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Posted: 14 years ago

HI MUSKAN

I HAVE READ YOUR FF PYAR KI EHASAAS , TRULY MAGICAL , MADHOSHI...
AWESOME YAAR , DO YOU BELIEVE IF I SAY I HAVE THAT LAST WEEK BY CHANCE I READ YOUR PYAAR KI EHASAAS... I COULD NOT STOP MY SELF I HAVE COLLECTED ALL THE PARTS OF THAT FF AND ALSO READ ALL FFS WTITTEN BY YOU THE WHOLE NIGHT....
YOU R SUPER ...
INFACT I HAVE REGISTERED IN INDIA FORUMS JUST TO GET IN TOUCH WITH YOU.
YOU HAVE NOT WRITTED ANY UPDATES AFTER 13 NOVEMBER EVERY DAY I'M CHECKING INDIA FORUMS JUST FOR YOUR UPDATES.
PLZ WRITE THE UPDATES FOR ALL THE 3 FF'S ASAP.
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Posted: 14 years ago

maan leaves from there
brij takes his talwar & rushes out - I am not going to spare those guys

part - 153

maan goes to the room & looks into his lap top
geet knew maan was upset & did'nt say thing for her
rano told geet to call maan for dinner
she came into the room & studied his mood, he did'nt respond
she waggled her bangles he continued typing, she then moved her legs slowly
he still continued typying, bfore she could say any thing h closed his laptop in anger
she got scared & ran away from there, he opened the lap top & continued working
geet requested raji to call maan
raji - jiju dinner khana challen
maan - umm
he came & sat on with darji, dev, daadi ma & papaji
geet served him trying to see if he was still angry
krish came running chasing chinto & bumped into geet
she fell on maan, he was about to shout at krish, she held him back
nodding her head, clucting his collar tightly
he got even more wild & snapped her hand from his collar & looked away
after dinner brij had still not returned & darji was getting tensed
they called his friends & not heard any thing yet
maan ignored all that discussion & went into the room
it was past mid night & no news of brij, evey one seemed worried at home now
rano - beta tu jake so ja
geet - kekin veerji
rano - woh darji dehk lenge, teri health ke liya teehk nahi hoga
geet half heartedly went inside the room & looked at maan
he was still working on his laptop, she stood there for few mins
& wondered unhe kaise kahoon, naraz bhi hain
he closed the laptop & walked out of the room
geet - itna naraz hogaya mujhse

maan went to the guest house picked his gun & went to look for
brij, on the way he made a call to dev to meet him near the fields
they searched around the places & finally found him tied up in a tree
maan openned him
maan - tum teehk ho?
brij - tum?
maan - are u alright?
brij - nodded in pain...they had really beaten him up
maan, dev & brij were about to leave when few gundas attacked them from behind
maan & dev fought them all & kicked their but. mean while one of them tried to
fight on with injured brij with talwar, maan held the talwar with his bare
hand just above brij's neck. brij was shocked beyound words
maan & dev got rid of all the gundas & drove brij safely to the hawali
every one ran to the door seeing maan & brij in blood
raji goes to call geet
maan - nahi raji geet mat uttana woh mujhe aise dehkgi to pareshan ho jayeghi
geet - aap paas nahi hote to geet waise bhi pareshan hoti hain


comes running to him with tears in her eyes & hugs him kisses him infront of every one
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zv9xLKXBA38[/YOUTUBE]
dev cleares his throat. she feels embarrassed & burries her head in his chest

