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Posted: 14 years ago
Thx in advance
A small question out of my curiosity, when we can expect the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
lolz.......within 3hrs only...😉...i know waiting for an update is like waiting for CHAI-PAKODA in Baarish hahahaah, rofl just kiddin... oh gosh its Loooooooonnnnnnggggg 3hrs but trust me, i have a surprise for u all....... it'll be worh waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thx. ya i know ur update will be worth waiting :-)
Chalo i will see this thread after 3 hours only then.
Small clarification: i am not going to leave forum. i will be there in this forum only, but i will check ur thread after 3 hours
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally the wait will come to end.... Gosh!! Seems like we have been waiting ages for u to update.... it better be good and veryyy long!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Manpreetmann

lolz.......within 3hrs only...😉...i know waiting for an update is like waiting for CHAI-PAKODA in Baarish hahahaah, rofl just kiddin... oh gosh its Loooooooonnnnnnggggg 3hrs but trust me, i have a surprise for u all....... it'll be worh waiting

😭
manpreet it better be a surprise
never rise hopes that can't befulfilled
you are a darling👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey maanpreetmann waiting plzzzzzz update fast
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry din't reply to all comments this time... u all knew that i wasn't well n even busy with exams..... so plz forgive me.... n plz leave long comments as always..... will reply to all the comments next time..... Kaan pakadke sorry

Recap :-

Geet: kya hai??
Maan nodes for a no: nothing..
Geet: then why are u staring at me..
Maan: was just staring at my would be fiance..
Geet taken a back, remembers that he loved sam: i won't..
Maan shouts: what is wrong with you?? ohh i forgot, u have a BF
geet's eyes welled up with tear
Maan: don't show me your tears.. apne BF ko dikhana yeh sab..

Part 18 :-

Maan walks off in anger... geet stood there with moist eyes...
anurag joins her n takes her to the hotel.... he din't notice her mood....
he shows her all the arrangement what he had made for party....
party will be in a big lounge... he booked the club for whole night...
geet felt lil light by changing of environment, but she every now n then remembering MAAN... last words of maans was echoing in her ears "u have a BF"..... she got angry.... how could he even think like this.... then in a matter of seconds she got confused....
she mummers "geet sochna bandh kar... tu kyun itna soch rahi hai...galat kya kaha unho ne, anu tera BF hi toh tha....*playing with her hair* BF tha, ab nahi hai....woh aisa kaise soch sakte hai mere baare mein....aur agar anu mera BF hota bhi toh, how does it matters to him....huh"
anurag shook her....
Geet looks around confusingly: itni badi party...i mean we are 3 ppl only... itne bade lounge ka kya karenge?
Anurag: yaar i have loads of friends in delhi..... n u know most of them..... so i invited all of them.....
Geet: ok... thats cool... taani kab tak ayegi??
Anurag looks in his watch: its 7... she'll be here around 8.... u go n get ready.... mai bhi ready hota hun....
anurag shows her taani's room..... geet laid on bed in her room....after a while she freshens up, changed n got ready by 7:45
anurag took her to the lounge.... many ppl were already there.... she knew many of them.... n anurag introduced rest of them with her....
geet meets up with her very old collegefriends.....anji n kirti

Geet: tum log yahan???
Anji: i was in contact of anu, he invited us n told me that u guys broke up n throwing a party, pehle toh i was like "are you guys mad??" then i thought its ok, big deal..... waise mera abhi anu ke saath chance hai....😉
geet laughs
Kirti: shut up anji.... hey geet where have u been...college ke baad toh tu gayab hi ho gaye....
Anurag: geet taani will be here any minute.... tu room mein ja.... n use tayyar karke yahan le aa....
Geet nodes n leaves: anji, kirti i'll back soon...k...
they smiles
geet meets up with taani n hugs her like they have met after ages....
Taani: i have a complaint.... today was my first day in office n u were not there to wish me....
Geet makes a baby face: sorry....
Taani hugs her: oye i was just kidding...no issues babez....anyways where is anu??
Geet excitedly: get ready in 10mins....we are partying tonight...
Taani smiles: par kyun?
Geet: abey yaar... jaldi tayyar ho... party ke liye reason hona zaruri hai kya??
taani went to washroom
Geet shouts: plz wear some western....indian nahi....disc mein party hai...
Taani: hmm ok
anurag knocks on the door...
Geet: kaun hai..??
Anurag: yaar kitna time lagega?
Geet: bas 5mins...she's getting ready..andar aaja...
he walks in to the room
she walks out of the washroom wearing simple but classy one piece

