Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye- AR last part-page50 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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they stand next to each other and armaan places one arm around her waist and take a picture,
then suddenly a bird comes from nowhere and flies towards ridz, armaan pulls her out of the way and to closer to him and she lands in his arms, facing him - her hands on his chest, and they again have an eyelock

there is suddenly a strong wind, but both are lost in each others eyes

"asmani rang ho,
pyaar ki boond ho,
roshni ho,
dhoop ho,
chahaton ki goonj ho"
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Part 4

armaan: oh woh we should get going, we have to walk from here

ridz: oh yea haan, why can't we take the horse any further?

armaan: woh i heard it's tradition to make the walk from here, let's ask someone just in case,

they asked the man taking pictures and sure enough it was part of the ritual to walk. ( remember the love mandir...)

on the walk:

ridz: armaan so apne baare mein kuch batao

armaan: kya kahun? I'm from mumbai, lekin i studied abroad, in George Washington University, in Washington, DC in America. I really liked it, but i missed my parents, and I missed India. The whole time i felt like their was someone or somethin calling me back to India. hmm what else, I love basketball, aur music - like singing, dancing, playing guitar, ect. I am very modern, but sometimes i feel like i don;t belong here, like this is all great, lekin i'm from another time. i dont know how to explain it

ridz: like as if you were born a long time ago right? like the present it great lekin it;s not your time right?

armaan: haan, lekin tumhe kaise pata?

ridz: kyun ki even i feel like that sometimes...i dont know why, lekin i do, i thought i was the only one like that...

armaan: nahin, me too, we're in it together darling

ridz: okay enough seriousness, acha sing a song pleaseee, something about your dream girl?

armaan: acha theek hai....

Surili anhkiyun wala (they continue walking)
Suna hai teri ankhiyon sa (armaan closes his eys and remembers his past dreams)
Behti hai nandein aur needun main sapna
Kabhi to kinara pa
Utar mera sapno sa (silently wishes to find her)
Aja zameen pa aur mil ja kahin pa (he has a strange feeling that she is near)
Mil ja kahin (he looks around and notices ridz throughly enjoying his song)
O oo O
Mil ja kahin Samay sa pare
Samay sa pare Mil ka kahin

Tu bhi ankhiyon sa kabhi meri ankhiyon ki sun (kind of hits riddhima;s shoulder with his)
Surili anhkiyon wala Suna hai teri ankhiyon sa

Jana tu kahan hai Udti hawa pa tere (looks up at the sky)
Pairun ka nishan dekhe

Jane tu kahan hai Udti hawa pa tere (looks up again and slightly laughs on seeing a cloud shaped like a footprint)
Pairun ka nishan dekhe

Dhundha hai zameen pa
Jana hai falak pa
Sara asman dekhe
Mil ja kahin Samay sa para
Samay sa para

Mil ka kahin
Tu bhi ankhiyon sa kabhi meri ankhiyon ki sun
Surili anhkiyon wala
Suna hai teri ankhiyon sa (kind of looks at ridz as if saying now u)

(ridz starts)
Everytime i looking to your eyes (imagines the eyes from her dream)
I see my paradise
These stars are shining where up in the sky
painting world of desire

You are the one i waiting for (opens her eyes and looks at armaan's eyes, thinking they are exactly the same)
Everytime i looking to your eyes (it can't be a coincidence? can it?)
I see my paradise
These stars are shining where up in the sky
painting world of desire

Ooth mein chupka Dekh rahe tha (notices a baby sitting in a car with his mother, so she goes to him and sings)
Chand ke pecha pecha tha

Ooth mein chupka Dekh rahe tha (takes the baby out, with his mother's permission)
Chand ke pecha pecha tha (sings to the baby, then returns him)

Sara jahan dekha Dekha na ankhon main Palkon ke necha tha (thinking about armaan and his eyes, and how he has the same strange feelings as her)
ah chal kahin Samay sa para Samay sa para chal da kahin
Tu bhi ankhiyon sa kabhi meri ankhiyon ki sun (looks at armaan who seems to be gazing at her, thinking the same things)

