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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2 :-

they went to taani's place..had dinner and then went to taani's room.. there was a diary laying on her bed.. geet jumps up on bed n holds it..
taani was busy cleaning up her room which was all messed up like hell..
Geet: oye taani.. tune mujhe kabhi bataya nahi ke tu diary entries bhi karti hai..
taani's eyes poped out & suddenly turns to snatch it from geet's hand.. obvious reaction, afterall it was her personal diary 😉
Taani: geet yeh mujhe wapas kar
Geet: abey padhne toh de
Taani: usme kuch nahi hai, just give it back to me
taani tries hard to snatch it, but geet handed over it to anurag.. taani runs to anurag, he throws it back to geet.. they played like that for a while and wen geet again throws back (everybodys eyes poped out)
Anurag: geet yeh kya kiya..window se bahar kyun phek diya??
Geet: oh F*** !! seriously i dint do it intentionaly..
geet fumbles.. taani, woh.......woh maine galti se...... m soooooo sorry...
Taani: its ok geet...i know...jus calm down... chalo neeche se lekar aate hai...
Geet n Anurag: hmmmmm
they went down & looked around for it but unfortunately it was not there... taani got tensed, and started remembering how she used 2 write each n every moment she spent n enjoyed with geet n anu... but dint say a word to geet... geet felt bad... but have no idea dat why is taani so hurt
Geet: anurag thik se check kar na wahan.. mai yahan dekh rahi hun..
Anurag: haan dekh raha hun..!!
Taani: phewwww... leave it guys...!!
Geet: par taani woh.........
Taani: geet tu hi bolti hai na "WHATEVER HAPPENS, HAPPENS FOR GOOD".. SO CHILL.. ab bhul jao, aur upar chalo..
geet's phone rings
Rajji (geets younger sis): didi where are u??
Geet: i m at taani's place..! wat happened??
Rajji: taapmaan bhut garam hai.. bomb-blast hoga aaj..
Geet: kyun?? in a confused voice
Rajji: babez.. look at the time..!!
Geet: oh fish..! its 2, mai toh gayi.. listen i'll be there in 10minz, tab tak sambhal le..plz
Rajji: hmmm bye.. (cuts d call)
Anurag: chal.. i'll drop u..
Geet: u have to drop me in 10minz
Anurag: yeah yeah..! i know, aur madam waise aisa kabhi hua hai k jo aapne kaha ho aur maine na kiya ho!! (in a flirting tone)
Geet: haan haan yaad hai mujhe, last time jo kiya tha tune.. maine kaha tha mujhe 1/2 hr mein pohochna hai aur tune mujhe 1 n 1/2 hr mein pohochaya tha.. kitni jaldi pohochaya tha na (sarcastically)
Anurag: usme meri kya galti thi agar tyre puncture ho gaya tha toh..
Taani: enough guys!! geet u're getting late aur tum dono ne yahin 10minz kar diye hai
Geet: yeh sab anurag ki wajah se.. (in an angry voice)
geet & anurag hugs taani & leaves
geet reaches home.. enters like a thief..
Darji: humare ghar ki bahu betiyan itni raat tak bahar nahi ghumti hai.. ( in a stirn voice )
geet in a husky vice.. woh ji..ji darji woh.............
Darji: bas geet...tujhe mahender(geets father) ne zyada sir pe chada rakha hai
geet kept quite
Darji: jao apne kamre mein par yaad rahe aage se aisa na ho..
geet again kept quite but speaks to herself in her mind "inn logo ne khud toh kabhi kuch kiya nahi aur hume bhi nahi karne dete hai.. aur yehi agar muje itni late shoot pe jana hota, toh tab inhe koi problem nahi hoti, ufff mujhe ye logic samajh nahi aata...par chhaddo ji" & left

Next Morning TAANI'S HOUSE

it was 10am.. taani was rushing out of the house..
Taani's mom: beta sun, ruk toh jara..
Taani: no mom, m getting late for my interview...
Mom: haan haan pata hai.. bas dahi cheeni kha le..
taani comes back, had a spoon of curd, touched her mom's feet.. mom blessed her & kissed her on forehead : ALL THE BEST!!
taani smiled: thanks...bye... n left

HANDA's VILLA @ the same time

Rajji: didi utho

Geet: sone de mujhe.. tang mat kar.. bahar nikal mere room se..
Rajji: darji ne kaha hai aapko uthaane ke liye aur 1hr mein tayyar hone ke liye kaha hai, aapko aaj ladke waale dekhne aa rahe hai..
geet gets up in a jerk..W*F!! aj fir se drama.. yaar rajji abhi 2 hafte pehle hi toh ek ko bhagaya tha aur ab fir se.. waise ab kon aa raha hai??
Rajji: mujhe nahi pata.. shayad koi doctor hai..
Geet: ewwwwwwww
geet checks her phone n saw 3 missed calls from taani..n calls her..
Geet: haan bol.. itni subah kaise phone kiya??
Taani: gud mrng!!! geet 10:30 ho rahe hai...
Geet: i know... par mere liye toh yeh early morning hai na...
Taani: hmm, toh itni jaldi kaise uth gayi madam aaj..
Geet: yaar koi chuha mujhe dekhne aa raha hai..
Taani: tere shaatir dimaag mein kya chal raha hai use bhagane ke liye..??
Geet: abhi soch rahi hun.. oye teri!! aaj toh tera interview hai na??
Taani: hmmmmmm
Geet: kahan hai tu??
Taani: yahin hun, 15min mein interview hoga mera..
Geet: GREAT..!! ALL THE BEST.. call me after the interview..
Taani: thanks babez... n (cuts d call)

Precap: will taani get dis job?? wat say??

Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
Hiiii
Awesome start
Loved it
Can't wait 4 maan's entry
Love the concept
Con soon
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Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome start
looks interesting
plz add me to ur pm list
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Manpreet,
Thanks for a lovely update.... waht happened to the diary? disappeared into thin air?😆😆😆... i thought that geet and anu would read abt tani;s feelings for anu... but they never found the diary!!
by the way, where is Maan?? i miss him already😳😆.... plz cont soon and we want longer updates....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ...do continue soon.
add me to yr pm list plz..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great ....
update soon.....
thanks for pm yaar!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
hey nice start.. pls continue.. pls add me to yr PM List..
Manpreetmann thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey peeps *fairyeyes_zizi* *ARMAANKSGFAN* *kashndsel4eva* *shah10* *ramahesh* *Shalve* thanks for the comments 😊😊 Thankyou guys...thanks a lotttttttttttttttttttttttt
dhrashtee:- diary????? mmm well 4 dat u hv to wait.. remember 1 thing WHAT EVER HAPPENS, HAPPENS FOR GOOD 😉 and maan will b entering soon 😊
Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
nice update do continue ...

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