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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww Manjarii 🤗, would love to read Neefa's work ! Welcome hon 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey manjari dats ok.i cn undrstand dear.
i ll miss ur writing of dis ff dear.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey neefa welcum to lwf ff. jus rock swty.n do pm me.
luv u
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKYOU I'V ALREADY STARTED..............WILL PAKKA POST BY TOMORROW.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey manjari its ok hon we can understand ur situation 🤗and i am glad neefa will continue it thanks a tone neefa🤗do continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwww manji can understand ur situation 😊would love to read neefa's update wish u best of luck neefa👍🏼 n cont soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
it's ok Manji n welcome Neefa😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
its okay
glad that its not going to be left uncompleted
thank u so much neefa for continuing this
thanks 4 da note
thanks 4 da pm
welcome neefa
Edited by kashndsel4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

OK GUYZ……WISH ME LUCK……….MANJARI…………..THNX N REALLY EXITED………DO COMMENT………………

----PART 34----

DINNER………………

RIDZI SAT WITH ARMAAN…………….AND NUPUR SAT WITH GUNJI AS HER LEG IS HURT AND SAYANK ARE SITTIN TOGETHER………………

AR……………

A:hey ridz……horse ridin kaisa tha………

R:armaan……waise itni buri bhi nahin thi……..

A:achcha……tumhe sabse achcha moment kya tha???????

R:sabse achcha moment……..hmmmmmm….jab mein kisi spl koi sabse pyaara hai meri zindagi mein……uske saath bitaaye hue har pal sabse achche thhe………….

A:aur who spl kaun hai????

R:hai koi……..kya naam hai…..haan armaan……..

A:aur yeh armaan koi zara humein bhi toh milaao…………..

R:who hai……….hamesha…………

A:hamesha kya??????

R:mere dil mein…………..{pointin 2 her heart….}

A:how sweet pataa hai mujhe na doubt hota hai………….

R:kyun????kisliye????

A:yeh samrat tumhaara hiin bhai hai kya……I mean ki who dekho…..gunjan usse ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahi hai aur who ek baar bhi usse dekh bhi nahin raan…………who busy dinner kha raha hai…….mujhe toh taras aata apni dost par………tum kitni romantic ho aur who khud toh nahin hain aur dusron ko bhi romantic banne nahin deta………….

R:armaan….(hittin him on his back)plz haan bhai jaise bhi hon he's d best……….

A:aur mein??????

R:verst……..mere bhai ke dushmann mere dushmann………..

A:ridzi….sry lo kaan pakadliya………

R:no……….

A:plz……..

R:no……..

Gunur……………….

G:di….kya hua……..

N:…………..

G:di……..

N:…………..

G:{kinda angry……}didi………….

N:haan…..(suddenly)kya hua gunjan kyun itna chillayi…….

G:mein kab se aapko pukaar rahi hoon aur aap hain ki…………pataa hain…….ek min……aapko kya hua…………

N:who actually abhi aaye aur abhi mera pair………..

G:chill di…….

N:

THEN AFTER DINNER D GANG WERE SEATED AROUND A TBL N THEN…………..

A:guyz lets play thruth or dare……..

S:haan gud idea…….

Mayank roles d bottle and it stops at samrat……..

N:yay…………..

M:achcha batao kya loge thruth or dare………….

S:hmmmm…..pehle thruth lete hain……..

R:mein poochti hoom kyun bhai….

S:hey ridzi tu ulte seedhe ……………….

R:aapki pehli crush………….

S:ridhimma…………

G:kaho samrat…………….

S:who ms aha………..

All:kya………

G:humaari drama teacher………

S:haan………

All:hahahahahahahahahhahahahahaha…………..

M:yeh ajooba kab hua…………..

S:guyz who…………..

R:mein bataati hun……….woh actually clg ke admission ke liye jab hum aaye thhe jab ms aha jeans mein thi aur bhai toh phir ushi din pataa chala ki unn ke alredy 2 bfs thhe par unhe yeh nahin pataa tha ki who ek tchr hai aur phirbhi who sochte rahe ki chance hai……….lekin dusre din hiin maine unse kehdiya ki who dramatic tchr hain………….

Evrybdy laugh and………………

M:arre wah samrat….tu toh chupe rustam nikla……..clg mein aur ladkiyan nahin milli…………..

N:aur nahin toh kya who unke 2 bfs………….

G:{interupting}di plz……..mere samrat ko tang math karna…………

A:mere……..ohhhhhh………….yeh samrat tere personal property kab se………

G:humesha se………….mera pyaar samrat………..

All:ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……………..

S:arre wah chashmish…………waise lets cont d game…………..

Sammy turns d bottle and it lands on ……………. Mayank…………

G:hmmmm…….toh truth ya dare??????

M:dare……..

N:toh tum……….sharukh ki acting karo ge........ M:ok……….

G:go mayank…..{claps}

Mayank stands and……

M:don ko pakadna mushkil hiin nahin na mumkin hai…….

N:mazaa nahin aaya……….

M:L

N:try…..

M: "Kabhi Kabhi dil jorne ke liye dil torna parta hai, aur dil tor ke jorne wale ko.... pata nahin kya kehte hain"

N:hmmmm………ek sad sa…………..

M: :L

N:c'mon mayank…..

M: L

N:achch sorry…(holdin her ears n makin puppy face….)

M(smiles)koi baat nahin….aisi badi badi deshon mein choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai……………

N:haaye……….

M:lets cont let dis be last…………..

G:haan kal subah bhi toh uthna hai……..

Tabhi baari aati hai……….gunjan ki……………

S:toh??????truth ya dare?????

G:dare…………

All:ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……………

S:so………………….kiss me(pointin his cheeks)

Gunjan blushes……….

N:uski badi behen yahi par hai………..

M:toh c'mon gunjan……………..

R:yaya………c'mon……………..

Gunjan sharmaate hue kisses sammy on hi cheeks n den every body r laughin n talkin n AR are lookin at each other…….SG are blushin n MN are actually starin at eachother n thn nupur mayank ko cheeks ki taraf ishaara karti hai……aur mayank hasta hai aur……..

Nupur blushes……….thn………….

A:lets go guyz……..gunjan take nupi n go 2 your camp and its very late…..so boyz n girlz………..gud night……………

PS:sorry for mistakes n I'm very nervous n plz comment n most welcome to criticize as I'm waitin for your reaction………….n I am very bad at spelings………………

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Posted: 14 years ago
RES!
*edited*
Nice update Neefa!
Really enjoyed it!
Love,
manjari
Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago

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