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I updated now, but as I'm working on my project report 🤢, I cannot send PM's. Please dont mind...!!!! 😳

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hello everyone,😃

here is the next update. a lot of you were asking for it. I will not be sending any PM's tonight as I have lot of work to do. Will send the PM's tomorrow.... but for now, enjoy the update...!!!!! 😛


Part 94

He nodded and walked into the room. he stood under the shower and thought to himself, "even after being so angry, how can I lose control when she's so close?No, I cannot let her hurt me, another time."

He came out of the bathroom, in the bath robe and found clothes on the bed. He knew geet had kept his clothes ready. He put them back in the closet and changed into a casual T-shirt and pyjamas, since he would be at home for the rest of the day. he walked down to the dining room and geet looked at him. she was disappointed that Maan had not worn the clothes that she had kept for him.

He avoided the breakfast she made and had toast and some juice. Vishal told him, "Bro, paratha is so yummy. Aur aap kya who bread kha rahe ho?try this na!", he said and was about to serve him, one paratha, when Maan refused, "I don't feel like having heavy breakfast".

Geet's face colored changed and Daadi noticed it, "Maan, why don't you try poha, then", she suggested.

"No, daadima, I'm good!", he said, finishing the juice and walking out from there.

He went straight to his study and started working. Everyone was done with their breakfast and Vishal and Muskan, as usual were fighting over Cookie. Kia tried to pacify the situation but gave up and went into the kitchen, to start preparations for lunch. Geet cleared up the table and did not have her breakfast. She was starving, because she did not have her dinner, too. She decided not to eat because Maan did not eat what she made for him. she had taken special care to make everything he liked, but he did not even look at the food.

She asked Kia, if she needed any help, but Kia asked her to relax. She told geet, that she would take care of lunch. Geet checked on Muskan and Muskan was busy with Cookie and Vishal. Both of them, were no where near to listening to anyone, so she just smiled and left them to their ways. Daadima was in her bedroom. Geet went to the study and found maan busy. He was on phone with someone. She stood, at the door for sometime. He finished talking on phone. He looked at her but ignored her. She walked up to him and sat in the chair opposite to him. he did not look at her even once.

"aapne breakfast theek se nahi kiya?", she asked, softly. Maan noticed the sadness in her voice. He knew she was hurt that he did not eat the food she made.

"I'm fine!", he told her, without looking at her.

"bahut kaam hai? aaj tuo Saturday hain, kam se kam aaj tuo mujhse baat kijiye, maan!", she asked as her voice cracked.

"geet, mujhe nahi lagta baat karne ke liye kuch hai!", he said, blankly.

Geet had tears in her eyes but controlled them, telling her self, "geet, he is yours. He has to come back to you".

"Maan, bahar dinner karne chale, please, aaj raat ko? Bahut din ho gaye!", she asked, hoping he would agree to this atleast.

"mujhe bahut kaam hai, geet!", he said, replying to an email.

"haan, tuo sham tak kaam kijiye na. raat mein jayenge!", she justified.

"geet, tumhe baar baar mana karna accha nahi lagta. Mujhe kahin nahi jaana", he said, looking up at her, angrily.

"theek hain!aap kaam kijiye", she said and walked away. She walked into the lawn. She sat close to the outhouse and thought about everything happening in her life.

She remembered how angry Maan was, after coming back from London and she had tried really hard to convince him and pacify him. she could not get an chance to tell him, that his brother had deceived her. Naintara, on the other hand, kept pestering Geet about Samira. Vishal had warned Naintara to stay away from geet and had made sure that NT gets no where close to Geet. But NT always found a way, to get back to her. Weeks passed and Maan was busy with his work and business. He would come back only in the night and he had a lot of tensions. NT, had very cleverly spoilt certain issues and created troubles for Maan, by manipulating papers and important information. SO, Maan had become even busy with setting everything right. He did not suspect that NT would meddle with his information, as she never entered office, so he kept yelling at Sasha and Adi for everything that happened.

NT had made sure that Geet found no time with Maan. She was made sure that Dev would be of help to Maan, so that even Dev's work Maan would have to handle. Dev tried to talk to Maan, himself, about Geet, but NT did not let that happen too. Geet completely felt helpless. She had been staying in Pinky's house as Daadi had not accepted their relationship, yet. And Maan was extremely tied up with work.

