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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jannat awesome promo am finished nw frm z begining till nw 😃
loves hw u continued it😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
promo was really breath taking.........it was tooo scary yaa............i hope ridhima and krish bot will be fine......and i m worried for ridhima as she has to face ANGRY ARMAAN i hope she will understand ARMAAN and plz update soon cant wait for the part...............


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Posted: 14 years ago
hi dear..!😊!..ur TALASH is very interesting....i liked it very much..nice work..👏👏update it soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
cool promo nd exciting one wud be waiting for ur update
do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG OMG !!

Great part Jannaaaattt !!!

Cont the next part soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
**** PART - 15 ****


*I M Confused*




RECAPE : -

"aaj kisi bhi haalat mei mujhe yaha se jana hoga apne krish ko lekar main aur dair nhi kar sakti…….."said riddhima to herself ………

"TUM????" a voice

Riddhima heared a yelling voice nd turned with a scared feeling dat someone had heared eveything thing which she said………

She looked at d person in fear nd horror

nd d person who was fuming in anger nd could blast any moment………..





CONTINUE...







Nd the person who was fuming in anger nd could blast any moment ……….. NAINA MALLIK

When naina didn't get any reply from riddhima

TUMHARI HIMAT KAISE HUI MERE GHAR MEI REHNE KI???????? TUMNHE YAHA REHNE KI IJAZAT KISNE DI??????" shouted naina in anger

"MAINE" ANOTHER THICK VOICE CAME FROM NAINA'S BACK

Both d huffling naina nd scared riddhima looked at armaan who was now standing behind naina

Na (angry nd shocked) - kya????

tumne ???? par kyu armaan???? kya tum itni jaldi bhul gaye isne kya kia tha????? Yeh krish ko lekar

" mujhe sab yaad hai…… yeh bhi ki yeh mera personal matter hai mom….. if u don't mind I don't want anyone ANYONE mom interffering in my matter….. " said armaan in a angry tone while cutting her sentence in middle

"Never armaan……… tum bhul sakte ho jo isne kia ……main kabhi nhi bhul sakti ki iski wajjah se tum kitna pareshan rahe ….aur waise bhi krish hume mil gaya hai toh hume iski kya jarurat……..aur kya bharosa iska fir se krish ko lekar bhag jaye " said naina in anger to make armaan angry on riddhima so dat she could get rid of her own fear dat is armaan fall for riddhima nd d way armaan was defending riddhima dat made naina more alert

Ar – I said dis is my matter mom I know how to handle dis plz…nd riddhima is my guest I hope u'll cooperate wid her … she 'll be staying wid us

Now naina was furious to see armaan is totally taking riddhima's side

On the other hand riddhima was in daze,shock to see armaan is fighting for her dat too wid his mother ……..but WHY????????

"NO…..ya toh yeh ghatiya ladki (pointed at riddhima) is ghar mei rahegi ya main……..armaan tum bhul rahe ho I m your mom,….. I know you will choose me over dis fatichar " said naina proudly

"RIGHT you are my mom but jisse aap fatichar keh rahi hai wo mere bete ki maa hai…. Nd right now krish need his mother " said armaan in frustration

Coz somewhere deep down in his heart he didn't like d way his mom was taking to riddhima or taking about her

But he ignored d feeling nd assured himself dat he is doing dis for krish coz he knew krish cant stay away from riddhima

Naina looked at armaan in anger nd shock to hear his sudden outburst dat too in front of riddhima …………. Riddhima was equally shocked but didn't dare to say a word

ON THE OTHER HAND

Hearing so loud voices krish woke up nd started crying

Riddhima nd armaan looked at krish nd riddhima ran to krish nd hugged him to assure him dat she is here

Armaan looked at krish nd riddhima nd turned to naina………..who was fuming in anger

Ar - mom aap apne room mei jaiye……we'll talk later……….krish already weak hai aur main nhi chahta usse koi bhi taklif ho

Naina left d room stomping her feets

Armaan walked to krish nd riddhima

but stopped in middle as he saw krish

riddhima was trying to calm krish but when krish saw armaan is coming towards him he thought armaan will separate him from his mother ………..coz of fear krish hugged riddhima wid his tiny hands more tightly nd hide his face in riddhima's neck

while whispering

"mumma……..*sob*…..bunny……….*sob*

….ganda……*sob*…hupp….."

