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Downhill

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

hiii shreya...
simply fabulous update...
hey dear...do stretch it...the storyline is interesting and if u r going to wrap it up soon, then it wud look unreal...
so take ur time show how geet gradually recovers and heals thru maan's love, care and affection ..and is able to leave behind the past scars and nightmares ...
fabulously penned down
keep it up
love u and ur SS

reva

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Reva DIDI thnks for the suggestion..pakka then u get all lovey dovey things...so be ready for that..will update in few hrs..

@sarita: na i was busy..

@bhanu: thnku..

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

only maan love & affection can

erase her fear

yu narrate so nicely

simply awesome part

love it

waiting eagerly

ty 4 pm

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ritzy09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Hi Darling...

thanks for a great update. But you updated after so long that I had to read the whole thing again to make the connections.So please next time thoda sa jaldi

Also I have a question. There was Diwali sequence and then her joining IP and Maan buying it and challenging it. Suddenly she was not well and with Maan. I lost the connection there. Did she faint or something forcing her back in Maan's life or what. Maybe I missed a chapter but I did read it again.

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Hola ritzy...

yes tht diwali seq..he says something and she walks out..its raining..she gets wet and faunts..maan brings her to outhouse and when she sees him with her in the morning..she starts behving like that..

see for the beahviour she is undergng it takes a sec.not more than that..and she was so hurt tht seeing him with her her mind erased all past memories..and yes she had fever for few hrs..i think i mentioned..or i ate that up..

and tht was it..and coz she was hurt she was not eating welll too..thts why those baby waali lines..

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Jazmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: mchopra
Thnks for the comments people next part will be up soon..pakka..in a day or two..

this comment was posted on may 30th...today...JULY 10th!! 😲...yeh hai tere "day or two"... but chalo...help me out...im lost cuz i dont remember whey Geet had a break...so pls explain so i can figure out what the last update was about...😆

JAZ

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

part 8
oh Geet has blocked her mind in such a way that shes always in the scare that Maan will leave her the others are not separating her from Maan...
cont soon...
thanks for the pm...

Edited by spvd - 14 years ago