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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...
Yay...Loved the Update :)
OMG..lol loved how geet was calm during the labour pain in Hospi..lol
Awwhh...Girl.!! aww..muskaan ..so sweet..
Loved it..
Hehe Maan asking to meera about not knowing how to hold a baby was sooo cute..lol..
Aww...Loved the Name scene..
OMG...Is muskaan gonna be kidnapped??...Please hope not..Hope nothing happens to her..
Thanks for the PM..

Continue soon!:)

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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
aww muskaan.. beautiful name
con't soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWWW Muskaan...lots of memories of Dr. Muskaan😉
Lol, that was an awesome choice of name😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
The Wedding Deal - FF

Chapter 18

Geet finished doing all the house hold chores. Her belly turned flat already like it was. She headed up stairs to check up on Muskaan. Geet entered the bedroom and saw the empty cot of Muskaan.

Geet: "MUSKAAN!" she shouted out and ran up to the cot to confirm it was really empty

Maan heard her screaming and went up to Geet holding the baby.

Maan: "She's here" he said cleary knowing what she was thinking

Geet let out a huge breath of relief

Geet: "What the hell Maan! How can you just take her away like this? Do you know what went through me when I s--" Geet was determined to finish her sentence but she couldn't. She saw, Muskaan was ASLEEP.

Geet looked at her baby in horror

Geet: "She's... Asleep?" she said

Maan: "Yep. You were busy washing the dishes and poor Muskaan was crying. I heard her crying so I came along and once she saw me quietened down and I held her, and well, she fell asleep" he said proudly

Geet: "You?" she said pointing at Maan
Geet: "She fell asleep? You made her fall asleep? Maan Singh Khurana? W..." she said horrified

Maan smirked, looking at her face.

Maan put her down in her cot and got out his cell phone.

Maan: "Hello, can you come to the Khurana Mansion to babysit our daughter Muskaan at 6:00pm? Yeah, yeah, thanks. Bye!" he said and hung up.

Geet looked at Maan questioningly

Maan: "It's been ages since we've been out somewhere" he said

Geet blushed

Geet: "Yeah..." she said

And both of them stood there

Maan: "Well, what are you waiting for? Go get ready! It's a date" he winked and left

Geet and Maan got ready and hopped into their car drove to Ciao Roma. Geet insisted to go there. She liked their food very much. Ciao Roma was on the outskirts, that's why it was probably so peaceful.

Meanwhile, Sameera got into her car and started following Maan and Geet.

Geet: "Slow down please na" she said

Maan: "Sorry" he said and put his foot on the break. The car didn't slow down.

Maan kept trying. The car still didn't slow down.

Geet: "What's wrong" she asked

Maan: "The... The breaks have failed" he said in fear

Geet: "What?!" she said

Ahead of them came a dead end. A cliff. And if they didn't brake, the car would go down the cliff.

Maan and Geet looked ahead of them, then looked at each other.

Geet: "Maan! Get out of the car!"

Maan unbuckled his seatbelt

Maan: "What about you?" he said breathing heavily

Geet tried unbuckling her seatbelt. It was stuck.

Geet: "My seatbelt is stuck. Go Maan! Tumhe meri kasam!" she said

Maan couldn't say no to Geet. He opened the door, and jumped out. The car went down the cliff, and exploded into fire.

Maan looked ahead, where the car fell. Tears welled up on his eyes.

Meanwhile, a car arrived and came out was Sameera

Maan looked at Sameera in shock.

Maan: "It was... It was you" he whispered

Sameera: "Yep. Me. Too bad, your wife is dead now. Poor Muskaan doesn't have a mother" she said laughed out loud
Sameera: "Well, I've got my revenge. Time for me to leave" she said and hopped into the car and drove away.

Maan got up, and started to walk away when he heard a sound...

Geet: "M...Maan!" she called out

Maan looked back and ran up to the cliff. It was Geet. She was hanging on to a piece of branch.

Maan was relieved, happy, as well as worried. He had to get Geet up.

Maan: "Geet!! Grab my hand!" he called out

Geet grabbed her hand and Maan pulled her up. Geet finally got up and sat down breathing heavily.

Maan: "Geet! Are you okay?" he said grabbing her by the shoulders

Geet nodded

Geet: "I'm fine" she said

Maan: "Sameera" he said

Geet looked at Maan

Geet: "Sameera?" she repeated

Maan: "She did it" he said blankly

Geet looked at Maan in shock.

Precap: Geet comes up with a plan

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Edited by Sameeha786 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey that was a cool twist i like
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update luv the new twist i had a heart attack when sammera said muskhan doesn't have a mother anymore i was scareaming no geet can;t die but as soon i read geet screamed maan;s name i felt such a relief thank God geet is alive can't wait 2 read the next part luv the new twist great update 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wowwwwww....these last two parts were sooo gudddd...loved it 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update dear....i hope Geet soms ups with the best plan.....do post the next part....
thanks for the pm
Mariam
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update
I thought sooo but was not sure abt maan taking muskaan..lol
Thank god she;s safe..
OMG sameera back?
Good that maaneet are safe..
Cant wait to know abt geet's plan..
Continue soon dear
Thnaks for the Pm!

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Posted: 14 years ago

fabulous updates

completely loving it
keep writing
plzz cont soon
melody

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