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can you please pm me?
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bhavika...priza : sure..i'll send u d updated links 😊
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wen is the next update yaar?
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awwww mrk sorry for delaying it...😭 i'll update it today only asap 😳
m still working on it
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hey if possible please provide part name of update with page no. on the first page
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update soon like your story pm me too thanks

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Originally posted by: Manpreetmann

bhavika...priza : sure..i'll send u d updated links 😊



thanks....r u planning to update now?
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😃soo sweet yaar...mast hai!!
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guys sorry for delaying this part...thank u, luved ur comments...u know wat, ur comments give me the strength to write up the story ahead...plz do click on like button n don't forget to leave ur lovely comments....suggestions are most welcome n yeah criticism too!!

{brij's small intro- a very friendly natured guy..very close/open to geet..geet believes that brij's is the best bro in this whole world}

Part 6 :-

after few mins brij joins geet n maan...
Brij: ho gayi tum logo ki baatein??
Geet: haan ho gayi..
geet hugged him from side & rested her head on his shoulder..
Geet: bro..i'm angry with u..ur the worst bro in this world..don't talk to me..😡
Brij: aww...why??????? why is my baby angry with me..???😲
geet started whack him
Geet: i told u no..don't talk to me..(angry voice)...y din't u tell me dat today ur coming back from london..(complaining voice)
Brij: hmmm..toh yeh baat hai..agar bata deta toh surprise kaise deta
Geet:still...!! u know na, i always come airport to pick u up..
Brij: acha sory baba!! galti ho gayi..aage se nahi hogi (holding his ears)
Geet: koi maafi nahi..itni aasani se maaf nahi karungi..pehle oothak-baithak karo..🤪
maan lifts his eyebrows..brij smiles n started doing it..
geet smiled..hugged him tight
Geet: i luv u bro..
Brij: i know that..temme sumthing new..😆
geet rolls her eyes..
Brij: luv u 2 my baby..
Geet: bhabhi kaha hai..??
Brij: she stuck up with sum work...toh nahi aayi...
Geet: ohh k...acha aap mere liye kya laaye ho, mera matlab hai mera gift kaha hai??
Brij: wo bhi surprise hai..tere room mein hai...jaa jaake check karle..
their never ended talk was going on..they keep up their bak bak on..
maan was admiring their relation..he feels lively seeing them like this..he is also blessed with this relation of siblings..he believes brother and sister are as close as hands and feet. It was nice growing up with someone like you - someone to lean on, someone to count on... someone to tell on! he remembered how he & his sister used to spend their time together..

Flashback (3yrs back)-

Pinky: bhai.. m leaving for my college..
Maan: my sweet lil princess.. just wait for me 2minz.. i'll drop u..
Pinky: m waiting...plz fast
Maan came with a big bouquet of pinkish purple roses holding in his hands..two servents followed him holding lots of gifts in their hands..
Pinky: omg..wats this??
Maan: guess..
Pinky: u remember it..i thought u forgot..
Maan: shut up u idiot..u really think that i can forget..
Pinky: then y din't u wish me at midnight
Maan: sorry...!! i wasn't there..i came back at 2..n u were sleeping, so i dint want to disturb my princess's sleep..(holding his ears)
pinky holds n let his hands down & hugged him
Pinky: awwww... u made my day...😃
maan hugged her back
Maan: HAPPY BIRTHDAY my princess..🥳