Amisdt of all this confusion, she had her labor pains and was taken to the hospital. Muskan was born. Maan had fulfilled his promise and dream of taking his daughter in his arms, first. HE kissed her and held her with so much care and love.

He then walked up to Geet and sat beside her, on the bed, with their baby. "Thanks Geet!", he told her and kissed her forehead.

Geet had tears of happiness in her eyes. She had fought with her family, the entire world to keep this baby alive. She felt proud of being such a strong woman, who, despite all odds, fought for what she thought was right.

After two days, she came to the outhouse. Maan had come with her. As they entered the outhouse, she saw Dev, and that was her first encounter with him. She felt hatred and anger engulf her, but she remained silent, for the sake of her husband. Maan happily carried Muskan around and showed her to Dev. And just as Dev, was about to take Muskan in his hands, Geet had stopped him. She gave the pretext of feeding the baby and took Muskan away from Dev. Dev had not complained, he knew he had no right to.

Vishal slowly had started to dug into details and reached the bottom of the story, with the help of Kia. So, everyone knew the story about Dev- Geet, except for Maan. None of them knew how to tell him the truth. Maan had grown found of Muskan and could not live a second without her. He loved Geet and cared for her even more, after Muskan came into their world. Mean time, Vishal had kicked NT and Dev out of the mansion, without letting Maan know. He had made sure that all charges were booked against NT-Dev and put them behind bars, without any media attention. Maan was told that Dev- NT were out of Delhi for a long vacation.

But NT had made all preparations for bail and got out, with a sole purpose to destroy geet's life and permanently remove her from Maan's life. On various occasions, Geet had got calls from NT, time and again, telling her about Samira. But geet refused to believe, until one dreadful day.

Geet sat in the lawn and tears rolled down her eyes. She came back to her senses when, she felt someone wipe her tears. She looked up and found Maan standing there. She straightened herself without saying anything.

He sat beside her and asked her, "kya hua geet? I been watching you for the last few minutes, from my study. You've been sitting here, in this hot sun and crying."

Geet did not answer. She wiped her tears and got up, and adjusted her sari. She was about to leave when Maan stopped her and asked her again, "kya hua?"

Geet turned to face him, "kuch nahi hua. Main Thursday Chennai jaungi. Wahan ke office mein thoda kaam hai. agar aapki permission ho, tuo main muskan ko bhi leke jaungi. I will be back in two days. Mujhse yahan raha nahi jaata. Kam se kam wahan ka kaam tuo khatam kar loongi".

Maan thought for sometime and said, "theek hain, tumhari marzi".

Geet was about to walk away, when he caught her hand and pulled her carefully towards himself, "tumne breakfast kyun nahi kiya?"

"aaj mera shanivaar hain!", she said, looking away.

"tuo kal tera shukravaar tha?tumne dinner nahi kiya", he asked, turning her to face him, smirking. Geet was shocked, that he knew she did not have dinner.

"aap jaante the, ki maine dinner nahi kiya, phir bhi aap ne kuch kaha nahi?", she said, pushing him away, angrily.

"geet, isiliye tuo breakfast ke bare mein pooch raha hoon. Chalo, breakfast karo", he said.

"mujhe nahi karna. Maine aapke liye breakfast banaya, aapne dekha tak nahi. Ab mujhe bhi nahi khana", she said.

"geet, mujh pe gussa khana pe kyun nikal rahi ho?"

"yeh sawal main bhi aapse kar sakti hoon".

Before Maan could respond, Vishal shouted from the verandah in the first floor, "Oh hello, lovebirds. Itne badi Air conditioned mansion ko chod kar, aapko is dhoop mein romance karni thi?" Kia and Daadi laughed. Geet and Maan were embarrassed.

Maan responded, "chup chap jaa kar apna kaam kar. Zyaada bola tuo wahin aake tumhara chutney baunga. Ab jaa, jaake Muskan ko sambhalo. Use pareshaan mat karna. Main tumhare bhabhi se baat karke aata hoon".

The three of them laughed and Maan shouted angrily, "ab khade khade has kyun raha hai?Andar jao, sab! Aur daadima, aap bhi, inke saath?"

"kya kare maan? After a long time, I've seen the both of you together. Anyways, I forgot to tell you, aaj mr. mehra ke farmhouse mein, diwali party hain. Vicky-Kia aur Muskan jaa rahe hai. Aur hum, apne ek dost se milne jaa rahe hain, CP, mein".

"theek hain. Tuo main kya karu?", he asked, irritated.