darji calls the doctor to attend to brij & maan
maan - I am fine & goes inside
geet comes with a first aid kit & haldi wala dood
maan ignores her & goes to the wash room & has a shower cleans his wounds & comes out
geet pulls his hand & kisses his hand with moist eyes
maan shouts - tum rona band karo, I can't bare to see tears in your eyes
she hugs him & I love u
maan - janta hoon
geet - mujhe se naraz ho
maan - tumne hi kaha tha main tumse naraz nahi ho sakta
geet - I am sorry
maan - why are u saying sorry, pagli
geet - mujhe bahut bura lag raha hain, meri wajah se
maan - now u r hurting me by saying all this
geet - aap ne mera liya he bends down & closes her lips with his, taking in her pain
and filling it with his love. he slips his hand into her hair & cradling her head
she arches in to get closer that she if she could get more closer than she was.
maan pulls out of catching for his breath - mera gift
she smiles & nodes
he lifts & screems in pain, tears roll down her eyes,
maan kiss her eyes one after the other, aise kyun karti ho
she kiss his hand again - bahut dard ho raha hain
maan undressing her - abhi nahi
he opens her pat & burries his face taking in her scent. he kissed her passionately
and drew her in very softly with his arm around her waist. she felt immeresed in his
strength and gentleness of his arms, they moved in a passionatic rythm & she instinctively,
encircled his waist with her legs. He could feel them tighten around him.
the moment just stopped & exploded carrying them into a world of their
passion. she hugged him & kissed him again ...I don't seem to stop falling in
love with u Maan Singh Khurana
maan - sachi
geet - muchi
as there breathing begins to be normal, she rests her head on his chest
maan holds her close - tumne mujhe krish ko tant ne se kyun roka
geet - sab ke samne use bura lagta, waise bhi aap use se utna gussa nahi the, he hugs her & they sleep cuddled up maan resting his hand on her tummy

next day maan took geet, dev, NT & krish for camping in the jungle
they set up a tent & did fishing during the day time
at night they had a campfire & grilled the fish
maan had carried packed for geet
middle of the night geet woke up & dragged maan out
maan looked at her sleeply she made him sit in the inflatable boat
he cuddled up & dossed off. she started rowing it
maan was too sleepy to realize what she was upto.
after struggling for an hour & reaching in betwwen the water.
she sensually started kissing him,
maan smiled - geet krish tumhare pass so raha hain
she continues to play around him & opening his shirt
maan pulls her closer - i am definitly making a trip to HP every month
still not realizing where they were, she rests her head on his chest & wispers
deehko na woh chand bhi mera chand se sharma raha hain
maan slowly opened his eyes she softly kissed him on his lips first &
then she licked his lips with her wet warm tongue invading further
maan was lost looking at the deep dark sky & the twinkling stars
witnessing their togatherness & wamth of her body resting on him
they lied down looking at the stars holding close.
maan - i loved it, it is so beautiful to be hear with u
geet blushed

precap
khushi khushi!!!!!

VM CREDIT TO salma434
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay!!!🥳
First one to comment on Pyar ka ehsaas after a long time😊

Loved the update😊
Maan ka gussa, Geet ki bechaini, Gharwalo ki Brji ko lekar tension, Maan ka Brij ko bachana and finally Maaneet ka hug-lovely!!!
Maan ne Brij ko bachaya, shayad ab Brij ka gussa shaant ho jaaye😉
Maan ka talwar ko rokna with bare hands reminded me of the HP fight sequences. Those scenes were really very well shot!😊
Caring maan, Geet ko na batana-How sweet😊
Geet hugged and kissed him in front of everyone😳
Camping part was good😊
Precap-Khushi😊
5-6 Months ka leap hoga next update mein kya?
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one musskaan.. i was wondering today if u forgot abt this one, since u updating ur other two new ffs reguraly.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow !!! kushi coming in next part. ????cant wait to see wat would happen next ??
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Posted: 14 years ago
di awesome update... Geet has beccome bold enof to kiss Maan in front of every one..hmmm i tot wen krish bumped into Geet Maan wud scream but Geet stopped him... thank god...precap... Khushi khushi... seems good update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow finally kushi coming what precap i cant to read Maaneet being parents maverlous update pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnx for such a wonderful update.........i started my day with ur update and ending it again with ur update...........waiting for next part eagerly and plz update it soon please cz cant wait for khushi........
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update.
thank god..Khushi ...
seems good update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update di! d way geet kissed maan in front of everyone i m shocked, i must say kudi is bold enough now nd khushi is cmng in nxt part, i can't wait update soon..........
Edited by my_maan_geet - 14 years ago

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