SS Alone in Paradise(Maaneet)LAST CH pg128 14 feb - Page 45

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Posted: 14 years ago
Can't wait for the update after promo!!!
Edited by Radhika Shah - 14 years ago
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Alone in Paradise ch 8

Maan: walk to his room .... he recollected what all happen at party.... a smile appear at his lips..."hmmm nice start" he lay flat on his bed .... Murmur "thank God it was dark there no one must have noticed " he run his finger on his lips just to feel her touch....

next morning
Geet: woke up with a heavy head ...."where am i?"
Dadi: beta at home
Geet: oh my head ..how i came here? she try to recollect
Dadi: beta Maan bought you here..
Geet: jump out of bed .."Maan"
Dadi: yes
Geet: looked at her clothes she was still wearing Saree .... Murmur "how dare he touch me?"
Dadi:beta did you said any thing?
Geet: no ..she walk to washroom to freshen up
Dadi: aaj kal ka becha bhi ....

Geet: oh what happen last night ? why i can't recollect any thing? she knocked her head .... looked her self in mirror .. "i will ask him for his last night behavior. why he made me stand next to him?" she walk out
Dadi: what happen beta ?
Geet: kuch nai
Dadi: you look bit worried
Geet: i am not.. was about to walk out of room
Dadi: Where are you going?
Geet: i want to talk to sir
Dadi: ok
Geet: walk to Maan's room
nakul: who you are looking for?
Geet: woh... pointed at his room door
nakul: he just went out...
Geet: where?
nakul: office...
Geet: ran to the gate
Maan :was sitting in car
Geet: wait wait
Maan: i am getting late ..he said in a harsh way
Geet: stand in front of his car .."you can't go without answering my question"
Maan: lower his window "yes ask "
Geet: "what happen last night? why i don't recollect any thing"
Maan: ask your self.... why you are asking me? he stared in her eyes
Geet: but i don't recollect.... knock her head
Maan: enjoying the situation.. rub his chin "as far i remember nothing happened..."
Geet: "are you telling truth?"
Maan: no i am telling lie .... look it to her hazelnut twinkling eyes ..
Geet: "but how i came home?"
Maan: i think by car ..... i think now i better go ... he drove the car....
Geet: of course not on a donkey .. she hold her head ....."i will ask Pari" walked in
nakul: beta there is a letter & flowers for you...
Geet: letter
nakul: yes ..
Geet: looked at flowers open the enveloped .......

You Look Beautiful Today note card


Geet "who is he ? " she looked the card care full but there was nothing written on it." jab se mein iss ghar mein aai hoon i am in a problem" ... she crab the phone dialed Pari number but it was busy..
Geet: uff aab yeh bhi...
Dadi: kya baat ha beta you are bit worried ?
Geet: hide the card under news paper...
Dadi: did you talk to Maan?
Geet: yes
Dadi: looked at her face ..she could feel she was tense ..."did Maan said any thing to you?"
Geet: no again dialed Pari number.... it was again busy

At office ...
Maan: smiled as he disconnected call.." you will never be able to find what happen last night my future wife.."
had a laughter .... "hmmm Future Wife or Miss Attitude " roll the paper weight ...

Geet: excuse me Dadi i want to talk to my friend .... she walked in as she heard bell going ..
Dadi: ok beta
Geet: with whom you were talking?
Pari: with sleepy voice "Maan sun leya ha i will not tell her yar "
Geet: Pari it is me not Maan..
Pari: quickly sit ....rub her eyes.... "Oh Meri Geet"
Geet: don't butter Pari.... tell me what you were saying as you picked up call?"
Pari: oh dear kuch nai... i was talking while sleeping ....raat ko kuch zadi pee lee thi..
Geet: don't lie Pari
Pari: why to lie ? bang her head with bed back.....
Geet: what Maan asked you not to tell?
Pari: yar he said don't tell anyone that you are not his cousin...
Geet: lie
Pari: swear to God Geet..
Geet: lie...
Pari: yar you call him & ask him
Geet: He too a liar ...... no need to ask him... aur tum you have changed color like salamander...
Pari: had a laughter....
Geet: do not smile
Pari :ok zip
Geet: i will see you ..i know some thing happen last night.
Pari: yar kuch nai huwa tha.. you just accidentally drank wrong drink .
Geet: phir
Pari: kuch nai now let me sleep you both are crazy .cut call
Geet: how i took wrong drink all my fault... he helped me... mmmm ...smiled walked out..
Dadi: Geet beta who send this card? wave the card
Geet: oh Dadi i don't know
Dadi: a secret admire .... ....
Geet: blushed....
Dadi: you were indeed looking beautiful yesterday ..
Geet: Please Dadi i don't even know who send this ...
Dadi: chalo pata chalta ha... kon ha yeh... hug her
Geet shyly hide herself in Dadi's arm.... "some time a feel i am very luck i got this job"
Dadi: why beta?
Geet: I got some to hug ... as since child hood i use to hug my pillow when i use to feel sad...
Dadi: kissed her forehead... "bus beta sub ka achi din aata ha"..
Geet smiled....
Dadi: lets go to my friend home .
Geet: mein bhi
Dadi: yes you too come with me....
Geet: as you order Dadi...
Dadi: not order beta...
Geet: smiled .....