"Veerji, hum sab bahar jaa rahe hain. Aur aapko advance notice de rahe hain. Taaki aap candle light dinner, ya phir kuch aur romantic plan kar sakte hai", said Kia, laughing.

Maan hit his head in frustration and all three of them walked in with Vicky screaming, "Bro, continue your romance. I'll make sure, Muski does not come anywhere close".

They heard Kia and Daadi giggle and Geet turned red due to embarrassment. Maan turned to face geet and told her, "chalo, andar. Breakfast karo".

"Main sham ko pinky ke ghar jaungi aur uncleji se milungi. Bahut din ho gaye. Aur waise bhi, aap mujhe dekhna nahi chahte hai, tuo ghar pe reh kar kya faiyda?", she said.

"okay, first go and have breakfast!", he said. She walked away saying, "mujhe nahi karni".

Maan took a deep breath and walked into the kitchen. Kia was shocked to find him there. she asked him, "kuch chahiye, aapko veerji?"

"Haan, ek plate mein parathe aur curd dena please", he said. She shook her head and gave him the plate.

He walked upstairs and found gEet sitting in the balcony in the guest bedroom. He closed the door and when to her and sat in front of her. He gave her the plate and she refused. He took a bite and said, "chalo, ab kha lo. I ate the breakfast you made".

She looked away and he took another piece and put it in his mouth. She still looked away. "Geet, kha lo!" he said, getting impatient.

Muskan knocked on the door and maan called her in. "papa, door kyun lock karte hai?" she asked. He smiled at her wickedly and pulled her into his lap. He whispered something in her ear and she laughed. Geet screamed, "tum dono, meri mazak uda rahe ho?"

"Nahi mamma, hum aisa nahi kar sakte. I love you, mamma", she said, and pulled geet, into her hug. Maan caught geet's hands and forcefully made her open her mouth. Geet fought back but maan was too strong for her. "Muski, jaldi!", maan yelled.

Muskan took a big piece of paratha and curd and shoved it into Geet's mouth and maan closed her mouth. Geet ate it, because she had no choice. They repeated that several times, until she finished the entire food on her plate. Maan asked her, "will you drink water by yourself, or do you want us to do the same thing?"

"No!", screamed geet and got up from there and walked away. Maan and Muskan laughed and hugged each other.

It was evening, geet got muskan ready for the party and all of them went out. Geet, too got ready and came downstairs, while maan sat in the living room, reading newspaper.

She stood opposite to him and he looked up. He wondered how she always managed to look ravishing in anything she wore. She was dressed in a sleevless yellow chudidar and had left her hair open.

"Main, uncleji se milne jaa rahi hoon", she said.

"theek hain!", he said, "driver ko…" and geet cut him, "Main khud drive kar lungi. Mujhe kisi driver ki zaroorat nahi hai!"

"Okay!", he said and looked at her, wondering if she would talk of dinner.

"Main dinner, uncleji ke saath karungi", she said, pulling her car keys out.

"okay!", he said.

She turned and walked away, mumbling, "ek baar bhi nahi bola, ki geet mere saath dinner kar lo. Ya phir, main bhi chalunga tumhare saath. Har baath pe, sirf ek hi jawab "okay"".

She got into her car and reversed it and looked at the mansion, in her rear view mirror. She sighed, "bahar tuo aa sakte the! Inpe tuo umeed rakhna hi bekaar hain. Geet puttar, tu bhool kaise gayi, ki bhagwan ne inhe dil diya hi nahi".

She drove for nearly an hour in the traffic and got tired. She hated the traffic but she had no choice. She changed the channels of the radio stations, but nothing interesting played. She finally reached, uncleji's house and went inside. She saw him getting ready to go somewhere.

"Namaste uncleji!", she said, touching his feet.

"Geet!", he said standing up and hugging her. He smiled and kissed her forehead. They spoke for sometime and Geet was told that he was going to attend some Diwali party. He was ready to cancel it and have dinner with her. But geet refused. She apologized for not telling him in advance about her visit and that she would not like to disturb his plans. She left from there, promising him to visit him the next day for lunch.

Geet drove aimlessly on the round, not knowing where to go. She did not want to get back home, because she knew there would be no point. Maan and her would only argue and hurt each other. She decided to give him some time, before trying to talk to him, again. She found a mall, and drove in, to do some window shopping. She gave the car for valet and walked in. she got Muskan some gifts and moved to look at some accessories. But after sometime, she got tired of that too. She was left with no choice but go back home. She called home and told Nakul to make dinner for her, too. Nakul informed her that maan went to play golf and that he would be back only after 2 hours. Geet hung up, even frustrated.

