Hogayi hai Mohabbat tumse......part-3 udtd

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helllooo everyone....
this is Arshia here....this is my first ff here....
inspired by one of my fav stories.....
comment/criticise....
PROLOGUE:
His eyes scanned her from top to bottom. She was wearing pink short skirt and white spaghetti strap top, her long beautiful legs,
her perfectly curved figure, her long beautiful dark brown hair with curls at the bottom and light brown streaks in between, her rosy lips and big sexy eyes with heavy mascara that complimented her fair complexion, "wat a beauty" is what Armaan thought while staring at her.
It was Nisha, the hottest girl of college.
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Armaan screamed " hey! you idiot! can't you see while walking or you have habit of crashing into guys!?"
He stared at her with more disgust. Riddhima quietly lifted her books and started walking away without a word.
He screamed ' "hey, are u deaf also along with being blind? Cant u hear I am talking to you , you ?"
She went near him and spoke in composed manner almost without any expression-
"first of all it was your mistake that we crashed, but as I can see that you aren't polite enough to apologize, I forgive you."
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"I told you bro! these two are best friends, inseperable. Nisha is totally dependent on Riddhima when it comes to make a decission. Nisha will never let that person come close to her who has insulted Riddhima.
So forget about dating her, it will never happpen"
"Are you challenging me???" Armaan asked angrily turning towards Rahul.
He was surprised at the way Nisha treated him. No girl has ever refused him. "If yes then don't because Armaan Mallik never loose, i will make her mine one day, you just wait and watch." Armaan said angrily and turned towards the direction the girls dissappeared.
Now he has to hook up Nisha. He will make her his in any way even if it meant to befriends with that Riddhima.
Now he will do anything to win Nisha, anything....
He smiled evilly to himself.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Character sketch:

ARMAAN (20)- hot and handsome , extremely charismatic, girls just love him. He is everything a girl dream of sweet, rich, impressive. He gets what he wants and can make any girl go on her knees by his magical voice and honey sweet talks.
RIDDHIMA(19)- An intelligent, studious and very reserved girl. She doesn't talk much and girl of very limited words. She never laughs and is very simple. She also wears frameless spectacles and very simple clothes but no body ever teases her b'coz all of dem require her notes or help some or the other time. However they do laugh at her at the back for being an arrogant behenji. Nobody knows anything about her or her family except for her one and only friend,Nisha, with whom she shares everything. They know each-other since childhood. She hates celebrations or partying. She is studying on a scholarship.
NISHA(19)- she is extremely hot and all boys in college just drool over her. She is best frends wid Riddhima and takes her advice in everything like selecting her bf's etc. she is extremely fashionable and extrovert, party lover. So students often wonder about her and Riddhima's friendship since she and Riddhima are poles apart. She is the only one who knows about Riddhima's family and past.

Riddhima and nisha are in same college. Riddhima lives in a rented apartment while nisha lives with her parents. However she spends bulk of her time at Riddhima's home.

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FIRST-PART

Trrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiinnnnngggggggggggg.......................

Armaan wakes up with a jerk hearing the alarm. He glance at the clock. "shit! i m late again! aaj college ka pehla din hai, agar aaj bhi late gaya to dad will kill me!" murmuring hegets out of his bed, towards bathroom.
After getting ready, he comes out of his room. He looks around the corridoor. Armaan sighs in relief not finding him around. He slowly move towards the dining hall through stairs. He scanned the place searching for someone.
"Armaan! your dad has left, you can come down now"
Armaan's mother said clearing his doubts.
Startled, Armaan turned around. His mother and sister aaliyah were having their breakfast. Armaan went to his mom ang gave a side hug "good morning mom!" greeting his mother he takes his place for breakfast.
"Good morning mere darpok bhai" aaliyah said teasing his brother. "Darpok kisko bola?!" Armaan asked gritting his teeth.
"aapko bola" aaliyah said giggling at his expressions and added
"dad se itna darte ho ke unke saamne nahi aate. you step out of your room only after making sure that he has left and go to bed before he returns, darpok nahi to aur kya!"
"I m not scared of him, i m just trying to avoid him" Armaan said coolly. "oh really!? and why is that?" aaliyah asked.
"Agar main unhe dikh gaya to phir se mujhe lecture dene lagenge, hitler!" Armaan retorted.
"Armaan! apne dad ke baare me aisa nahi kehte" sushma said angrily. "But mom! maine sach hi to kaha! He is always after me. hamesha daant te rehte hain bina kisi reason ke!' Armaan replied irritated.
"Tum harkatein bhi to aisi karte ho" sushma said.
"kya harkatein?! main kya koi terrorist hoon ya koi chor hoon?! Armaan retorted and added "he always gives me accusing
he always!".
Sushma knew its no use of explaining him now and further discussion on this topic will only make him angry and she didn't want him to be in a bad mood on his first day of college. "ok ab baatein band karo aur breakfast khatam karo varna college ke liye late ho jaoge" sushma said changing the topic.
"oke bye mom"Armaan said hugging his mom.
"bye bhai all the best" aaliya wished him. "bye aaloo" Armaan said grinning. "bhai! don't call me aaloo!" she whined. "ok aaloo! aaloo nahi kahunga aaloo" he said and left before she reacts.

