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Posted: 14 years ago
great update sonu.


AWWWWW WHY ARE YOU LEAVING?
only sunday? yeh toh bohot bura hua :(
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jannat4ever

hey sonu awesome update dear
but their was no ar.........😕
armaan plzzzzzzzzzz come back yar
sonu bring him back home so dat we can see ar...😛

but d note was sad
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh
but do come to if soonnnnnnn i mean try to come at least 2 times in week
nd ya i understand studies take a lot of time......😕
but plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soonnnnnnnnn
take care

luv
jannat

hey jannat di,
thanks for the comment.
i will definetly try to come atleast 2 times in a week but i can't promiss.
i'll come once in a week for sure.
thanks for understanding.
love
sonu
Edited by soul_desire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niki.5

hey sonu

lve the part
sorry yar no biggy comments
as u knw my exams
luv nikita

hey nikdi,
thanks for the comment and its ok.
i can understand.
all the best for the exams.
love
sonu
Edited by soul_desire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Amona

hey sonu!!!

dont b sad dear!!
its ok...study hard...n ya nice part!!
really lykd it!!
its ok n take ur tym...no prbz...
just tc...
🤗
AMOON

hey mona di,
thanks for the comment.
thank u so much for understanding.
love
sonu
Edited by soul_desire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ammyridz600

hey sis 🤗 lovely update
loves muski n rahul parts
muski 2 rahul- main chudail toh to drakula 🤣
ek toh chori karta hai upper se juban ladata hai 🤣 omg muski still thinking that rahool is a chor 😆
lol rahul bhaisa languor🤣 muski n her names 😆😆😆
kamine ab khamba jaise khada kyon hai nikhal jao mere kamne se warna sab ko bula loongi ,now rahool in challenging mode 😉 bula like cool dude😎 aww rahool tune kiske saat panga liya 🤣 muski screamed mamaji papaji baaaaaaaaa 😆😆😆my chatterbox iz nver scared of challenges😉 she iz bindas 😉
muski-oye mere ghade ko dard ho raha hai.poor rahul he got soooooo many beautiful names😆😆😆
loves muski gift sooooo hatke😉 so sweet of rahul❤️ thx 2 his best friend armaan idea😎.
loves muski n her parents convo n z family hug , soooooooooooo cute😊

ARmaan working place
aww its a bit weird 2 see armaan working as a businessman , but looks good, 4 a change😊 hey little sis missed armaan n basanti knok jhok .

hey sonu , good job 👏👏👏
precap hope armaan try 2 handle z situation n managed 2 convinced all z workers😊
hey hope in nxt update we get 2 see ammy n basanti😊


lots of loves,
yunika Di



hey yun di,
thank u so much for the lovely long comments.
its good to know u r liking it.
love
sonu
Edited by soul_desire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DRarmaanfan

hey dear
nice update
bt note was sad
bt we understand that study is more important
cont soon
thanx 4 pm

hey dear,
thank u so much for the comment.
thanks for understanding.
love
sonu
Edited by soul_desire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ammyridz600


hey sis ,its ok ya , i can understand ,afterall studies comes 1st
will wait 4 yr updates on sundays


hey di,
thank u so much for understanding.
i'll definetly update on sundays and will give pms to i promiss.
love
sonu
Edited by soul_desire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saniashzadi_10

sory sonu..cant comment on ur previous parts..(hpe u rembr my reasons n forgive me😃)

all updates r really sweet sp. AR encounterz r ssshhhhooooo ssswweeet....like da ridz new nick BASANTI...😆

read ur note..i can understand dear...all da best fr ur college

love

sania

hey di,
thanks for the comment.
no need to say sorry i can fully understand ur situation coz even i am gonna face this.
thanks for understanding me.
love
sonu
Edited by soul_desire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shonagudia

Nice part... I hope nothing will be wrong with Arman... I am wondering what will be Atul's role in this FF. I was missing him in this story. Good that you brought him in.

Yeah i can understand study do take hell lot of time. (i am over with that 😉) . Do take your time and don't stress yourself too much. I am sure this forum will help you to keep your cool during tough time.

Update soon.. Thnx for the pm... Take care..

hey dear,
thanks for the comment.
thanks for understanding.
love
sonu
Edited by soul_desire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago





Problems


Armaan asked some people of basti and finally found raghav's house. He knocked on the door. The person opened the door and questioned shocked "aap?????????"



"Haan main ander aa sakta hoon?" the person let him come inside and asked little confused "aap yahaan kya kar rahe hain"



"Huh! tumhare ghar aaya hoon toh tumse milne hi aaounga naa?"