She went back home and went straight into Maan's bathroom. She turned on the water in the Jacuzzi and forgot to lock the bathroom door. She put some rose petals in there. She got rid of her clothes and got into it. She had turned off the lights, except for two or three small candles. She adjusted the temperature and sat there, relaxing. The effect of hot water, soothed her senses and she was feeling better and rejunavated. She closed her eyes and fell asleep, as the hot water made her feel extremely warm and comfortable.

Maan's car drove into the drive way and he was surprised to find geet, back home. He walked in and decided to take a shower. Nakul informed him, that the last time he saw Geet was in Muskan's room. Maan walked straight into his room, assuming geet was in Muskan's room. hE went into the bathroom and saw geet in the Jacuzzi, filled with rose petals. The entire setting was dark and he could just see her face and her shoulders in the candle light. She was sleeping.

He stood there mesmerized. She looked so peaceful and he felt sad that he had been hurting her time and again. He wanted to go to her, hold her in his arms. He remembered her asking him to take her out for dinner. But he had refused. He wondered how their relationship had changed. There were times, when both of them would not leave a single chance to go out and spend some time together even if it was for an ice-cream. But today, he did not want to go out with her. He walked out, immediately and banged the door. She got up and wondered what happened.

She called out, "Kaun hai?"

"Maan!", he said and then yelled, "Kya tumhe yah nahi pata ki door lock karni chahiye?"

"kyun aapne kuch dekha kya?", she asked, grinning.

"Shut up, geet!jaldi bahar aao. I have to take a shower", he said.

"I;m not coming. Its really comfortable in here. If you want you can join me, too", she said, giggling.

Maan got angry, "Geet, I really need to take a shower, can you hurry?"

Geet realized it was not good to make him angry. she quickly got out of the Jacuzzi and put on her bath robe. She walked out after 5 minutes and Maan kept looking at her purity and beauty. She looked so fresh. She walked to him and said, "jaaeye!" and was about to walk away to get dressed.

He held her back and hid his face in her wet hair. She threw her head backwards and he ran his lips on her throat. Geet clenched harder onto his shoulder blades and moaned, "Maan!" He pulled open the straps of her bath robe and pulled her closer to himself. He pushed away the sleeves from her shoulders and kissed her soft skin. He bit her shoulder and she screamed, "Maan!" and Maan called out, from the bathroom, "kya hua?chilla kyun rahi hain?"

Geet immediately looked around and realized she was dreaming. Maan was taking his shower. She sat on the bed, with her legs folded. "Geet, tu pagal ho jayegi. tera soch kaha pachunch gaye?"

She dressed into a simple black top and a pyjama. She decided to sleep in Muskan's room, that night. Maan came out and found her sitting on the bed, lost in thought.

"why were you screaming?"he asked her, combing his hair.

"kuch nahi!", she said and got up and walked out of the room. she made her way to the dining table and had her dinner and maan joined in too. He did not ask her any questions, like she hoped. She went into Muskan's room and sat on the couch. She read some books for sometime and Maan peeped in, to see what she was doing. He, then walked away into his bedroom.

At about mid night, Muskan came into her room, with Kia. Geet had fallen asleep with the book on her chest, while sitting on the couch. Kia gestured Muskan to be quiet, while she changed Muskan into her night suit. Kia kissed Muskan good night and took the book away from geet's hand. She slowly patted geet's shoulder but geet was too deep in sleep. she knocked on maan's door and he was awake working on his laptop.

"veerji, geet bhabhi gehri neend mein hain. And she fell asleep on the couch", she told him.

"theek hain, tum jao. Main dekh lunga", he told her and Kia wished him, good night and walked into her bedroom. Maan went into Muskan's room and found Muskan, opening up the gifts Geet got for her.

"beta, you should sleep now!", he told her softly. He took her in his arms and put her in her bed and kissed her good night.

"do you want mamma to sleep here?", he asked.

"your wish, papa", she said and turned the other side, saying, "I'm tired, good night!"

"Okay baby,good night!", he said.

