FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2

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HelloHiBye_Bye

@HelloHiBye_Bye

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#621

i m silent reader of ur ff...

i loved hw u express Maaneet thru there POVs

pls update soon..............

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#622

Haha....another one....

From same movie Barsaat (1995, Bobby Deol)

Teri update Pe Marti Hoon...😉

Teri update Pe Marti Hoon...

Update Tere Update se Pyar Karti Hoon
Teri Update Pe Marti Hoon
Update Tere Update se Pyar Karti Hoon

Rachana

Edited by Water. - 14 years ago

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#623

Worse part is...m off to bed now...it is 3:15 am.

So I will read it tomorrow morning....

Rachana

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#624

I thought I am writing this in the post I had reserved.

Sorry for the double post😭

Yay!!!

First one to post comments (Thanks to the edit option😉)

(I know I am being kiddish, but chalta hai kabhi kabhi😛)

That was a long wait for this update but the wait was worth it. Amazing update!!!

Have I ever told you that I love the way you maintain continuity in all your updates. The gifts were perfect-I loved the necklace. Thanks for posting the pic, helped in better visualization.

Maan remembers each and every thing related to Geet, I was pleasantly surprised after reading about the quartz thing. That was such a heart-touching gesture!!!

LOved the monologues here, both of Geet and later Maan. He can feel the change that has come in his life after marriage, the peace, the feeling of having someone waiting for you.

Geet:"Thank you."

And I knew it was not for the saree or the necklace'

They understand each other so well that they sometimes don't need words to express their feelings.

(But sometimes, they do)😛

Didn't know that Maan could be naughty too. Running to the closet and then coming out of it when Dadima knocked.

I was laughing at this line

Bade sher jaise baatein kar rahe the, aur Daadima koh dekte hi choohe bangaye?

Well said, Geet!😉

Aww, liked the sweet conversation which followed this. Maan is enjoying teasing his wifey.

And then the SF part. I thought you would put this in the next part so as to avoid any serious talks/monologues in this part. But it was good since it got sorted out in this part only. The way they discussed about SF while having dinner has come out really well.

There is a difference to the way both Maan and Geet react to any given situation. Maan doesn't listen to the whole thing and prefers to think about it in isolation before discussing about it. Whereas Geet wants to discuss first and then starts with her thought-process.

Liked the way Maan thought about everything, also pondering over the fact that even he took time to identify himself after the Sameera incident.

The part where Geet mentions about spotting the star when she felt herself being lost was so touching!

Relationships do change people. They help them to become more understanding, a bit mature, respectful. Love the understanding they have developed.

Liked the name part a lot, specially Mishti and Maan's monologues in this part😆

The broken wings part in the end of the part was too good.

I love the way you add analogies and symbolisms in your writings forcing me to think deeper😊

I loved the update. I read it like twice and I am now gonna read it once again😛 I never stop falling in love with this FF. It keeps on increasing with each update😊

Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#625

I have pasted the comment in the originally reserved post.

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nisharoyce

@nisharoyce

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#626

great one yaar
good u didnt rush them
i forgot to tell u i really liked it when he said
ziddi hai & thodi si tubelight hai bilkul meri tharah
& pleasant storms through out the part wow
i guessed they would move to the outhouse as always
to my biggest relief there is no out house in khurana mansion - good
& they are camping on their honeymoon - best
loved it
waiting for the next update

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#627

great part!

thanks for updating

con't soon

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jia147

@jia147

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#628

awesome........................ loved it........ i was really worth the wait.......:):):)

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#629

Mishti is good...You're totally right about saturdays..they'll stretch the storyline like elastic now to accomodate one more day..it's soon going to become boring..About Geet's look yesterday--I hated her hair & eye make up..she's such a good looking girl otherwise..I loved her look in 'Kurbaan hua' & 'Pee loon'..Maan looked hot but as you mentioned ,a trim beard would bring in more oooomph😊

Edited by tanya_vi - 14 years ago