at office
Maan was sitting with open files but his mind was not there..
AdI: "sir you already had sign the papers"
Maan: oh yes
ADI : any thing else sir
Maan: yes call the photographer & ask him to send Pictures
ADI: sir i told you that i had called him twice he said he will deliver till evening all snaps
Maan: why he is that slow?
ADi: sir he is nt's friend she hire him for party...
Maan: so
ADI : n't mama ... paused
Maan: what so ever ask him to make it fast..
ADI: ok sir
Maan: picked phone & dialed at home .." what is madam reaction after seeing card? " smiled at his thought.
ADI: looked at Maan... & walked out
Pinky: what happen?
ADI: Maan gai kam se ...
both peep in his room...
Pinky: see he is smiling
Sasha: what you both are doing?
ADi: Dancing
Pinky: smiled
Sasha: i will see you both
Adi: see see we are standing in front of you.
Sasha: my foot walked away....
Pinky: see see now he has long face...
Adi: turn back & see
Maan was talking " nakul did they tell when they will come?".....he bang phone
Adi: chalo chalo..he is angry now... pull Pinky...

at Dadi's Friend home
Old lady: who is this girl? pointed at Geet who was sitting far
Dadi: my daughter
Old lady: cute ha
Dadi Yes
Old lady: is she engaged
Dadi: mmmm thinking ..."nai"
OldLady: good she will go with my grand son arjun..( adding Arjun )
Dadi: but
Old lady: tell me about her family
Dadi: looked at Geet ... Maan's smiled came in her mind..." i will tell you later about her "
Old lady : ok
Dadi: thinking "i must ask Maan first about her ,if he like's her then someone else"

Dadi& Geet reached home late evening
Dadi: Geet please beta make me lay on bed i am tired
Geet: sure..dadi
Dadi: wake me when Maan is back.
Geet: sure dadi... she fixed her blanket & walked out ...

Geet sat in lounge & started changing channels time passed .....
nakul: Mama this parcel is for you ...
Geet: me
nakul: yes
Geet: again .. she quickly open the parcel .... there was snaps of party...Geet smiled "may be Pari send that"
she was so absorb in looking the pictures she did not heard Maan's car stopping in path way.
Geet : stop at a pic.. what is this ? it was their dance Pic



Geet : when i dance with him? she was socked to see
Maan: enter he was tired he didnot noticed Geet was sitting in lounge ..he open he tie knot..was about to go to his room
Geet: what is this ? she jump out of sofa ... all pictures scatters on floor
Maan: looked at her as she shouted walk to her ...." what happen? " he looked at Pictures
Geet: grab his collar "how dare you?"
Maan: Hold her hand as he was shocked at her reaction..."what?"
Geet: throw the liplock pictures at his face " what is this ? you rich people just know how to exploit girls "
Maan: shocked to see the picture... he didnot get answer " Hold down a min let me explain"he try to grab her hands
Geet: try to free from his hands ... she slapped him.... "don't touch me"
The hall echo with a loud voice ......
Maan: push her to sofa .." how dare you ? "
to be cont hope you like it writing after a month don't know what will be your reaction after reading this part....ignore mistakes
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Can't wait for the update after promo!!!

added 😉 dont wait
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG GEET SLAPPED MAAN poor Maan got slapped from his future wifey awww maan thinking about geet's reaction and loving her knocking her head to remember what happened was the cute part can't for the next part an awesome update
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update dear...maan is so sweet sending flowers for her everyday......
hmm you stopped at the cliffhanger😡 wanted to see maan's reaction...
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg omg omg omg i bet NT got those pics taken of the liplock - hahahahah thats so funny
iooooooooo i wonder when geet will work out who the admirer is
heheheheh
hahahaha i sense a jealous maan coming ahead at arjun's proposal for geet
lol that would be funny to read 😆
hmmmmmmmmmm now how is maan going to explain geet's actions to geet 😆
hmm another liplock????
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wat is maan doing nd she slaped him...... She slaped maan singh khurana........... Oh teri........ Chalo arjun gonna enter...... Lets play jeolousy game.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
looooooooooved it dear as usual waiting 4 da nxt update make it fassssst yaar dont make us wait sooooooooo much plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa😲nadiya itnay din baad update aur wohhhhhhhhhh bhi itnaaaaaaaaaa khatarnak😲send next part soon yaar thora rehem karo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg!!! geet slapped maan😲........................
think that stupid nt must have done this😡😡😡
gosh........... hope maan will pacify her..........n clear the MU😕
plzz update soon

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