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A black mercedes enters the college campus. The mirror rolls down and Armaan steps out. He is dressed in white shirt and jeans. All the girls are staring at him as he passes through the corridoor, smirking and winking at them. He was enjoying the attention, he always did. He glanced at the girls in corridoor, but none seems worthy of his special attention.
Then suddenly his eyes fell on a girl standing near principal's office, staring at a paper in her hand.
His eyes scanned her from top to bottom. She was wearing pink short skirt and white spaghetti strap top, her long beautiful legs,
her perfectly curved figure, her long beautiful dark brown hair with curls at the bottom and light brown streaks in between, her rosy lips and big sexy eyes with heavy mascara that complimented her fair complexion, "wat a beauty" is what Armaan thought while staring at her.
It was Nisha, the hottest girl of college.
He continued staring at her while walking in the corridor. Then a girl emerged out of the library which was in the same corridor, but her face was not visible as she was holding numerous books piled over one another in front of her face. She was walking in opposite direction to that of Armaan who was still busy staring at the gorgeous girl.
Armaan collided with the girl making the books in her hand fall. He came out of the trance and stared angrily at the girl.

She was busy collecting scattered books on the floor.

Armaan screamed " hey! you idiot! can't you see while walking or you have habit of crashing into guys!?"
He stared angrily at the girl who was by now busy collecting the books scattered on the floor wid her head down.
The girl looked up and gave Armaan a cold stare. Armaan stared her, she was wearing a simple red chudidaar, her hairs half open, she was staring at him with her large black eyes hidden behind unframmed spectacles. He stared at her with more disgust. Riddhima quietly lifted her books and started walking away without a word.
This disgusted Armaan more. How dare her leaving without a word of apology.
He screamed – "hey, are u deaf also along with being blind? Cant u hear I am talking to u , u ***?"

Riddhima stopped and turned and started moving towards Armaan. She went near him and stared directly into his eyes coldly and spoke in most calm and composed manner almost without any expression-

"Mr. whomsoever u are, first of all it was your mistake that we crashed, considering the fact dat I was holding books in front of my eyes, but as I can see that you aren't polite enough to apologize, I forgive you."

Saying this, she walked away leaving a fuming Armaan behind.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update dear
cont soon
n do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey arshia...

that was really nice...

nice concept....

n armaan scared of his dad...it must be shanky....

n aloo....that was amazing...but he is of so much attitude..

such a bad way wid which he spoke to rids...

update soon...

thnx for the pm...

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hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee good concept. update the nxt part soon. nd send me a pm.
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Part-2

Armaan was fuming with anger thinking 'How dare she talk to me like this and who the hell is she to forgive me!'..
He glanced at his watch, and made his way towards principals office.
He had to complete the formalities and collect his schedule. He made his way to his first class. Joining the session in mid term was going to be little hard but then again he was intelligent enough to catch up, also he can take some help from some intelligent hot babe though there are hardly any dames with brains in the world, if they can't help him atleast he'll get to spend some time with those girls he thought himself and chuckled.

He entered the class, standing at the door he glanced at the students, girls precisely. He saw the same girl he crashed to! 'wow! this is going to be fun, i'l show her real place to her' he thought and smirked. He stood there for some time then walked into the class. He looked around, all the benches were occupied leaving only two vacant, one beside that same girl and beside a boy on last bench. Sitting with that arrogant girl is definately a bad idea. Then he made his way towards back of the class and sat on the last seat besides same . "Hi, i m Rahul" he extended his hand towards him. "Hi, i m Armaan". "So Armaan, mid term admission! pichla college se kyun chod diya?!" Rahul asked him. "well, i didnt find it interesting enough to spend a whole year" Armaan replied with a smirk. After a while they became real good friends considering the fact that they had common interests like basketball, wrestling,…,girls etc.