anurag stares her like he have seen her for the first time....he looks lost....
Geet: aise kya dekh raha hai??
Anurag: ................
Geet shook him: kya hua?? n smirks
Anurag come to her senses: nothing
Geet: usne 1st time aise kapde nahi pehne hai....
Anurag: neeche chale
taani looked at them with a confused expression
Geet teasingly: haan chalo neeche...
3 of them went to the club....
taani got shocked seeing so many familiar faces.... she meets up with them.... she was happy but more over she was confused...
Taani: geet yeh saare yahan kaise...??
Geet smiles: abhi pata chal jayega...
everybody was on dance floor, enjoying the aura....when anurag announces something
Anurag announces: Ladies n gentlemen, may i have your kind attention please....
everyone looks at him
Anurag: this party is organized by me n geet.....
everyone gives them a round of applause
Anji: haha abhi kitne logo ko toh yeh nahi pata, yeh party hai kis khushi mein, abhi pata chalega toh heart-attack aa jayega.....
geet winks.....
Kirti: oye chup kar
Friend: kis khushi mein???
Anurag with a big grin on his face: gud ques... actually me and geet broke up yesterday.....
Geet gave him a huge smile
Taani looked at both of them n her jaw dropped down: WHAT????
anji smirks.....
half of the crowd laugh, who already knew it n others just saw them in shock
Geet hugs taani from side: yeah.... the party was pre-planned, its was surprise for u.... actually yesterday we broke up in flight....
Anurag to taani: haan aur ise aaj kisi aur se Pyaar bhi ho gaya......😆 & laughs
anji gives geet a flying kiss
kirti nodes her head in disbelief....
taani stood there like a statue.....
Geet: hua nahi hai... ho sakta hai... woh actually i'm confused...😉
Taani: tum log pagal ho kya?? kis khushi mein break up kiya
Geet: dumbo khushi mein nahi... hum dono ek dusre se pareshaan ho gaye the... khushi mein toh party ki hai....
gave a high five to anurag
Taani: u guys are impossible
Geet n anurag: pata hai
Taani: well... geet i must say, nobody can beat u in BF's list....
Geet: haha yeah i know...
everyone drowned in the ambience as the time passes.... they were enjoying like anything.... geet gulps 4 neat vodka shots one after one, she bet with anji on this..... even anji had.... they both were out of their senses....
they moved to dance floor..... geet was dancing in joy or we can say that she was dancing bcoz she was HIGH.....
she looked at the guy coming inside with anurag.... image was blurred, she shook her head, closed her eyes.... that guy some how looks like maan to her...... she again shook her head n saw him n her eyes widened.... it was HIM....
geet's heartbeat start rising.....
maan came closer to her.... she was breathless.... her heart was jumping in joy, but mind was angry with him....he came even more closer....he was mere inches away
he holds her waist delicately, giving her a cozy feeling.... his touch sent million current down her spine....
he starts dancing with her, she moved in rhythm..... their soft n smooth dance changes into passionate one flowing the music......
after some time maan holds her wrist n dragged him outside......
geet looked at him, smiling....
Maan shouts: tumne drink ki hai???
Geet: toh??????
Maan: GEET
Geet: aap kabhi chillane ke alawa kuch nahi kar sakte... kitna aacha dance kar rahe the, pata nahi bahar kyun aa gaye??
Maan in angry voice: aaj ke baad, tum kabhi drink nahi karogi...
Geet: kyun??
Maan: maine bol diya toh bas bol diya....
Geet asked very softly: hum aapke hain kaun??
maan melted in her soft voice.... he looked at her...
Maan: mai.............. (he pauses)
Geet playfully hits him on his chest: aap bohot gande ho... mujhe gussa bhi kiya...
maan smirks seeing her like this...
Geet: batao na... mai aapki baat kyun maanu....
she was looking so tempting, but maan controls his feeling....
Geet caresses his cheek: aapko kyun laga anu mera BF hai??
her touch gave him butterflies in his stomach...he dint say anything
Geet: wo mera BF nahi hai... wo bas mera friend hai...
maan smiles
geet hugs him tightly like a small kid, with a "don't snatch my toy" expression....
it was becoming harder for maan to control his feeling...
both were breathing high... they can hear each others heartbeat....
geet hugs him even tighter...
maan gave up n hugs him back with full passion
Geet: maan i don't know about u...but i wanna tell u that
Maan: that???????????
Geet whispers in his ear: that "I LUV U"
maan metled in her words....he cups her face n bend a lil forward.... he wanted to touch her lips, he wanted to feel her....he wanted to make her HIS LIFE....
geet sees his desire..... even she wanted to touch him, she wanted to make him HER LIFE.... maan was waiting for her single response... she moves closer.... maan smiles.... he moves even closer n closes the gap between them..... he took her lips in his..... their kiss becomes Passionate.....
Taani shook her: kya hua??? why are you looking lost..???
geet came back to her senses, she din't get what just happened "was that her dream or he was actually there"..... she found herself on the dance floor..... she looked shocked.....
Anji: apne naye lover ke baare mein soch rahi thi
geet looked anji in shocked
Taani: wat hap??
Geet: mai toh bahar thi?
Taani: dekh bola tha, itni mat pee.... u r high.... oh god.... tu tabse yahin hai... n u were lost in ur dreams....
she was confused "how can she even dream like this?"
she speaks to herself "mujhe kya sach mein maan se pyaar ho gaya?? par aise kaise ho sakta hai?? hum toh ek dusre ko ache se jaante bhi nahi hai..."
Taani: geet r u fine...
Geet: i need some rest... u guys enjoy....
Taani: mai chalu tere saath
Geet: nahi nahi....
Taani: r u sure?
Geet: yup & leaves

Precap: Maan got Taani's diary


HEY GUYS HERE IS A SURPRISE FOR YOU ALL
i started a new FF called "Memories of unexpected love"......have a look n do comment😃

hehehe now plz dont bash me coz of this dream sequence..... i know how eagerly u all were waiting for Maneet Kiss n here it comes out as a dream sequence..... yeh toh woh baat ho gayi " khoda pahaad, nikli chuhiya "😆.......hope u guys will like it.....n dont forget to hit on like button😛
Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
beginning of a very interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part. for some time i thought it happened in real
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no it was a dream after all...i thought they really did express their feelings...but chalo we will hv some more cute jhagada bw them now.....

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