Present-

Geet: Khadoos.. Khadoos.. oye KHADOOS!! shouted n shook him
maan came back out of his thoughts
Maan: hmmmmm (looking confused)
Geet: kya hua?? kahan kho gaye the??
Maan: kahin nahin.. nodes his head
Brij: come..letz have dinner first..
Geet: right!! *pehle pet puja..baad mein kaam duja..* n starts laughing
they went for dinner..
Rano to maan: puttar kya khaoge??
Maan: hmmm????
Rano: mera matlab hai veg or non-veg??
Maan: anything will go
rano serves maan.......geet, brij n chintoo sat together..geet sits on left side of brij n chintoo on right..rano serves brij..
Geet teasingly: haan haan..ab toh mere saath partiality hogi hi..mai ladki hun na isliye..aapka beta jo aa gaya toh meri plate mein pehle kyun daaloge..kal tak toh mujhse bohot pyaar tha..ab bro aa gaye toh mere liye pyaar khatam..huh
rano whacks on her head
Rano: hatt pagli..
brij turns side away to feed chintoo..geet quickly ate halwa from Brij's plate..maan smiled on her act..brij noticed maan n turns to see geet..geet gave him dumb smile..he twists her ear
Brij: meri plate mein muh mara tune??
geet noded her head for no with a devil smile on her face
Brij:acha??
Darji: geet..yeh kaisi harkate hai..aise koi khata hai kya.. (angry voice)
Brij defends: meri behen ko koi kuch nahi kahega..aur waise ek baat hai geet jab tak tu mere khaane mein bhog nahi lagati tab tak mujhe khana digest nahi hota..😉
maan again lost

Flashback-

pinky n maan sitting on dining table..daadi first serves food in maan's plate..n move to serve pinky..all of a sudden maan changes his plate with pinky..
Maan: daadi maine aapko kitni baar kaha hai, mujhe dene se pehle meri princess ko serve kiya karo..
Daadi: aur yeh bolti hai ke bhai ko pehle diya karo..
Maan: nahi..meri princess ko pehle..
Daadi: pehle tum dono decide karlo..kisi pehle du aur kise baad mein..
Pinky: bhai ko pehle!!
Maan: nahi jab tak meri princess pehli bite nahi khayegi toh mai kaise kha sakta hun..

