FF- Against All The Odds - 32nd UPDATE page 123 - Page 8

Originally posted by: jacobharry10011

MIND BLOWING UPDATE👏😳

And the kiss😳

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

Mind blowing update! Out of the world. It was TERRIFIC. 👏👏

The fifth and sixth updates made me fall in love with this FF! And you wrote it so perfectly that it made me disgust the Abhay Raichand in the story! Hats off. 👏👏

Loved it! Thanks for the PM, and continue soon! 🤗

Originally posted by: Ridwana1234

👏superb again but i am sad why Abhay is behaving like this anyways good job keep it up and plz plz update it soon

love Ridwana😊

5th and 6th update here I am! 😉

Originally posted by: radt

U made me feel like am reading the princess diaries!

LOL!

i personally enjoyed reading it!

all the very best sweets1👏

keep it up!

🤗

Originally posted by: lighteningbuzz

5th and 6th update here I am! 😉

Okay first of all I want to point out that you presented Misha and Kabir's dialogues excellently! I mean their one-liners had me in splits and this is exactly what I would expect coming from them. I was LOL when I read Kabir thoughts about Piya and Abhay and how he was thinking, "what's possibly is going on between you and this piece of crap!" "Piece of crap!" 🤣 Gosh, I loved it! Simply hilarious!

Now, coming down to how apprehensive Piya was feeling anticipating Abhay's presence and secretly looking at him and thinking about him...........shows a girl's feelings when her initial feelings starts for that special guy. It was beautifully portrayed and any girl reading this can actually feel what Piya was feeling at that moment........there's this sense of excitement, nervousness, and at the same time fear at the presence of someone you are starting to have feelings for.

Then the car scene and Abhay rudeness was brilliant. I seriously had this urge to slap Abhay at the moment too as he was throwing all this insults at her and when she did smack him, I was like "that's exactly what I would do too in her place!" I liked how you expressively showed Abhay's hidden feelings for Piya too. Though he was rude and his words were harsh but, at the same time the way he kept emphasizing on the fact that, "he didn't think she was beautiful" or "nothing would ever happen between them" or "the kiss was not a big deal" seemed like they were assurances he was trying to give himself instead of her. It was as if by hurting her he was pushing away his feelings for her which he was unable to control. The description of the kiss was simply passionate though he forcefully did it to her, but I wouldn't call it vulgar or the fact that he was manhandling her. Becuz, they both have strong feelings for each other and it was in that kiss that they completely drowned their uncontrollable feelings for each other and they both know it was very special for both of them even though they try to deny it or run away from their feelings.

So, I really liked how you included that scene becuz, it made the scene extremely romantic and portrayed their intense love for each other. This was a brillant post! I loved it! Keep up the great work!

Gosh, I wish Abhay and Piya were real. I would love to witness their romantic love story. 😍

Okay, is it normal for a person to be too much of romanticoholic. I mean I hope I am not the only girl out here who just goes into dreamy worlds of true love, romance, and fairy tales by reading romantic novel, movies, etc...........heck sometimes I don't even want to come out of it. 😆

I know the harsh reality of life but, damn I just love to dream about it, though I know it may never exist.

Anywayz, you rock as always sis.