"Magar maine pehle hi kisi se bhi milne se inkaar kar diya tha"



"Janta hoon tabhi toh mujhe yahaan aane ki takleef karni padi"



"Dekhiye mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni"



"Raghav relax main bhi yahaan koi baat karne nahi aaya hoon sirf ek offer dene aaya hoon"



"Offer??" asked raghav confused.



"Haan offer main janta hoon tum ye sab kyon aur kiske kahne per kar rahe ho dekho yeh sab karke tumhe kya mil jayega? ya ye kahoon kitna mil jayrga?"



"Ye aap kya keh rahe hai?"



"Wahi jo tum sun bhi rahe ho aur samajh bhi rahe ho. Dekho raghav tum strike karane ka plan bana rahe ho main janta hoon. Baat sirf itni hai ki tumne reason bohot hi kamjor chuna hai. Mujhe aapni factory chalani hai toh main to worker's ki demand maan ker unhe increment de dunga phir..*pause* phir tumhe kya mil jayega haan?"



"Aap kahana kya chahate hain?"



"Bas itna ki ager tum meri baat man lo aur strike naa karvao toh"



"Toh??"



"Toh deal wahi rahegi aur kimat dugani"



"Lekin main aap per bharosa kyon karu?"



"Kyonki is waqt tumhare paas koi aur rasta bhi nahi hai mere saath haat milaoge toh fayde me rahoge"



"Per aap yeh sab kyon kar rahe hai"



"It's simple main aapni factory main koi problem nahi chahata wo bhi itne important project ke time... soch lo fayda tumhara hi hai ager meri baat samajh me aa jaye to kal mujhse factory me aaker milna"



With that he moved from there leaving raghav in deep thoughts. It was 8 now and as it was rural area there was a light problem. So there was complete dark. he was moving towards the road to factory. Armaan has instructed Ajit to send a car for him outside the basti. He was about to reach his destination when some people surrounded him from all the sides. he looked towards them confused.



"Armaan Mallik!" someone called him. He turned towards the source. he can still recognize the person in deem pole light and was not really shocked as he was expecting him but not this way''



"Tum yahaan?" asked Armaan he knew the reason but still he asked.



"Jahan tum wahaan main after all we are best friends right?" said the person with the evil grin.



"Huh yaa ofcourse waise maanna padegi kafi achchi tayaari kar li thi tune but sab bekar ho gaya" to which the person laughed out loud "achcha? aur ye tumse kisne kaha?"



"Hmm you know what tum kuch bhi kar lo mujhe se ek kadam piche hi rahoge" said Armaan with the smirk.



"Ohho someone needs a reality check' Armaan you are always like this overconfident but my dear not this time"



"Achcha kya kar loge tum haan? tumhe kya laga strike kara ke tum jeet jaoge"



"Jeet toh main jaouga lekin is baar khushi dugani hogi' tum yahaan aa toh gaye wapas nahi ja paoge"



"Aur koun rokega mujhe tumhare ye bhade ke tattu? Grow up man abhi bhi wahi purani ghisi piti chale try something new"



"Well we'll see that ager tum bach gaye toh jo ki hoga nahi" the person turn toward goons "yeh yahaan se bachke nahi jaana chahiye warna main tumhe maar daloonga samjhe" and with that he moved from there.



Now goons turned their attention towards Armaan and started moving towards him Armaan looked towards all of them and then the goon attack on him but Armaan was the way more powerful for them. He beaten them black blue when suddenly one of the goon hit something on his head from behind...



"Aah" he groaned in pain and fainted. One of the goons pulled out the knife and was about to stab him when suddenly the light flashed from all the sides. The goons cover their eyes in order to prevent the sharp lights. It was Ajit, he was waiting for Armaan from 3 hours and he was not back yet. After reaching factory he immediately sent the car for him. He was now worried so he decided to go himself. he has already called police. So, soon they also arrived and Ajit came with them to basti.



Ajit get off from the car and saw Armaan on the ground. Ajit was in hospital now he immediately pull out his mobile and dial Atul's number(he was hospital in puna city now )



Sanjay come back to the house he just arrived form Bangalore. Atul was already there as it was 10.00 now he was working on his laptop. He was deeply engrossed in his work when suddenly his phone rang.



"Haan Ajit' What???... Yeh kab?... Wo thik hai na?... Oh god tumhari doctor se baat hui?... Nahi?... Thik hai main aa raha hoon' Haan"



Sanjay was heading to his room when he heard the voices from study and moved towards study. Atul stood immediately Sanjay came inside study'"



"Atul???????????"



