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Tahani01

@Tahani01

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#211

plez plez plez update quickly and plez include abhiya moments and pm me when u update kk xxx😉

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Maitri

@cool_maitri03

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#212

plz upd8 soon!!! dey r gr8!!! i luv dem!!! infct i feel i m addicted 2 dem!! u r 2o gud..

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@lighteningbuzz

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: ka7eela

Payal thanks a ton sweetheart for liking my writing🤗and for taking from your time and dropping by although you have exams!😳

btw i dont want to be hired but if they want to use my stories then all they have to do is just give me the credit😉 😆

@ red, dont know about the show but in my story as i said Chand sold everything they had , all their lands hence from that money he started to do business and he is a very smart business man, so he invested his money in the right market thats how they become richer!

@ bold😆 thats quite a very interesting plot you came up with , i think you can make a good writer your self, i am not kidding you, you have a good imagination, you are witty and you write very well important qualities for writing stories!

@ green, i hated it in the show when she agreed to be his GF when actually she did this just to despise Abhay!..no one has the right to play with someones feelings like this especially when they are genuine!

@ blue, i just loved this quote its so true but in some cases

@ brown i have a good story for her, but then i thought maybe you guys get bored by reading it hence i skipped it!😳

i agree Abhay is just 😍

@Purple: Hahaha, yeah right! I am the worse person in telling stories especially if I have to make it up myself and my nieces and nephews are witnesses to this. 😆 I remember everytime they want to hear a bedtime story, I would like randomly start off and then I would make the story more and more complicated for those poor souls and they are like, "where did the dragon come from I thought this was the story about the princess." 😆 And I am like, "Oh yeah I forgot!" 😆 My stories are told in one sentence "once there was a prince and once there was princess and they lived happily ever after." In between, I have no idea how to get to the ending. LOL

But, I have this fondness for reading. I love to read novels and write poetry or write about things that inspire me or something where I can just write and express my thoughts on.

But, I think writing a story has more responsiblity to it as its not something you just pin down your thoughts, you have to make the story flow in a organized way, make the characters more convincing, express each character's emotions and movements to be able to capture the reader's attention. And I think you have the perfect talent of a good storyteller and writer! 🤗

Edited by lighteningbuzz - 14 years ago

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Tahani01

@Tahani01

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#214

PLEZ PLEZ PLEZ UPDATE QUICKLY IM DIEING AND AT THE SAME TIME THINKING WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT PLEZ UPDATE

by the way loved the tina jeolousy thing fantastic

xxx

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Tahani01

@Tahani01

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#215

awwwwwww abhay finds pia the most beautiful girl in the world awwwwwwwwwwww so cute😳

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: Edward01
Agree... Can't wait for the next update....

will update tonight😊

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: Tahani01
fantastic i can imagine the maroon shirt on my fitty abhay(drueling)
but what will he do will he tell pia and let her chose or is she going to be little miss detective and find the truth for herself just keep on writing and unfolding the mystery kaheela style jus kiddin but yeh keep writing and include more romantic abhiya moments with eye locking kissing and hearts beating all the lot.
and on a last note you are a fantastic writer and keep writing😉

x👏x❤️x👏x

Tahani thanks sweety🤗..glad you are liking it😳 ..well the mystery will unfolds soon 😉

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: Shirin22
nice update!!!!!!!!!😃
but was it important 2 hav da Abhay-Tina kissing part??😔😕
I would luv 2 c Abhay 2 kiss Pia only!!!😳
jaldi jaldi update next part!!!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼

thanks allot😊

@ blue😆..err it was kind of necessary! so that Piya can sees by her own eyes that he is just a player ! cause there is a difference between hearing something and seeing it. as seeing is more affective and more believable!😉

well i love Abiya to the core! i loved them so much in todays episode they rocked it!😍

will try to update tonight!😊