FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 63

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Posted: 14 years ago

wrong timing...........................shiv's mothers

wrong cliff hanger.................i cant wait till next update.......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
i could kill his mom .... at this point i think Shiv was gonna do that 😛 again u left us panting for more ..... pls dont torture us any longer, do cont!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg Devi your killing me here!!!
ROFL at Shivs mother
UST ROFL
and wow i think next time shiv wants Gauri to do something he should use an aphrodisiac
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Posted: 14 years ago
u make each part so edgy that i hv 2 wait for the next...when r u updating the nxt?? Plz do it soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
ufffffff....wrong timing.....now wats gonna happen...most important...wen is gonna happen????? deviiiiiiii............we r waiting.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
"So you finally managed to do the deed! I told you it was UST all those years, but did you believe me? Nooo… I am only your mother after all, what would I know? Now, go resolve away my son… Be gentle… she is softer than she lets on…"



I love Shiv's Mum 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg, I m half dead by now thank God m usd to read ur earlier updates otherwise u have already dug my grave.I thnk m gonna need nitroglycerine, jst before ur nxt update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyy Devi,
🤣man, shiv's mom is just too...umm whats the word...help me out here😆
my second part was how gauri manages to be her sarcastic lovely self even during her "condition"😆
*pouts* you know thats really unfair...u can't just leave us hanging like that...may babaji help me study now!!😆...pweez do continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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poor shiv...his mother completely rocks....lol...am I the only one who finds this situation funny? :S
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Posted: 14 years ago
His folks have a really really low opinion of him..first his dad and then now mom😆

That has to be the most ill-timed entry ever...

I am very curious how Gauri is going to react to all that happens in these 6-8 hours, once sanity returns!

Please update soon...

Needless to say- Great update!

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