"Dad???????????"



"Kya hua Atul?"



"Aap kab aaye dad?"



"Main to abhi aaya lekin tujhe kya hua itna pareshan kyon lag raha hai?"



"dad... dad... wo... dad... ammy" Sanjay got alarmed and asked "kya hua ammy ko? kahaan hai wo? thik hai naa? kahaan hain wo? tu kuch bolata kyon nahi kahaan hain wo?"



"Dad... dad... ammy hospital me hain"



"Hospital kyon? kya?????????"



"Dad wo puna gaya tha aur" but Sanjay cut him in between "Puna puna kyon gaya wo? tumne roka kyon nahi?" Atul was confused now he knew that his father must be worried but still how was he supposed to stop Armaan.



"Atul tum bade bhai ho uske uska dhyaan rakhana chahiye tha tumhe tum itna nahi kar sakte?"



"Dad main*pause* dad puna me problem ho gayi thi"



"Main janta hoon" he picked up his phone and dialed a number'



"Hello' Yes this is Sanjay Mallik... bhasker puna jane ke arrangement karo abhi isi waqt' bhasker don't ask stupid questions just do as I said" shouted Sanjay at his PA and cut the call.



"dad' dad just relax he will be fine aap tension mat lijiye Ajit hain wahaan.. aapka BP badh jayega"



"What do u mean? Main tension na loon my son is in hospital and you are saying main tension na loon"



"Dad I know main bhi pareshan hoon lekin aap is tarah apni tabiyat kharb kar lenge"



"pareshan aur tum? ager pareshan hote to use puna nahi jane dete rokte use, mujhe tak nahi bataye"



"dad aap aisa kyon keh rahe hain?"



"toh kya kahon? tumhe toh koi parwah hi nahi hai mujhe uske paas jaana hain bas"



"dad mujhe uski parwah hai aap use jante hain naa maine kahaa tha ki main sath chalta hoon per wo maana nahi"



"Toh kya hua bade bhai ho itna nahi kar sakte the?"



"Dad clam down hum abhi chalte hain" Atul put his hand on his shoulder consoling him he knew that sanjay was hell worried and when it comes to Armaan it gets way too much. Sanjay loves him too much to think anything that's why he was behaving like this.



Sanjay clam down a bit and said "tumne use nahi jane dena tha use kuch ho gaya to" tears rolled down from his eyes.



"Dad?" Atul was shocked to see this.



"Dad aap aise kyon?"



"Atul pichali bar *pause* ager use kuch bhi hua to main nahi ji paunga ab aur kuch khone ki himmat nahi hai mujhme"



"Dad kuch nahi hoga" atul hugged him and consoled his dad while sanjay was crying.



Soon they arrieved puna and moved directly towards hospital.



"Ajit"



"Oh SM sir Atul sir"



"Ajit Armaan kaisa hai" asked worried Sanjay.



"Sir sab thik hai doctor ne kaha hai chot jyada gehri nahi hai"



"Kaha hai wo?" asked Atul.



"Sir wo ander hai unhe abhi hosh nahi aaya hai"



"Hmm" Atul turned toward Sanjay, who was looking towards Armaan though small circular glass area on the door "dad main doctor se milke aata hoon aap ammy ke paas baithiye"



Nodding his head Sanjay entered the room. he saw Armaan on the bed with slight frown on his face, With some needles and AV in his wrist. He sat beside him and caressed his hair. Soon the frown subsides and the peaceful look came over his face.



Sanjay's eyes become moist he loved his child so much that he cannot see him in pain. His little sunshine was in pain. His tiger' His boy was here' he was craving to hear his voice to hear 'dad' from him. Sanjay felt a hand on his shoulder and turned to look toward the person.



Atul came in from of him. he caressed Armaan's face and now turn to sanjay. Atul wipes Sanjay's tears and said in soothing voice "dad he is fine I have talked to doctor he said he will be fine" to which Sanjay just nodded.



Atul came out of the room as he knew Sanjay needed to be alone this time Sanjay was in ammy's room. Atul pulls out his mobile phone and dial a number.



"Hello' hello Anjali' Haan Anjali sab thik hai' Nahi abhi nahi doctor ne kaha kal tak hosh aa jayega' Nahi unhe mat batana wo pareshan ho jayenge' Nahi Anjali Rahul ki shadi hai' Tum wahi raho Anjali tumhari wahaan jarurat hai' Don't worry he is fine' Haan papa bhi thik hai jaara upset hai' Haan' Rahul ko bilkul pata mat lagne dena'. Haam main koshish karoonga' Ok' Take care' Bye" with that he ended the call.