Present-

Rano to maan: beta thodi si dal aur lo na..
maan was tooooooo lost
rano pats his shoulder..he jumps back out of his thoughts
Rano: kya hua?? serves in his plate
Maan: kuch nahi
Brij: zaroor iss bhootni ne kuch kaha hoga..dekho bechara kaise dara dara sa hai...😆 & started laughing
geet makes a face
Geet: huh!! maine kuch nahi kaha..bro aap apna zyada dimaag mat lagao...waise bhi apke paas kam hai wo...
Brij: mai maan hi nahi sakta ke tune kuch nahi kaha..dekh uski halat kya hai..
Chintoo: bhua aap bhoot ho? (asks with a innocent face)
Geet: chi chi mumma dekho..bro chintoo ko kaisi kaisi baatein sikha rahe hai..
Brij: maine kya sikhaya..ab jo fact hai wo fact hai..😉
Darji to maan: beta mummy papa nahi aaye ab tak..
maan looked at geet
Brij: dekha maine kaha tha na, zaroor isne hi kaha hai kuch..
Maan: ji nahi woh..
Darji: kya hua...kuch pareshaani hai...
Maan: nahi aap logo ko kuch batana tha..
Darji: haan bolo
Maan: aap log jo samajh rahe hai mai wo nahi hun..
Brij wispers to geet "dekh tera asar hone lag gaya ise abhi se hi.. kaisi kaisi baatein kar raha hai bechara.."
Darji: matlab?
Maan: aap logo ne mujhe abhi tak bolne ka mauka nahi diya..mai aapko pehle hi batana chahta tha..
Darji: tum kehna kya chahte ho..
Maan: mai woh ladka nahi hun, jo aap samajh rahe hai..mai woh doc nahi hun, jo geet ko dekhne aane waala tha..
everybody got shocked
darji gets up in anger.. tum samjhte kya ho apne aap ko, niklo yahan se bahar..
maan speaks to himself "aaj tak kabhi kisi ne MAAN SINGH KHURANA se aise baat nahi ki.." but he calms himself..dint say anything
Darji: suna nahi tumne..
Maan: meri baat toh suniye..
Darji: sunne layak ab bacha hi kya hai...??
Maan: aur mai kahun ke bohot kuch bacha hai toh..
Mahender: kehna kya chahte ho..
Maan: mai GEET se shaadi karna chahta hun...
geet gulped some water n mummers **satyanaas..kya karun mai iss Khadoos ka..maine acha bhala itna acha option diya tha, khali haan bolna tha bas aur kuch scene nahi tha,...ab lo marwa diya na mujhe bhi...mujhse shadi karna chahta hai, iski toh mai..............hey babaji yeh aap kya kar rahe ho mere sath...mai aapko hasti khelti achi nahi lagti kya...**
Darji: ho kaun tum..?? kya ho..??
Maan: i'm MAAN SINGH KHURANA (he said that in full attitude)
darji..mahender...looked him in surprise.......they sold their delhi land to him last month only but dint get a chance to see him..
Maan: i'm MAAN SINGH KHURANA...MD of Khurana empire's
geet was dumbstuck looking at him...
geet mummers "jhoot bolna hi tha toh kuch chota mota nahi bol sakte the...itna bada jhoot bolne ki kya zarurat thi"
Mahender: toh tumne hume bataya kyon nahi..??
Maan: aap logo ne mujhe bolne ka mauka hi nahi diya..mai toh pehle hi batana chahta tha..
geet mummers "mere gharwale sach mein pagal hai...iss khadoos ke jhoot ko sach maan gaye..."😆
darji walks out with mahender in another room...n came back after few minz...
Mahender: tum geet ko kaise jaante ho..??
Maan lies: hum dono 2months pehle mile the..mai yahan business ke silsile mein aaya tha...tab humari mulakaat hui thi..
geet glare a shot at him & speaks in her mind "yeh pagal ho gaye hai kya..apne saath saath mujhe bhi marwa kar chodenge"
Darji in angry voice: geet yeh sach bol raha hai..??
geet mummers "dekha marwa diya na...hey babaji aap kya chahte ho, kyun mera band baja rahe ho..agar haan bolungi tab bhi marungi or nahi bolungi tab bhi...par geet koi option nahi hai, haan toh bolni padegi..............babaji bacha lena"
Darji shouted: GEET
Geet: ji...
Rano to mahender: haye rabba.. dekha mai na kehti thi...humari geet badli badli si rehti hai...aap meri sunte hi kaha the...ab dekh liya..
Brij wispers to geet: tune mujhe bataya bhi nai...
Darji: tumhare ghar mein bada kon hai..jisse hum baat kar sake..
Maan: ji meri daadi maa
Darji: thik hai..unse hum kab mil sakte hai..
Maan: jab aap kahen...
Darji: thik hai..hum bata denge, kab milna hai..
brij hugs maan..geet winked
geet turns to make a call to anurag n stood rooted seeing him at entrance... he was walking out of the house..
Geet: anurag sun...
he din't seems to be listened....geet runs behind him
Geet: anurag listen...listen to me...
Anurag: geet ab sunne ki liye bacha hi kya hai..
Geet: anu sun toh!!
Anurag shouted: kya?? kya sunana chahti hai..
Geet: tu mujhe galat samajh raha hai..
Anurag: acha....mai galat samajh raha hun..
Geet: nahi mera yeh matlab nahi hai..tu mere room mein chal, mai tujhe sab samjhaati hun (holding his hand)
anurag pulled his hand out of her grip & yelled
Anurag: mujhe ab aur kuch nahi sunna..jo bhi maine suna kya wo kaafi nahi tha..
Geet snaped back: haan kaafi nahi tha..now u have to listen to the whole thing or whole drama..
Anurag: i'm not a kid..u can't make a fool out of me..geet watever i heard was enough for me to figure out the whole situation..
Geet: u don't know anything..u're taking me wrong..
Anurag: bas geet..mujhe laga tha 2months se humara relation chal raha tha, but nahi yahan toh scene hi alag hai..geet ek baat bata aise aur kitne hai tere..
geet's heart hurted with his words
Geet: enough! i was trying to tell u everything just to clear out all this crap..but u unnecessarily pointed out on my character..Anu u know, this is the only thing that i can't take..get a life..and excuse me "u were the only one who dated so many girls at the same time" but as such i never interfere in ur life, i always prefer to give u the full space to enjoy ur life..n u know y i gave u a such space & never acted like a chipkoo GF bcoz i trusts u n always kept 1 thing in my mind that if u like sumone's company, so there's nothing wrong in roaming around with them bcoz u don't luv them, u only luv me..
Anurag shouted: i'm not interested in ur lecture... n walked off...

Precap: geet worried for anurag😔 n shouting on maan😲!!

Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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amazing. loved it hun. update soon.
Edited by -sofiya- - 14 years ago

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