi?
Dadima: Could You drop her off Please?
Maan was all set to go.
"NO!" Shouted Geet.
Both looked at her amazed.
"I Mean..I can go alone walking. Why trouble Mr.Thur..I mean Khurana" she managed to say.
"No, I'm dropping you off" Ordered Maan.
"Par-" she couldn't finish. Maan was walking towards her.
Geet stood up to defend herself behind Dadima who also stood up.
"Maan! Calm down!" shouted Dadima.
"Geet Beta, just go with him Okay? I Promise he won't do anything, He's just bad tempered." Dadima Assured Geet.
With no other option, Geet walked outside followed by Maan.
"I Thought I would get away with this but no! It's gone even worse!" she mumbled.
"This is just the beginning" said Maan from behind, leaning down to her ear and whispering which made her shiver.
She didn't dare turn around, instead she made her towards the Officially Broken car.
"Oh No! How am I gonna get home?" she acted like she was so shocked, deep inside she was jumping in joy.
"Miss Geet, I have several other cars and this one you're looking at is all because of you!" he said, looking at her intently.
She rolled her eyes and waited.
"The car?" she asked.
"Over there" he pointed.
"My Bag?" she asked again.
"Here" he pointed towards his left side of the blazer.
"Ohhh no wonder you looked fat! Like you were Pregnant!" she mocked.
"GEET!" He shouted.
"Okay Okay! Give it here!" she demanded.
Maan: Dare you Take it from me *Walking towards her*
Geet: I'm'Gonna Take it off you but you have to stop doing that! *Walking backwards*
Maan: Doing What? *Still walking towards her*
Geet: Th..Th..This'.*Walking Back*
Before she could walk backwards any further, he grabbed her by the waist, crushing her to him.
She closed her eyes and didn't dare to look at him *Too tall Na 😆 her head reaches his chest!*
She tried pushing him away but he wouldn't budge, instead he grabbed both of her hands and placed them behind her back. She couldn't escape then.
"No one asks Maan Singh Khurana, he simply knows" said Maan in a husky voice. Geet Felt her stomach was full of butterflies. She struggled to free herself.
He held her both hands in his one hand and with the other he reached for his blazer.
"You wanted this?" he asked, well whispering into her ear.
She moved a little, feeling his breath on her face.
He slowly let her go and gave her the bag.
"Chalo" he said .
Geet put her hand on her heart and made a face "By God! Is he crazy or what?" she muttered as she pulled out her tongue behind him and made way towards the passenger seat. Then stopped and decided to sit at the back.
Maan was already in the car, he looked at how she changed her mind and sat at the back. He got out of the car and got into the back seat with her.
"What are you doing?!" she shouted, moving back
"What are you doing?!" he said, angry and coming closer.
"Uhh Who's Gonna Drive? Or Are you like some sort of James Bond whose car drives by itself?" she said stupidly.
"Shut Up Geet! You know what I can do!" he warned.
Without any delay, he yanked her out of the car and placed her back to the front seat.
Before closing the door he said "Don't you dare come out or else!"
He came around and sat on his seat.
She didn't bother fighting with him, not when she's alone with him.
He started the drive.
"Uhmm'do you even know where I live?" she asked innocently.
"Haan? Uhh If you tell me then yes" he said.
She briefly told him where she lived unwillingly and just wished this journey ended fast. It was dragging on. *Just like my FanFic*
At last she was home.
"Victory!!!" she thought.
She got out of the car holding her bag close to her heart Awhhh but in a split second, she was back into the car.
Maan had pulled onto the strap of her bag, making her fall back.
"Now what?!" she hissed.
"Your parents are going to be angry" he started.
"Duh!" she replied.
He ignored her.
"So I'm coming with you inside" he stated.
"What?!" she looked at him shocked.
"Are you crazy?! They'll Kill me!! Yeah I'm late! Yeah they'll get mad but none of that is compared to what my state will be like if they see me with YOU!" She half-screamed.
"Shut Up!" he shouted.
"No!" she shouted back. "Now you go away and I'll handle this myself!"
"Oh Really? Well lets see how you do that!" he challenged.
"Watch Me" she stepped outside the car, with her bag, and made her to her house 'just a house not a mansion.

"Huh! He thinks I'm that weak! Well Maan Singh Thurana, you're going to be disappointed!" she muttered.
He watched her admiringly *God I don't even know if that is a word!*
"She's So innocent! Seriously! How on earth is she going to escape her parent's questions? Don't worry Geet I'm right here, dekhte hain for how long you can keep your challenge" he talked to himself as he folded his arms across his chest.
Geet knew that she'll be in trouble so she had another plan.
Her room is on the front side with a balcony. There's a pipe-like thing and All Geet needed to do was climb. She jumped onto the pipe and climbed up until she was hanging onto the balcony swinging her legs.
"By God! Akki! How on earth do you do this?!!" she struggled to say her self talks.
Her balcony was not that wide in height. At least Geet was able to jump straight into it.
"Haiyaaa!!!!" she said, quietly.
Maan froze at his spot.
"What the heck?!! This girl's crazy!" He shouted, shocked and started his car to leave before getting caught.
"Phew! That was close Geet!" she talked to herself.
"Oh No! What Am I Gonna say to Mum And Dad?!" she thought.




"Pooja! Where is Geet?!!" shouted Mr.Malhotra.
"Dad I Don't Know!" Said Pooja.
"Check Her Room Again!" He Roared.
"Yes Dad" Pooja Headed Towards Geet's Room.
"You Stupid Geet! Tumhaare Saath Saath Main Bhi Mar Gayi Aaj! That Too In Front Of My Hubby!" Pooja Complained as she made her way towards the room.

Feel Free To Comment As It Helps Me Improve My D Grade Chapters ..More Like a U!



EDIT----

OMFGGG!!!! I Was Sooo Lame!!! What A Twat!!🤣


Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update sis 😉
love maaneet
geet is soo stupid bu stil cute
update soonxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part!!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow really great update m enjoying it soo much! but i wish u would update early please :(
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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG that was hilarious i cant stop laughing on how stupid geet was n her silly ring tone dulha milgaya🤣🤣

great job. do continue soon😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
did she climb up the pipe with heels😆 well awesome as always😳 n thanks for PM😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

hiiii..

ur updates are sucha lovely delight to read...

hilarious.....u and ur ff rocks....

keep writing


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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaarr..awsome one hilarious

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