In morning

Whole night Sanjay was with Armaan by his side, sleep was far away from his eyes. he was one hell concerned father. Armaan stirred a bit and moved his head left to right. Sanjay saw this and kept his hand on Armaan's forehand "ammy' Hey ammy boy" Armaan opened his eyes slowly hearing the gentle loving voice of his father and murmured slowly "dad?"



"Haan beta I am here just here relax" Armaan was now awake fully.



"So my tiger is feeling better?????"



"Yes dad aahhh" he groaned in pain as he tried to sit Sanjay pushed him back gently and said "utho mat ammy aaram karo"



"Dad per aap yahaan"



"Haan tune toh dara hi diya tha"



"Come on dad mujhe kuch nahi hua I am perfectly fine"



"Yaa I can see that"



"Hey dad" Atul entered the room with coffee mug.



"Hey bhai"



"Ammy tujhe hosh aa gaya thank god tune toh hame dara hi diya tha"



"Oh god" he groaned.



"Kya hua?" asked Atul and Sanjay at the same time.



"That's sit' I knew it' aap dono ek hi baat kyon bolte ho try something new" said Armaan to get smacked by Atul.



"Awwo bhai" winced Armaan.



"Atul ?" warned Sanjay glaring at him.



"Sorry dad"



"Hmm tum ammy ke paas baitho main fresh hoker aata hoon" and with that Sanjay moved out of the room.



"So ammy how are you?" asked Atul.



"I am fine bhai lekin I thing u are not fine dad ne phir se"



"Yaa as usual hamesha teri wajah se mujhe daant padti hai" to which Armaan chuckled.



"Stop doing that ammy hum sab sach me bohot dar gaye the pata hai dad yahaan se hile bhi nahi aur Anjali wo to her 15 minute ke baad phone karti hai"



"Aur aap bhai?"



"Main kya haan?" said Atul tried to control his emotions as in this whole situation he tried to be strong as Sanjay was already worried like hell but it was truth that he was also scared for his one and only brother.



"Bhai?" said Armaan putting his hand on Atul's shoulder.



"Kya bhai haan? jaan nikal di thi tune kyon karta hai ye sab?"



"Sorry bhai" said Armaan with puppy face to which Atul just hug him "aainda aisa kabhi mat karna"



*knock*



*knock*



Ajit peeped inside any asked "may I come in sir?"



"Haan aao Ajit" said Armaan.



"Ajit tum itni subah?" asked Atul.



"Haan sir wo main bas Sir ko dekhane aaya tha"



"Oh thik hai tum dono baat karo mai abhi aata hoon" he moved out as his phone was ringing and the caller was obviously Anjali.



"Good morning sir"



"Good morning"



"Kaise hain aap sir?"



"Main thik hoon Ajit *pause*Jo maine kaha tha wo hua?"



"Ji sir maine workers se baat kar li thi sab kuch waise hi chal raha hai jaisa aapne kaha tha"



"Hmm thik hai tum plan ka step 2 perform karo yaad hai na kya karna hai?"



"Ji sir aap phikar mat kijiye sab waise hi hoga jaise aapne plan kiya hai"



"hmm'"



"Achacha sir main chalta hoon"



"Thik hain mujhe phone per inform kar dena mujhe aaj wapas jana hai"



"Ji sir, good day sir"



"Good day Ajit and all the best"



"Thank u sir" with that Ajit left from there.



It was 2.00 in the afternoon now. Sanjay was on phone. Atul was with Armaan as they were making preparations to move him as Atul got doctor's permission and doctor discharged Armaan. Suddenly Sanjay entered with the phone



"Ammy"



"Yes dad"



"Its Ajit use tujse kuch baat karni hai"



"Haan dad"



"Hello' That's great Ajit' Aur unka kya hua' Main janta tha' Thik hai tum aaj yahin ruko' Thik hai' Bye" he ended the call and smiled widely. Atul and Sanjay looked towards him and asked "kya hua?"



He told them about his plan. He has given the offer to union leader and instructed Ajit to talk to workers and tell them that the union leader is fraud and using them for his own well being. Here, union leader got attracted to Armaan's offer and came to office to meet him where Ajit was already waiting for him. Ajit handle him the money and raghav moved out happily only to get shocked next moment. he saw the whole workers team was there they saw him with money. It all turn out to be good. workers were now against raghav. Ajit got the money back from him and handle him his termination latter and rest of the workers moved back to their work and like this the problem got solved. It was all Armaan's plan to expose union leader in front of workers and it surely worked.



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Edited by -SmokySapphira- - 12 years ago

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