FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2 - Page 29

Loved the update...they are just so happy to be with each other and belong to each other that the contentment overrides it all. Her "glowing like moon-kissed pearls" line was beautiful- very poetic.

Three cups of friendship...when she hugged me to tell me that she missed me.

A pinch of confrontation...when she questioned me about my decision to marry her.

A pint of gentle and togetherness...the way we sat at the window sitting the whole time.

A quart of understanding...the way she understood the emergency calls from office and my needs from her.

A gallon of passion...I smiled

And an immeasurable amout of love.

That recipe was awesome......loved it!

The update was so lovely! It was cute and romantic! They kind of cleared all the doubts that were troubling them......sorted out the confusions.....it was really great! Good that they weren't holding themselves back....they came out clear on their wants and expectations and all. Nice start to their new journey! That phone call part was funny.....lolz. You know, I wanted that window sitting part to be in this update......I personally found it too romantic the last time you had written....and you fulfilled my wish.....am just too happy! Lolz. Wonder how's Maan gonna react to Geet's decision of taking up the job at SF......can't wait to read more.....do continue soon.

Originally posted by: Hasini67

Ok. People please help me here.

Am I reading this right?

I have never looked at the section on the web page that is on the right and displays the

My Top 10 Topic and another tab that displays Popular Topic.

New FF: New York Times with Maan and Geet is one among the list of "Popular Topic"

Does this mean among all the Fan Fiction posts, our NY times is in TOP 10?

I didn't even know how long the post has been there in that list for I didn't see this section at all till date.

Please let me know. I'm not sure if this is something to be glad about or not for I don't understand how this is evaluated.

😲

Hasini

PART 41: Bridge to bliss…love the sound of that! First let me apologize…this week was crazy…Exams, papers, my b-day, plus guzaarish releasing (which I'm super excited about)….so I apologize for commenting so late!! But I wanna get to the longest and bestest post ever!! Hope you like and hope everything is well!!!

I love how she misses him, especially when he doesn't call her!!! And it's so sad that she's not used this kind of care!! But she likes it and that's so good b/c the poor thing faced the wrath of hell at such a young age!!!

Maan challenges geet and she succumbs to it….love her "chado"!!! Boy if there is someone who knows how to push geet's buttons…it's maan and only maan!!! What that's exactly how I like it!

The walk to the elevator…she comes close to him…whenever she gets scared, she looks to him for protection! And his eyebrows "teasing" her…I would look to see that in actuality…you described it so well!!!!

He makes her laugh…itna to kar sakte hain mere liye…so chweet!!! She laughs….i'm so happy!!!

Just imagining them close…sitting together in the booth…makes me melt..plus he calls her ziddi!!!

And then the hug…I love all the times she finds solace and protection in his arms!!! What a moment!! SO much passion. I loved the part where geet says his gaze encouraged her to look deeper into his eyes….Hasini…amazingly written….I love how you just have a way (effing amazing way) with words! And then he describes his touch like snow…even I can feel it!

"We were defining what we were to each other"-where do you come up with stuff like this?! But when she comes him/that point the reason of her existence….it was like I was reading a dream! She loves him, but it's nice not hearing the L-word..it's becoming so overrated and I like how you instead speak about her existence and the importance of him in it…that's much higher and means more than saying the "love"!

AGHHHHHHHH!!!!(that's me screaming in joy)…he KISSES her hand! WAIT! Did I read it correctly…YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! I def read it correctly! And he kissed away her pain…uff!!! Mar gayi!!!

And then Maan's monlouge(which since the last 5 parts, I always like more than geet's…don't know why): she came close and closed the distance between us! I couldn't fathom that he actually…HE…actually said that! And he decribes her skin like snow…it's a sign that both are def meant to be together…kya chemistry hai! But you did that on purpose, right?!

I'm so glad he's "following her like a puppy" (so chweet) and he's determined to know if she feels for him….which she does, but I'm so happy he's determined to know…yes! Go baby GO!!!! Awwwwww!! My fav part: he pulls her close and says the most EPIC thing ever:

"Tumhari…basha main…hot chocolate"

YAY!!!!! Love this to death!!!!!!!! And she wants to surrender so badly…I can just feel it, but why is she holding back! She wants it…I wish she wasn't taking so long to tell him her feelings! I mean he said and what more does a girl want, plus he's super supportive!!

He just wants to be with her…love his truth!! This proposal is so romantic and perfect..it's in the Darcy and SRK territory.

Awwww!!!! The pin number is her name…so chweet!!!

That poem was to die for….i'm getting some hot cocoa this very minute!!!!!

I love how he says that some boundaries were broken…but he still didn't regret what he did….he made all of us proud!!

I loved the glass wall imagery and how you described her with the word "clarity"….NICELY done!!! Very clever use of language!

YAY!!! Happy New Year…it's a fresh new year and fresh new start for maan and geet, especially geet!! I'm so happy…and I love how geet accepts him and way she does it!!!

She was to stay in HIS life till the END OF TIME…never have read more romantic lines than the ones you just wrote!!! Wah! Wah!! Wah!!!

So lemme go ahead and apologize again and again and again for being so late!!! But I'm gonna catch up this week-end…and so far I get the feeling there's gonna be a marriage…well the pics in the later parts give me that idea!!! I can't wait!! I kind of hope it snows this week so I can cuddle in bed with coffee/hot cocoa and just read all the parts!!! But I hope this isn' too long b/c I know you probably don't have time to read this super long post so if you don't want me to write such long posts…do let me know!!! I can't believe you updated so many parts w/in the week!!! You should get a special standing ovation for that!!!

I honestly love to dissect the characters who wrote with su much depth and the careful choice of images and words and dialogues you write!! I know you make such metaphors, languages, and symbolism for all us literary lovers!!! And you're one of the finest writers ever!! I mean…consider making this our job, you would def rake in the critical acclaim and moo-lah!! LOL!!

Originally posted by: Hasini67

Loved your sentence "you have reserved all my words..." there you go you are poet too now.
Yes Water is right, but you are right as well that I had mentioned in the first post that it will be short one, but unfortunately I did get a story line to get it go longer. I still dont know what is the ending part because, I only plan upto 10 parts at a time. So will drop a hint before the FF ends. For now you guys dont have to worry until 75, but not sure after that.

Another FF....Na Baba Na....let me finish this one.

Keep posting.

Hasini

@ Water: Are you the official FF spokesperson? You can have it if you want. 😉

Today's update is being rewritten as I'm not comfortable with Geet's mono and dialogues.
Should be in late evening.

Update tuuuuu...ab to aaja...😉