FF.manneet-**ANIMOSITY**Thread 2 - Page 58

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Posted: 14 years ago
thnks 4 the wonderful update!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

yay!! can't wait to see how you take it ahead!! shocks are welcome too! :P lol

great update!

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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwesome ff
update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Whr this letters came frm yaar
N Maan toh went out na for few days toh
Im so confused
Well not liking that old Maan at all
Past was sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmm....the letters made him angry n i thnk geet wrote to dev bcs in strtng geet wntd to marry dev...n dis made maan angry or may be she tried to do sumthng against maan so tht he leaves her...n nw maan hs the letters bt i didnt like the way maan handled her...he shud hv asked her tht whn she wrote dis letters n den he shud react bt he is MSK he reacts first...yar plz give us past part long...i really wnt to knw wht happend whn geet takes care of injured maan though she hates him...plz next time this part shud be long...n precap sounds dangerous...ur evil mind is bc hmmm....thanks to ur mum...bt dnt make maan too mush evil otherwise geet vl hate him more n its nt good yar...plz updt soon....i like it bt waiting for next part eager to knw abt letters n der history...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwww Keyam loved the update....
to whom did Geet write those letters....n what's there in that room......
hope Maan doesn't end up hurting Geet in the next part.....

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Posted: 14 years ago
how did maan get those letter and what was in them even geet doesnt remeber i thought her was changing but guess not curious to know whoes room is that update soon and thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
great... we will be getting more updates now... hopefully though maan will not be so rude n mean to her as soon as the baby arrives... by the way, when r u telling us why he is mean to everyone but nice to Heer? when is the secret coming out?
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Posted: 14 years ago

***ANIMOSITY***

PART 25



Geet looks at him shock. "what's your problem?"
Maan looks at her lips.
Maan- let's talk.
Geet- I rather die.
Maan- that could be done later. For now let's talk.
Geet just looks at this impossible man. What's with him.
Maan- let's see...

Geet just had enough. If he wants to show that video to anyone. Then go for it...

Geet pushes him off.

Geet: do whatever you want. I don't care anymore. Just do. Because I can't tolerate your nautanki anymore.

Geet fumes out of the house. She was angry frustrated. She wasn't sure her self why. Geet couldn't tolerate anything. Nothing. She wanted to quit this job soon as possible. She couldn't possibly stay a second with him from now on.

Present...

Geet feel sleep. Maan could see her cry sleep

He sits up...

In this absence maan went round geets old apartment to get her old stuff back to make her feel better. maybe... he though maybe... this will make her feel ...or remember there old time.... But I guss this letter was waiting for me....

Maan wonders who she wrote those letter to. It was romantic love letter. Soon as maan read first one he be came furious. It was her hand writhing. He wasn't wrong in that sense. It's not recent. But of course... Minimum 5 months old. That was the last time she was by her self.
Maan looks at Geet...
Maan: if you have any intention to run way Geet... Forget it. Because you wont be able to and who ever you wrote those letter to.... You will tell me with your own mouth.

Maan gets up... It's mid evening. Geet wasn't there. Maan could here the shower. He knew well she probably sitting under the shower again.
He walks in. Not wrong. She was standing there facing the shower. She looked beautiful with her bump.
Geet had no clue he was standing there. He Walks in. Geet jumps. He trail his hand down her bare body. Geet looked at him confused. With no feeling. He kissed everywhere. Geet frozen. She didn't react to his touch.
He closes the shower and coves her with a towel... And takes her to the bedroom...
Makes her lay on the bed after drying them self.... His lip didn't leave a single place on her body.... He kissed everywhere.
They didn't speak. Geet was still in shock of his early behavior... Waking her memory up of her rape.
Geet laid there like a dead body not reacting to any of his touch. She was terrified. What If he does something... Abusing from him... started to become natural now days.
Maan realized her cold reaction. He wasn't happy. He carried on. His body started to move in a rhythm.
Both stops after long time panting....
Maan: until you react to my touch this will carry on.
Geet looks at him petrified. She was helpless in every way. She couldn't effort to loose her baby. This baby is her life now.
Geet: why you doing this? I am your wife. Why don't you trust me. You monitor me 24 hours.
Maan laughs: trust! He smirks... He sits up on her again to start... This time Geet reacts...
Maan: trust doesn't come by making love. And you lost all my trust. He kisses her lips roughly.
Geet: you abuse me. This is not making love.
Maan increases the pressure betweens talk. Geet started to moan louder.

Geet laid there as maan filled his body satisfaction.
Both stops after long time.
He didn't do it roughly. Geet could feel he controlled his desire.
Maan moves way completely before he looses him self all over again.

He slides some trousers on and walks to the study.
Geet simply laid there. Trying to recover.

Maan starts to read the letter...

letter'1

Sometime life is not perfect. Life is coward! Every corner there are surprise. Life is shameless. Lifeless. Life is uncontrolled. This another way I want to express my love to you.
Sometime you fall in love with animosity... Yes... You find your self surrounded... Involved... And then you fall in love. That's what have happened to me. I am in love with your animosity. Your hatreds. I have tried.... But it seems like I find my self lurking near you. I can't control. There are no love... There are nothing about you attracts me... But your animosity seems special to me. I love you...


Maan: Dev... Geet stood by the door. With strong look on her face.
Maan looks at her angrily.
Geet: this letter is not for him. She turns round and was about to leave.
Maan: aca... I wonder who is it for. "Armaan!"
Geet turns round straight way. Surprised. Shocked.
Maan: what makes you think I won't find anything about your little friend.


next: special moments about past'.


hay u all'. well hop u liking this. pls pls pls do leave some lovely comments'.

and the like button. loved all the comments

xxxxx

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yayy.. me first!!!!

This letter was so for MAAN!!!!!😳
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 14 years ago

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