FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 33

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Posted: 14 years ago

aww crossover again, excellent job Devi

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Amna

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Posted: 14 years ago

yay
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beautifully portrayed
wow i love your writing
this was very touchy her image and her placing a hand on his and all....
brilliant Devi!!👏

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Tammie

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Posted: 14 years ago

Love, love, love...

Nothing like a little absence to make the heart grow fonder. Even if it's only a matter of hours.

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Posted: 14 years ago

juusttttttt amazing.....thats all i can say....

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Posted: 14 years ago

Loveeee <3

the last paragragh = wow. :)

amazing update :)

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liv2laugh

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Posted: 14 years ago

Devi

Love how you weave the two stories together. I have no idea who Shiv and Gauri were but I love them in your story.

Jhan

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Hasina

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Posted: 14 years ago

i thought something happened to shiv teh way it was written at first i began to worry but i like how gaur realizes it would affect her if shiv got hurt

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FaithnFate

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Posted: 14 years ago

my father says us one thing about accidents which happen with ppl learn from it.....

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uzmam1

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Posted: 14 years ago

This FF is getting as addictive as Love and Despair ..

bravo!!

love the interaction between the 2 FF's too!!

adore the animosity between Shiv and Gauri .. that we all know is hurtling towards a big love .. or should i say lust fest!!

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ansah

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Posted: 14 years ago

that was awesome update...loved it

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