#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 - Page 23

dnt think its a crap ok
itssssss soooooo nice &plzzzzzzzzzz continue
sorry if u felt bad tht smtimes u dint get feedback
reallyyyyy sorryyyyyyyyyy

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

</div>no yaar its a gr88 ff
<div>soo plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont end it ........

thanks for the support 😊

Originally posted by: marzia

awwwwee we truly appreciate ur efforts. Honestly, i love ur ff. I m a silent reader and i never thought about how u would feel when u never recieved any comments. But plzz plz plzzz dont stop writing. We all love ur writing. I m sorry if i have hurt u

oops i guess i got over emotional..heya you dint hurt me...thanks for the support... Will surely continua now..i just wanted to know if people really liked it or not..😊😊😊

Originally posted by: untaimedtigress

comon pal who says its not good,its really very nice ,honestly,i keep visiting the forum now and then just to check on your updates,plz dont get disheartened i dunno bout others but i just live to read ur FF plz do cotinue updating and stop bothering bout those who dont like it,think bout those who do,accepting challenges is a key to success,i really appreciate u try managing it wid ur busy schedule😊,once again i love uf work plz dond stop ,and dont deprive us of the fun we have reading such wonderfil stuff,anxiously waiting for the next part.

P.S:

cud u pls add me to ur pm list andif u can and find it convenient just inform me bout the next updates so that i dont miss out in them😊?

thank ya loads buddy..for getting of back to high spirits...😊😊will surely let ya know about my next update...😊😊😊

Originally posted by: Preethi-Premi

[Can you please PM me when you update dear! this is an awesome FF!!!

ya sure..why not... 😆

Originally posted by: rsroopali

dnt think its a crap ok
itssssss soooooo nice &plzzzzzzzzzz continue
sorry if u felt bad tht smtimes u dint get feedback
reallyyyyy sorryyyyyyyyyy

Please..dunn be sorry..am feeling kinda guilty now..will be right back with the update.. 😳 😳

PART 15
Maan hit vickey on his stomach..
very hard..
Blood ran from his nose..
vickey stopped his hand at the time of second punch..relax lover boy..
a gift for you..
and pointed towards projector..
and said..lets get recap of what exactly happened..
maan was boiling now..
he screamed.. You r*s*el..you *asta*d you think am scared..
oh realy..
me to dar gaya..
vickey smirked and clicked play..
maan was prepared for it..
he picked up the stool..
Threw it on the screen..
adi switched of the lights..
Maan took out the cd..
and said tu mujhe is se darayega..
and broke it..
vickey smirked ..i have 10 copies...
maan said oh really maan singh khurana to dar gaya vikas urf vickey..
he said..geet ko hath lagane se pehale...
apni maut ki dua mangi thi na..
Le aj teri murad puri karunga..
he leaped upon him like a hungry lion
vickey was taken aback..

He dint expect maan to be this much crazy
maan had mixed emotions of love for geet and anger for these a*****es

dev caught hold of vinay who was trying to run away..abi kaha ja raha hai mere yar t.uje jo picture dikhani thi sab ko wo to hume pasand nahi ayi..
ab hamari picture dekh beta..
maan kicked his worst kick on vickey's private part..
He fel on the floor..
every one was shocked...
dev told all the drug and night abusers and the dalals ..picture khatam..
sab ghar jao..
go kids..
Or else today daddy yaha bohat angry hai..
you wont be able to face him right..
so run for life..
gud nyte..
every one rushed out seeing maan in anger.. Maan sat on vickey..
punched him hardly...
blood was oozing out of vickey..
Maan dint stop
he had wore his sprint shoes which had nails in it..
Maan kept on punching him..
He dint even let vickey react..
He was too powerful for vickey to handle..

Vickey begged for life..
maan dint give up..

his eyes could see the scene of geet entering the room with bedsheet..
then falling on floor bare in front of all ..
then bathroom..
those sobs..
Those screams..
That pain..
Those crying eyes..
he screamed..you took her innocence away..
what did you Think before doing this act no one will love her after wat you did to her..
you will blackmail her...
you will abuse her more..
the way you want..
you scoundrel.
you took things wrong you @/=]? you #=*/=<)
you touched maan singh khurana's love.. You are mistaken dude..
he took an iron chair..
and hit it on his head..
it bled..
vickey cried in pain..maan maf karde..
please galti ho gayi..
maan yelled..ise tu galth kehata hai..
Paap hai ye..
maf kar du tujhe..
kaise kar du maf
use isse kahi jyada dard hua tha..
aur uske dard se mujhe das guna jyada..
he threw him on the slab of drinks...
no one was there in fight club...
accept 6 of them..
vickey picked up a glass bottle..
broke it..and said pass mat ana..
i will hit you..
maan moved towards him..is se kya dard edga..
jo kal use dard hua us ke age ye be kuch nahi...
his burnt hands were screaming in pain..
but he dint care..
after all it was about his geet..he moved
..dev tried to stop maan as they know his anger brother dont go ahead..
he has that glass he can injure you.
there vinay was in his worst condition..
all bleeding..
Tension was building up in the room..
maan thought of geets crying face
he walked in trans..
Not in senses
adi jay ran to stop vickey
as they knew maan had lost it..

vickey hit the bottle.. It pierced maan's stomach...
he kept his hand on stomach..
bottle was inside..
blood traced his hand..
tears rolled out of maan's eyes..
jay adi and dev ran maan!!!!!
maan again hit vickey on his stomach...
vickey fell..
maan took out the bottle from his stomach..
and yelled in pain..and stabbed vickey twice or thrice...
Pushed his friemds
then went to vinay and stabbed him..
but the stab was quite weak..
as maan has lost it..
his body was not in a position..
maan told adiinhe itni pila do....
ke inhe hosh na rahe..and highway pe fek do..[jay exclaimed..[b]they will die..
you will be a murderer..
Maan cum na
..plez lets go to hospital
look at your stomach

maan gave him a glare..i will make sure they dunn die.:..
they have to suffer more..he took out his cell..
all the floor was filled with maans blood:..
on the other side..bhai kya hua..
maan: kam ho jana chaiye..
they are on highway..
and he cut the call..
they carried him to hospital.. friends i guess you liked this part..please please do comment..
Thankyu
aparajita

..ahem ahem..thank you...every one..love you all..will continue...even if single person wants me to continue...thank ya peeps...you are so supportive..thank you all. . :)

This was goodone but now lets make story where they grow apart but yet they are in luv with each other and then he beocmes a business tycoon and how he tries to search her and they start liking each other again

OMG Maan is hurt badly... hoe nothing happens to him....Don't care abt Vicky let him die... plz make sure nothing sud happen to Maan