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Posted: 14 years ago

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Nice OS, I really liked the way you started but you totally lost me in the end..............why did she run away? 😕

Niki

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JaveriaM

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

awwww..........that was too good........i cud actually visualise the whole scene............looking fwd to the next update 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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Parisa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

i was waiting for this...............
Thnaks....Lovely...But still its incomplete..you have give it a happy ending

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Julie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

another good update and looking forward to the next!!

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

awesome update

loved it

cant wait for da happy ending

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pureluv

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

wow dear what fantastic piece of work👏👏

do update soon😊

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tanu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Great work shreya ...👏 luv the premise...n cant wait for the next update..!! Very well written dear..❤️

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

@all: thanks for the words..will upadte in a while..its undr the process..hehe and since it has to be last it has to looooooooooooong na..so wait a bit more..😉

@niki: read the dilaogue where she runs away..see she had accepted it or she was trying that someone else mattered to him more than her..she couldnt bear it..and specially when he was saying it himself..she rejected his lie once..at this point she couldnt..she wasnt in a state too..tahts why she runs way..hope u understand now..and thanks for lettimg me know..😳

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nikipuki

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mchopra

@niki: read the dilaogue where she runs away..see she had accepted it or she was trying that someone else mattered to him more than her..she couldnt bear it..and specially when he was saying it himself..she rejected his lie once..at this point she couldnt..she wasnt in a state too..tahts why she runs way..hope u understand now..and thanks for lettimg me know..😳

Hey,

Thanks for the quick explanation, I appreciate it. I read all the other OS's you wrote and I liked all of them. Keep writing.

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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thanks niki..it was my duty..wasnt it..if i had said something i needed to have a reasson and u asked so it was my resposibility to answer it too..so pls no thnaks,,.

and wow u read all of them..thanks a lot..