Originally posted by: pushpi
This update coming from Maan's POV made me more aware of his frustration and agony for his love for Geet. Since the past few updates, I've always said that my heart goes out to Maan more so than Geet and this was the culmination point where I'm completely into Maan now. "No matter how many times she dismissed me I bounced back, for I needed her more than she did. Anyone else would have been thrown out of my life in split seconds, but for her I was ready to endure anything I understood that she was going through a lot and needed attention, but then it became all about her. She had to get what she wanted too. Ziddi, bilkul mere tarah." This is just the beginning of your update and I'm also all sentimental on it!! He's been the ever accomodating and understanding Maan throughout the story and now he's weakening because he can't handle it anymore. For me it's like he's giving his all and not getting anything back.
"If it was the breath of air that brought back her desire to live, for me it was the breath that wanted me to pursue her more, for I already knew what it was to breathe without her." Did you aim to make the readers cry for this dear? How beautifully expressed were mere few words on his life without her. Just reading it again is making my heart ache.
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