"ok give me your number" Rahul said to Armaan taking out his mobile.
Armaan was about to take his mobile but while he turned around he saw a girl and smirked. He walked upto the girl and said in flirtitious way "Hey dear has anybody told you how beautiful you are!!!"

The girl blushed on being complimented by such a hot guy "well thanks"
she replied.

Armaan moved forward and said "Stretch your hands".
Confused girl did the samee. He caught hold of her hand and said without breaking the eyelock "Pen please."
The girl lost in his eyes gave him her pen.
He wrote a no. on her hand with her pen and said "Call me sometime baby."

He gave a quick peck on her cheeks and walked away with the pen, while girl continued watching him dreamily.

He went back to same winking while Rahul shooked his head.

"Hey why if u wanted pen I could have lend you " Rahul said to Armaan.

"Yeah but your cheeks aren't soft enough", Armaan said smiling.
Rahul shook his head.

Armaan noticed Rahul gazing towards the door , then he saw literally each guy was gazing there. He turned to see what they were gazing at and saw the same damsel on ground entering the class . She is just too hot and boy! She walks beautifully, Armaan thought while staring at her.

She advanced towards her seat and sat besides Riddhima.

'That's what happen when you come late you get to seat beside weird people' Armaan murmured under his breath seeing this.

"Did u say something?" Rahul asked looking at him.

"Huhh…wat? No… I mean that girl she is damn gorgeous." Armaan replised still looking at that girl.

"U mean Nisha .Well she is the hottest girl of our college." Rahul said.

"Nisha. So thats the name of Armaan's soon to be girlfriend." Armaan said looking at her.

"What do u mean?" Rahul asked.

"Well I have decided to date her." Armaan said cooly.

"But u hardly know her!" Rahul said confused.

"ya but she is beautiful ,popular and hence deserves to be with me. And I think its pretty much fair for the hottest girl of the college to date the hottest guy of college." Armaan said leaning back to backrest.

"Well I sincerely doubt that. Its really difficult to hook her." Rahul said. He himself had been trying it since some time.

"What do u mean? Its virtually impossible for any girl to resist Armaan Mallik's charm." Armaan said clearing his doubts.

"Well I am not talking about her. She is pretty much easy to impress. She might not reject you but her friend may, who is pretty much difficult." Rahul said.

"And how does that matter?" Armaan asked raising his eyebrows.

"U will get to know it soon by yourself" Rahul replied with a smile.

Here nisha and Riddhima were engrossed in their chat.
"so did you like my dress?" nisha excitedly asked Riddhima.
"yeah, its ok." Riddhima replied not even looking at her knowing perfectly hoe her dress would be.

"whatt? ok? you find it just ok???" nisha asked, her eyes wide open in horror, not believing what her friend just said that her dress is just 'ok'!!

"i spent my whole day in buying dresses and you find it 'jus ok'"
Nisha exclaimed.

"ok ok! you are looking gorgeous and your dress is beautiful"
Riddhima replied calming her down.

"that was so sweet of you" nisha said in sarcastic tone.

Riddhima smiled and shook her head. she went back to her book and got totally engrossed in it. Meanwhile nisha looked around at the class, every guy was looking at her as if they are here for ages just waiting for her. Her eyes fell on a guy, sitting on last bench. She found that he too was staring at here. She examined his face and boy! he was dangerously handsome!. Their eyelock was broken by professors entry.


Professor entered and made her way to her seat.

She called Armaan and made him face the students.

"I want all of u to meet Mr. Armaan Mallik who has joined our college today only." professor introduced her new student to the class.


Then she faced Armaan and spoke up.

"since you have joined in the mid term you may find it difficult to catch up in the classes, so I think it would be better if I appoint a student to help you in your studies.

"It will be very kind of you." Armaan said.

She faced the class and after looking through certain students called out "Riddhima, I would like you to volunteer"

'Riddhima' beautiful name,Armaan thought as he heard prof. calling.

Riddhima stood up reluctantly and quietly nodded in yes. After all she never disobeyed her teachers.

Armaan was shocked out of wits as he saw her standing up. 'what!!! she is Riddhima?!!'

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nice part....
plz add me 2 ur pm list....😊
cont soon...😊
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Hey dear how u know me? I mean u r not in my buddy list also but since u pm me. I am very grateful . The intro part was outstanding. Hoping to read more 4m u . Thanks 4 the pm and also pm me next time. Ok.
Luv,
Ananya
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woowww that was amazing...

simply beautiful part...

ab ayega maza...

thnx for the pm...........

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