Maan lifted geet in his arms. He put her in the bed, beside Muskan. He looked at geet for sometime and unable to hold back his temptation, kissed her lightly on her forehead. He sat beside her on the bed. Muskan had faced the other side. He switched off the light and looked at geet. He ran his fingers on her face and kissed her eyes and cheeks, even lightly. Geet moved slightly, but did not wake up. He slept beside her, maintaining a safe distance between the both of them. He then fell asleep. Geet woke up, in the middle of the night, when she felt a small hand around her neck. She opened her eyes and found Muskan, sleeping beside her with her hand around her neck. She kissed Muskan. She looked at her other side and found Maan sleeping beside her. She was surprised and thought she must be dreaming again.

She touched his nose slightly and he said, "geet, sleep. this is no dream of yours", he told her.

"aap yahan kya kar rahe hain?", she asked softly.

"Muskan ne mujhe yahan sone par mazboor kiya", he said, with his eyes closed.

"oh!", she said, "mujhe laga mere liye"

"zyaada sapne mat dekho. So jao", he told her and turned the other side. She held him from behind. Maan moved her hands away and said, "geet, we are in our daughter's room".

"Maan, she's sleeping".

"so what? Stay away from me!"

"Maan!", she said, angrily, "aapse tuo kuch umeed karna hi bekaar hai".

"tuo phir kyun karte ho?", he asked.

"kyunki main aapse pyaar karti hoon aur mujhe pata hain ki aap bhi mujhse pyaar karte hain!", she said, pulling him, to face her.

"ghalat faimi hai, geet! main tumse pyaar nahi karta. So jao", he said, looking at her.

"kya hogaya, maan, aapko?"

"I'm just the same, geet. you're the one, who changed. You don't trust me. I doubt if you ever trusted me".

She got up from the bed and went out of the room, while, Maan watched her. She went into the guest bedroom and slept on the bed, staring at the portrait on the wall, opposite to her. She heard the door open and close. she knew Maan muat have come to see where she was and must have gone back.

"babaji, mere life mein itna confusion kyun hain?", she asked, "ab mujhe bhook bhi lag rahi hain".

Maan put an ice-cream bowl in front of her and she screamed, "Ice-cream", but then turned her face away and said, "mujhe nahi chahiye".

"tumhe bhook lagi hain na?kha lo!", he said, holding it close to her.

"What if I don't eat?", she asked, sitting up on the bed.

"I'm going to leave the bowl here and go back to bed!", he said, with a lopsided smile.

"tuo jaeye!", she said, and turned the other side and closed her eyes, resting her head on the pillow. She murmured, "yeh nahi keh sakte the, ki geet, main tumhe khilaunga. Geet, tu pagal hain. Kaise kaise umeed laga ke baiti hai. maine bilkul sahi kahi thi, vishal se, ki maan aaj kal bahut bor.." and she swallowed her words, when she felt a cold hand, around her waist.

He moved close to her. "Raat ke teen baje, tum tamasha kyun kar rahe ho, geet?"he gently nibbled her ears and she cuddled up, at the tickling sensation. But she realized he just called her act a tamasha. She turned back violently, "kya matlab hain aapka?main tamasha karti hoon?"

"geet, this type of behavior is termed as tamasha. I do not know what's called in your HP language".

"HP ?suniye, aap HP ko beech mein mat laeye. Jo bhi kehna hai, saaf saaf keh dijiye".

"tum pagal ho chuki ho!chup chap ice-cream kha lo aur so jao", he said.

"aap khilaeyenge, tuo kha lungi", she said, smiling.

"No!"

"then why did you get it?"

"I don't have to justify everything I do. If you want to eat it, then eat, otherwise, your wish", he said.

"mujhe nahi kha ni".

"subeh se thag gaya hoon, tumhe khana khila khila kar aur tumhare peeche bhag bhag kar".

"tuo chod kyun nahi dete!"

"chod bhi tuo nahi sakta, pyaar jo karta…." And stopped.


ALright, that's it for now...!!!!! so, did you like the update?????? I'll send you the PM"s tomorrow. But if you find the update before that, then go ahead and leave your comments too...!!!!!! I really want to know, what you think of this update.

Love you all and thanks for the lovely comments...!!!!! I cannot believe I'm in the fifth thread now...!!!!!


Soumya


P.S. you guys want a precap????? chalo, here we go....!!!!!!! 😆


He could taste the strawberry flavor of her lip gloss. She could smell his cologne. 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

well i cannot say if this is going to be in the next update or the subsequent updates...!!!!!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆




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