(Armaan sings again)
Surili anhkiyon wale Suna hai teri ankhiyon sa Surili anhkiyon wale

Suna da zara ankhiyon sa Surili anhkiyon wale Suna da zara ankhiyon sa Surili anhkiyon wale Suna da zara aankhiyon sa ( they reach the mandir, well near it anyways)

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armaan: kya tumhe bhi aisa lagta hai jaise

ridz: jaise hum pehle bhi yahaan aiye the?

armaan: haan, lekin kuch galat hai

ridz: haan, jaise, yeh real walaa nahin hain. yeh ek replica hain...

armaan: haan, per yeh humme aisa kyun...

ridz: pata nahin, chalo ander chalte hain

armaan: haan chalo

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as soon as armaan and riddhima step inside the mandir, a strange wind blows and all the bells starts ringing, AR just look at each other, ridz unconsciously holds armaan's hand.

armaan: shh, don;t worry shona, i'm here.

ridz: armaan i have this strange feeling, i can't explain it

armaan: i know what you mean.... chalo let's go pray hmm?

(note: guys, im muslim so i can't really describe the whole mandir details, and how they pray, lekin in my story this isn't a regular mandir. it is treated like a mandir, but its usually visited for love reasons)


armaan and riddhima go further inside the mandir to pray when suddenly they feel as if the mandir is spinning, it starts slow, but gets faster and faster until they can't take it anymore and it just stops. But when it does, it seems as if everything is different.

ridz: armaan

armaan: shh, ridz, is that me?

armaan indicates a young man further inside the temple, he looks just like armaan, only he is dressed like olden days

ridz: aur woh larki uske paas, woh toh bilkul meri doppelganger.....

ridz indicates a young woman, who was bending and praying, (which is why armaan didnt notice her before,) but she jut stood up and faced armaan's look a like

armaan and ridz just stood shocked staring at the duo

(okay guys to clarify as to the diff b.t the look a like i'll right ammy for armaans look a like, and riddhi for riddhima's - we dont know what their names or anything are yet tho)

riddhi was facing ammy, he had something in his hands, but armaan and riddhima couldn't clearly make out what. then riddhi (who seemed to be crying) hugged ammy. Ammy slightly broke away from the hug and placed sindoor in her maang. Then he tied a mangulsutra around her neck and kissed her forehead.

armaan and ridz were shocked but felt like they had seen this before. they walk towards the duo, but as they approach them, their perspective changes. they were no longer witnessing ammy and riddhi. they were ammy and riddhi.

Suddenly they feel cold water splashing on them, and are broken from their trance. they are actually lying on the mandir floor, still holding hands.

priest: kya hua baache? you both just fainted?

random man: haan, i have never seen a couple faint like that together before.

random woman: haan bohot ajeeb sa tha

armaan and riddhima just sat up and looked up. it slowly dawned on them that they were dreaming, or imagining what they had witnessed.

armaan: um ridz, kya tumne bhi woh dekha?

ridz: kya?

armaan: shaadi?

ridz: haan, woh bhi

armaan: humari?


armaan and riddhima then slowly put the puzzle pieces (the ones they had anyways) together. they both dreamt of their dream partners, both fainted, and had the same "vision". their def. was a connection, something. but what?

armaan and riddhima were too confused to continue, so they made their way back to the hotel.

Both the walk and horse ride were silent. Both were lost in their own thoughts wondering about what just happened...

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okay ah that;s it for now! sorry for the super late update! life has been superrr busy!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
nice part dear
cont soon
n thx for pm
dhruvika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Ashu.. it was gud..:)
really liked the part..:) and the way u described he song actions..:)
gosh they both feel same for e/o and now they saw their past and the marriage.. but i got lil confused how and when did they fainted and it was kinda abrupt... but well.. hope they will soon recover the entire truth..:)
cant wait for their love to blossom..:) <3
thanxx for the pm and continue soon.;)
tc :)
Preet <3
Edited by cutiepreet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hye the part superb. And the flashes were just amazing.
Update nxt part soooon.
Thanx for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 part!!
loved it..
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome


thnx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice uptade...thnkx for the pm...

~Amira~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gr8 update!!
Continue soon..😊

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