(kids used to say HUPP when they inocently try to scare someone or want dat d person coming near them to stop)


Before tears could flow out of armaan eyes…………. armaan moved our of krish's room wid eyes full of tears……..

armaan thought may be if he 'll go near him right now he will be more scared

riddhima was still confused dat why armaan talked to his mother for her

her heart was continuously praising armaan

but her MIND started d work of cursing armaan nd working against armaan

though riddhima was still confused but her mind was totally against armaan nd atlast in HEART V/S MIND battle her mind won d battle

nd she didn't change d decision of running away from here

"MAIN JANTI HU TUMNE YEH SAB KYU KIA…….KYUKI AGAR TUMHARI MOM MUJHE YAHA SE NIKAL DETI TOH KRISH KABHI TUMHARE PAAS HI ATA AUR KYUKI YEH TUM BHI JANTE HO KI KRISH MERE BINA NHI REH SAKTA AUR TUM KRISH KO MERE SATH KABHI JAANE NHI DETE" said riddhima to herself to satisfy herself dat he did't fight for her he did all dat for his own good

"aur waise bhi akhir kab tak armaan apni mom ki baat talega…aaj nhi toh kal wo unki baat maan hi lega aur mujhe………….pause……..(she took a deep breath)……..aur mujhe yaha se nikal dega….mere krish se durr kar dega ………usne kaha tha ki main tabhi tak yaha hu jab tak krish ko mere bina rehne aadat nhi pad jati……iska matlab mere paas jyada waqt nhi hai…….kyuki armaan ki mom mujhse nafrat karti h aur wo puri koshish karegi ki mujhe yaha se jaldi se jaldi nikalva de" thought riddhima in fear of loosing krish

On the other hand armaan was also confused dat why he was so angry when naina shouted on riddhima nd accused her??????? Why he supported riddhima against his own mother????

But he didn't get any answer of his own questions………..but in last to assure himself nd to satisfy he thought

""ya coz krish started crying I shouted on mom"

But he forgot dat he shouted on naina before krish cried


IN NIGHT

Naina ate dinner in her room coz she was still working on her plan how to throw out riddhima from house

Armaan riddhima didn't take dinner coz they wnt to avoid each other after wat happened in morning

Nd krish d lucky boy got his dinner from his mother's hands riddhima feed him dinner (baby food)

All slept in their rooms

After d morning incident no more confusing incident took place

MID NIGHT

RIDDHIMA wake up in d middle of night to drink water she saw d jar in her room but d jar was empty she walk out of her towards kitchen her gaze fall on guards there were only two guards…..….not ten guards like before she saw when she first time came to armaan's house for krish

riddhima looked here nd there to conferm everyone is sleeping


"yahi sahi waqt hai...aisa mauka fir shayad kabhi na mile riddhima..."said riddhima to herself while looking at sleeping gaurds

Nd she ran in her room ……….. her gaze fall on sleeping krish nd tears rolled down from her eyes

"agar krish ko apne sath rakhna hai toh mujhe yaha se bhagna hi hoga...varna armaan mere bete ko mujhse aaj nhi toh kal hamesha ke liye durr kar dega"said riddhima wid welled eyes

Riddhima wiped her tears nd kissed on krish forehead ……..

she quickly packed a little bag for her nd krish nd took krish in her arms………nd came out of room nd waited for guards to move from exit gate………so dat she can run away

she saw one guard is going towards garden nd other is sleeping …….without maiking any noise nd wasting a second riddhima came out of mallik house…she started walking on road fast to reach d railway station to leave shimla as soon as possible





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Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Yeipeee 1st one to comment.......

okkkkk lets start with the begning....so Mr mallik is taking Riddhima's side nd that to over his mother.....hmmm nt bad yaar....kuch to hua hai,kuch ho gaya hai😉😆......oh god ye ridhhima bhi na why he think that armaan is bad😕.....aare Armaan kabhi bura ho sakta hai kya?😛😃...nahi na,.....chalo koi baat nahi yaar....samaj jaayegi.....finally ridzy bhaag hi gayi krish ko lekar😒.....nt fair.....ab subah Armaan ko pata lagega to usse kaisa feel hoga haan😕.....chalo do continue soon ok....I want to see Armaan's reaction.....thanks for the PM.....continue soon....take care...
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Edited by sweetdesire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

yeipeee 1st one.......🥳

RESERVED....
PLZZZZZ UPDATE SOON OK.....



updated dear............😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
when is d next update...plzzz update soon...awesome post...

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