SS Alone in Paradise(Maaneet)LAST CH pg128 14 feb - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely update

continue soon

nd take care

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome... loved d dance sequence...
maan aka papu.... 😆
do cont soon...
thnx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Next morning
Geet: oh i am late...quickly jump out of bed
Pari: Geet shhhh
Geet: when you came last night?
Pari: pata nai
Geet: i am late because of you ...
Pari: sonado
Geet: throw pillow at her ...walk to wash room..quickly dress up... "Pari i am going"
Pari where?
Geet: collected her file..."to some Khurana "walk out
Pari: Geet, Geet.. but she was not there to hear her.."Maan Khurana..." again fall on bed.
Geet:started walked on pavement talking to her self" Geet beta lets pray you get this job"

At home
Maan : got out of shower .. dressup

" oh i have a meeting toady"
fixed his tie ...
Nakul : knocked
Maan: yes
Nakul: dadi is calling you
Maan: you bring my breakfast there..
Nakul : ok
wore his wrist watch....walked out
Maan: Good morning Dadi
Dadi: when you went to your room last night?
Maan: pata nai.. grab a slice
Dadi: have breakfast properly...
Maan: dadi i will be late...
Dadi: you have to take interview today i hope you remember that..
Maan: yes i will.. he kissed her fore head and walked out

Geet walked for 30 mins ..."uff kitna aur ...."She checked her purse .."i have 150 rs if i take taxi i will reach in time " stop a taxi
Maan And Geet car stop on same signal light


a flower boy
Take these flowers baji..
Geet: your flowers are very beautiful ,but i cannot afford it ...
Maan: heard her ....he turn to see that innocent voice
but just saw her one side ...
Maan: called the boy "take this give her when ever you see her ..." he gave the boy money ....
signal light turn green ...Maan car passed Geet old taxi
Flower boy ran to taxi "baji your flowers "he put in side the window
Geet: how my flowers ? shouted ...
Flower boy pointed at a his car which was very far ... "he gave me money" waved 1000 rs
Geet:"nice start of the day ..am i that lucky....." smiled as she touch flowers next to her face...

Maan walk to office .. "ADI all of you gather in conference room " Sasha no calls no visitors for next 3 hours .
Sasha: ok boss

Geet: reached to KC ... put flowers in her bag
Taxi driver :"you said it is near main road , but it was not you pay me 100 rs"
Geet: but you said you will tak 60 rs
Taxi driver : you check meter...
Geet; looked at watch ...it is 9.. "oh i am late" she gave him 100 rs and ran in
Bang in Sasha..
Geet: sorry sorry
Sasha: can't you see ...
Geet: i am late sorry i had an interview today
Sasha: what interview ?
Geet: wait let me show you .. she showed her the ad.
Sasha: " ok you site here and wait"
Geet: "am i late"
Sasha: yes ..angrily walk to the conference room..
Geet: "oh Geet pat her head why you didn't set alarm " she sat on a stool .. looked at her watch... it was 9:05.. this job too gone... should i go back....or wait.... she stay there...time passed...
it was 12.....
Geet: was tired sitting on stool.....
Pinky: chocolate
Geet: thanks
Pinky take it
Geet:: thx is interview going on...
Pinky: which interview?
Geet: showed her paper...
Pinky: oh there were few more girls waiting inside why are you sitting at entrance?
Geet: a lady asked me to sit here..
Pinky: come with me...
Geet; walk behind her....
Pinky: you sit here i will call you ok..
Geet: ok
Pinky: drink water ...gave her a glass..
Geet: thanks....

Maan was in his office ...
Pinky: sir you have to take interview..
Maan: for what?
Pinky: for dadi's
Maan: oh i forgot...how many ladies are there..
Pinky: 1
Maan: 1 shocked
Pinky: yes there were 15 girls they all waited and left, i just went out side, this girl was sitting on peon stool..waiting for interview..
Maan: why she was sitting there?angry
Pinky : she is saying someone asked her to sit there and wait..
Maan: who did that? really got angry
Pinky: how can i say sir?
Maan: send her in...
Pinky : ok
Maan: rotated his chair. started playing game on his cell.
Geet: knocked ...
Maan: yes come in
Geet: looked around "i am here for interview"
Maan: raised his eyebrows as if he had heard her..." ok sit "his voice came form behind chair
Geet: thanks
Maan: do you have any nursing experience?
Geet: hmmmm no
Maan: how you will then look after her ?
Geet: i will learn...
Maan: ."why you need this job?"
Geet: "because i dont have"
Maan: smiled.." why you waited for 3 hours?"
Geet:hmmmm... " i was 5 min late as my taxi was very slow.when i came here a lady said i have to wait ."
Maan: your family...
Geet: i am orphan
Maan: your cv..
Geet: here it is
Maan: ok you may go now...
Geet: "i am sorry i was just five mins late..."
Maan: enjoyed the innocence in her voice .. a humble request or apology.
Geet: got up from chair was about to walk out
Maan: my car is waiting out side pack your things.
Geet :excited "did i got job?"
Maan: i think so..
Geet: murmur "Geet today it is your lucky day first you got flowers now job" she walked out
Maan: heard her ..." recollected ...."your flowers are very beautiful ,but i cannot afford it" ..Oh you were that girl .....Dadi i think i selected right girl ....he rotated his chair saw her passing his room
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Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Di.:..story line is awesome..and continuency..flow..all iz best..
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Posted: 14 years ago
their first meet n convo is beautiful
loved it
maan was so sweet to geet😳😳
beautiful
plzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was really sweet!!
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww if his giving her flowers based on her voice and seeing the side of her wonder what he would do when he sees her anyways I'm loving the storyline and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was really nice....the fllow of story
really apt....and great use of pix....
great job done gurl
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
i love it super duper pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn i hope your well now
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part yaar
just loved it

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