FF:SOULMATE-Ek anokha Abhiya:Update 11 May pg148

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Shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#901

Wow great part.👏Totally loved it.😉Keep it up.👍🏼

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shila

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Posted: 14 years ago

#902

thnx for the PM dear

a nice n sensible update

gr8 job

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#903

@RB81-Its been a long journey with SOULMATES. Alas it is all coming to an end. Its quite an anticlimatic i suppose in a way. Getting attached to all these characters has been an eye opener for me and very draining. Its taught me not to take on too many projects at one go So now i will just stick to two FF's till i can take it no more. Will Misha keep quiet who knows? We will have to wait and see.

@mansim The fight was hard to depict. I am not a fighter myself but a lover but i watch a little too many sci fi shows, dramas and movies so i didn't have to goo too deep. Sid has changed and i know this is all too fast but finishing an FF like Soulmates i didn't want to drag it and bore everyone. I know when to quit. Sometimes keeping the magic of a story telling is more important than ruining it by prolonging the inevitable.

@ozzy88-Thanks sweetie

@smart akaisha Love U for the praises

@pyaarification Thanks sweetie

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#904

@Gals_11- If U have questions sweetie i don't mind answering them

@Gangesegb - Thanks for the compliment

@quarkinsen I know i didn't go to over board. Glad U liked it

@princyz-Coming from a reader it means a lot. I'll not to disappoint U

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#905

Originally posted by: poojahanda
nice ff 👏👏👏
love the line wrap abhay in cotton wool , he was more of a man of action than a bystander,anger blinds people perception👍🏼 & love piya lines dont say anything bad about about him abhay is my life he is all i had great & in ur ff panchi is dead &danish killed her & just love lexie how she is fighting 4 her brother i want 2 feel u scream , burn & torture & burn baby burn thaat what i call a smoking drrink👍🏼 love the convo btw sid & lexie u want the same treatment or something creative & sid asking 4 help & love how u described lexie power is my saviour ,darkness is my home .iam the light ,evil nor good iam the contradictory itself & abhay words one u disowned & now want back & nice part & 2 whatever i have read is great👍🏼 love all the characters the way u have described them & looking forward 2 catch ur earlier parts

Abhay's line i try to keep as sharp as possible. U are right anger does blind people's Perception. Piya is the epitome of what real love should be transcending beyond the norms. She will never see anything bad about Abhay. Panchi's death may seem a waste but i had to kill someone the readers may have formed an attachment with. Lexie's pure grace. She is a born fighter and like Abhay will do anything for family and for his friends. The whole dialogue she gave to Sid is something very archaic. I'd have said this had i been in her position😳 I am sure U will love all the previous updates. All my readers have enjoyed this but you'll find Piya is a reincarnation.

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A.hemalatha.kini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#906

👏Ayesha..👏No wonder I am not seeing you writing anypost in forum yaar..such detailed fanfic & such awesoem writing..ONLY YOU COULD DO🤗..Yaar Ayesha..please dont feel bad & mistake me for not answering your other updates..I have read almost all..but thought I will answer here..as I have caught up with it..had lot of things lagging since my holiday..Oh so Panchi is dead ..is it..very sad..but very ineteresting..loved the way Piya fought for Abhay infront of Misha..Hey but kabhi kabhi forum mein bh post kiya karo yaar..I so miss you..!!🤗

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Pari Gupta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#907

Nice update and thanks for the PM

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#908

Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC
👏Ayesha..👏No wonder I am not seeing you writing anypost in forum yaar..such detailed fanfic & such awesoem writing..ONLY YOU COULD DO🤗..Yaar Ayesha..please dont feel bad & mistake me for not answering your other updates..I have read almost all..but thought I will answer here..as I have caught up with it..had lot of things lagging since my holiday..Oh so Panchi is dead ..is it..very sad..but very ineteresting..loved the way Piya fought for Abhay infront of Misha..Hey but kabhi kabhi forum mein bh post kiya karo yaar..I so miss you..!!🤗

Thank U so much Hema. I don't mind I know how some of us get so tied up with our personal problems like work, Studies etc. But i am pleased U made an appearance here. I love all your posts as U know. I'm sure everyone tells U this so why break the habit. I love the ways U describe Abhiya. I doubt i put this across in my FF's as best as U do. In case U didn't know this FF is coming to an end in two updates time.😳

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#909

:::Precap 51:::Closure:::

A month had passed since the last showdown. The Dobrials had only just gotten over their loss. Panchi was laid to rest in a quiet wake in her memory Piya and Misha had specially written something for her. Abhay stood by Piya's side but kept his distance from Misha to give her time to adjust to this major shock to her system. Abhay had recollected emotions filled with a mix of sorrow yet happiness at the same time. Their wedding was postponed due to Panchi's untimely demise. It wasn't the right time then They'd suffered a massive setback and Lexie was recovering from her dark phase. He had no choice but to call for her mother to collect her from his place. Lexie had to steer away from this place til she was mentall fighting fit.

Sidharth Dobrial was grateful Misha had accepted his truth for what it was. She didn't see him as a monster but as her big brother. It was time to come together for Piya's marriage to take place tonight. They had so many preparations left. He couldn't stop thinking about his dear sister Panchi who'd have loved to muck in with all this headache he had to go through sorting out the invites. On a positive note he couldn't believe Piya had finally forgiven Arnab for abandoning her and no longer blamed him for her mothers death.

Piya was a nervous wreck. She wasn't allowed to see Abhay all day thanks to this nonsense superstition about the groom not meeting the bride. Abhay refused to budge. He claimed they'd had enough bad luck so why tempt fate? She missed him so much. She was used to having him around. Piya's life began and ended with him but Misha was on hand with all the arrangements already booking in the beautician to get to work on her pale horrific face. She kept thinking she wasn't going to look pretty enough for Abhay. Dhiya was helping out with Piya's something borrowed already a secret.

While Misha was still coming to terms with Lux up and leaving her behind to be with his sister back home. Misha spent every waking moment glued to Piya to keep her mind from straying. She'd only just gotten over Panchi's death although it was still raw she could live with it for now. Misha only just got used to having a brother for a werewolf and a going to be Jiju as a vampire. While her ex boyfriend or boyfriend the status of their relationship was up in the air was a hybrid. Could her life get anymore complicated. Misha had found comfort in Sidharth.

Dhiya was still getting over Sidharth Raichand's betrayal but she'd witnessed his remorse first hand. He had now moved in with the Raichand's bonding with Abhay. It was a start. Better late than never she thought but convinced Sid to stay away til the main event.