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Posted: 14 years ago

#1151

Originally posted by: anushkajain

den toh i will also wait 1000%😆

1001%😛😆
😆

Edited by kavyaa - 14 years ago

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sjain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1152

I all ready for "jagraata"....😆

my night out with TWOs....wohoooo😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1153

Originally posted by: sjain
I all ready for "jagraata"....😆

my night out with TWOs....wohoooo😆

😆 jai zappy mata ki!!! jai TWOS baba ki!!!😆😆😆
NO Offense!!

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z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1154

post updated - pg 134

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sjain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1155

Originally posted by: kavyaa

😆 jai zappy mata ki!!! jai TWOS baba ki!!!😆😆😆
NO Offense!!

pyaar se bolo

jai TWOS ki

mil ke bolo

jai TWOS ki

prem se bolo

jai TWOS ki

saare bolo

jai TWOS ki..

dil se bolo

jai TWOS ki....🤣😛

Edited by sjain - 14 years ago

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sjain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1156

Originally posted by: zephyrr
post updated - pg 134

thanx ..gud night and byee😛

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Anokhee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1157

Hi....

And a big sorry for no comment for so long....

Castle kept me a little busy along with little studying😛

Anyway, about this part... "SupArmaan" has got to be the best...

That was so apt... how did you even think of it!!! That was some mind-blowing innovation...

And as much as I hate to say it... I love Shashank right now...

He's making it fun to read....😆

But the romance and the intimacy you put in was HOT!!!

But, I dont know why it seemed a little incomplete or you know, skipped or something...

I mean, you were building the scene to a climax and suddenly it vanished and skipped to the next part....

And also, I dont know why has the awkwardness returned in their relationship??

Didnt they make peace with the awkwardness after the aftermath of their intimacy? Hadnt they thought of being comfortable and nonchalant about it? Why is Ridhima all awkward suddenly?

But I loved the way he was returning her things to her one by one.....

That was cute...

And also, the suspense is killing me....

I want to know whats with Dr. Shubhankar and Armaan and Singapore??

Are Armaan and Ridhima going to Singapore for a short trip?? Please say YES!!!

And also Im dying to know Armaan's reason for freezing himself on terrace...

I mean I know vaguely about how he feels... But cant exactly relate to what he feels....

Try bringing that up soon!

And last but not the least, Armaan's tattoo...

Why dont you make Ridhima actually find out for herself? I mean its not too much of an effort with google around?😛😆

**Edited**

The third installment bowled me....

I swear....

I didnt think his mom's death anniversary was the reason....

OMG, I LOVE this Armaan.......

But I ADORE Ridhima....

Everyone says Armaan is perfect but Ridhima is beyond perfect in this FF...

Armaan has to just realise that he can only sort out this mess with her... She is the only one who can help him set his life straight....

A simply AWESOME part!!!

Keep it coming Zappy!!!!!!!

Love,

Anokhee

Edited by Anokhee - 14 years ago

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shonagudia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1158

Hey Zappy.

The third part was mind blowing. superb, fantastic......... (Aur words yaad nnahi araha hai 😊) I never ever thought about his Mom's death anniversary will be one of the reason... Awww feel very sad seeing Arman like this. But why he is hiding things from Ridhima. I know he doesn't want to make her sad but he is doing the same thing by not telling her. Yeh BOYS stupid hote hain .. They think they can take pain where the truth is they only need lots of care and support.

I love Ridhima in your Story. She is superb yaar.She understand Arman more than anything. Loved the last scene between them where no words were necessary to express the feelings . And she just held him close to herself and console him. Love the LOVE STORY in your story.

Yaar ek qsn hai ??? If Arman needs to go for 2 days then why can't he take Ridhima along , finish the operation and come back... Inthis way they will get 2/3 days alone also na 😉... And we will also get so many AR moments without any disturbance....😊

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maha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1159

the part was amaing and emotional tooo :( i feel bad for armaan :"(

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z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1160

Originally posted by: Anokhee
Hi....

And a big sorry for no comment for so long....

Castle kept me a little busy along with little studying😛

Anyway, about this part... "SupArmaan" has got to be the best...

That was so apt... how did you even think of it!!! That was some mind-blowing innovation...

And as much as I hate to say it... I love Shashank right now...

He's making it fun to read....😆

But the romance and the intimacy you put in was HOT!!!

But, I dont know why it seemed a little incomplete or you know, skipped or something...

I mean, you were building the scene to a climax and suddenly it vanished and skipped to the next part....

And also, I dont know why has the awkwardness returned in their relationship??

Didnt they make peace with the awkwardness after the aftermath of their intimacy? Hadnt they thought of being comfortable and nonchalant about it? Why is Ridhima all awkward suddenly?

But I loved the way he was returning her things to her one by one.....

That was cute...

And also, the suspense is killing me....

I want to know whats with Dr. Shubhankar and Armaan and Singapore??

Are Armaan and Ridhima going to Singapore for a short trip?? Please say YES!!!

And also Im dying to know Armaan's reason for freezing himself on terrace...

I mean I know vaguely about how he feels... But cant exactly relate to what he feels....

Try bringing that up soon!

And last but not the least, Armaan's tattoo...

Why dont you make Ridhima actually find out for herself? I mean its not too much of an effort with google around?😛😆

**Edited**

The third installment bowled me....

I swear....

I didnt think his mom's death anniversary was the reason....

OMG, I LOVE this Armaan.......

But I ADORE Ridhima....

Everyone says Armaan is perfect but Ridhima is beyond perfect in this FF...

Armaan has to just realise that he can only sort out this mess with her... She is the only one who can help him set his life straight....

A simply AWESOME part!!!

Keep it coming Zappy!!!!!!!

Love,

Anokhee

Hey Anokhee!

Long time.. but keep it up with Castle.. i am following season 3 on youtube.. gotto download it when the season completes..

anyway thanks for you extralong comment.. at first i was wondering how you didnt understand all of Armaan's problems since i mentioned them in clear words..😕 but then i saw the edited comment.. yeah all that was in the third installemnt,😊

well about SupArmaan.. well i laughed crazy when i wrote it.. i could so imagine Armaan saying something like that.. well i am glad you guys relate to my sad sense of humor.. main akeli nahi hoon.. lol!! 😆😆

About their intimate scene. uh.. this was the first time after their so called reunion that they went all out and made out with each other..😉😳 never got the time before this.. lol!! thanks to shanks remember.. lol!!😆 and due to the distance they forgot what it felt like. hence awkward..😳 same old.. same old..

also considering i left the scene as you said skipped or incomplete.. well that l left for the readers imagination lol!!

no seriously, even after 80 parts of writingTWOS! i am still a novice at writing, and this i assure you.. and many times i picture a scene differently and it turns out to be something different.. so when i wrote it, i thought it out that way.. to take it to a climax and leave it to your imagination. 😉 but it didnt work out.. i got a lot of people telling me it suddenly jumped from there to Riddhima's place.. but i was just trying something new! that's all..😊

and i am so glad you thought the third installment was good. coz i was apprehensive about that one.. too mushy!? Armaan's behaviour is just an aftermath of that painful separation that they went through.. and Riddhima is not as prefect as you think.. nor is Armaan.. well.. he's already shown why he isnt perfect.. next its her turn.. wait for it.. but its true she is the one who can set his life straight..

i talk a lot, dont i! long parts.. long replies.. anyway..

until next time.. see ya in thread six.. that is unbelivable.. lol!!😆😃