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Chapter 10:

Everyone woke up early because Dadi had said everyone would go for a family picnic, as it was an opportunity for everyone to get to know each other well. Mainly, Geet and Maan because they haven't even known each other for two-weeks! Adi had to work and Pinky's dad wasn't feeling well so she stayed with him. Everyone was upset they couldn't come. But work and family come first.

The girls had talked after the engagement party and had decided on what to wear. The girls would wear track suits, since they wanted to hike near the falls.

They all met in the lobby of the Handa Mansion. Everyone was excited.

"Yeh kya aaj ke din toh please apne phone band kar dijiye!" said Rano and Sonia glaring at their husbands.

"Agar ye phone band ho jaye na toh tumhare botox ke paise kaun dega?"said Balvindar high-fiving Sukhdev.

The two women left and the boys laughed with the uncles.

"Yeh kya kiya aap ne dad?" said Dev warning him.

"Ab mana parega I know.."said Balvindar looking at Sukhdev.

"Lekin humne socha subhah subhah lardayi kar lein aur ek NORMAL din ki shuruat karain" said Sukhdev.

Maan instantly remembered Geet was mad at him.

"Ye Geet bhi na, shaadi ho rahi hai to iska matlab main uske aage-peeche phiroon.." he said while putting his hands on his waist.

They were in the coach off to the picnic site. They would come the next morning. The girls were sitting at the back and the boys stepped in.

"Yeh aap log peeche kyun bethe huwe hain?"asked Dev while wrinkling his brows.

"Kyun aap logon ke sar pe bethe?"said Anjii acting all fake-innocent and blinking continuously.

The girls bursted into laughter. Then Maan stepped on.

"Geet mujhe tumse baat karni hai'"

Geet looked at him. Everyone Oooed. She got up and went to where he was standing.

"Oye gadhe! Main tumse nahi baat kar rahi, and I came just cuz main drama nahi create karna chahti sab ke saamne"she said whispering to his ear.

Maan's concerned expression changed to W*H!

"Geet tum kyun ghussa ho?"

"Shabash! rajkumar sab apna brain use karna nahi chahte, ye sochne ke liye ke..main kyun ghussa hoon. DO THE MATH! Aur jab formula mil jaye to bata dena!!" she stomped off.

"Ufff'ye lardki mujhe paagal kar de gi!!!''

The whole way Maan was trying to figure out ways to how Geet would stop behaving this way.

"Kya hua, tu kuch bol kyun nahi raha?not that you speak a lot!'' asked Armaan leaning over to whisper to him.

"Kuch nahi woh'"

"Is she mad?"

"How did you know"

"Experience ma boy, experience. Don't worry you'll learn. If you want me to help'."

"She asked if she looked pretty, and I said yes, She's going to be MSK's future wife ofcourse she had to be pretty."

"Ahhhhh'.see you should have said something like'you're mine and will always be nothing can ever describe how beautiful you are'."

Maan stared at him jaw open.

"Life main pehli baar bohat kuch karna pardta hai. Close your mouth she's looking, you look ridiculous. And when we arrive just take her to a corner and apologize. Simple."

He instantly closed his mouth.

"Lagta hai Ridhimma ne chakkar chadhay hain tumhe" said Maan smirking.

"Tu apni ko toh pehlay pata phir baat karenge."

They reached the site and Geet was second last to get off. Maan grabbed her hand and pulled her behind a tree.

"Maan mujhe chodo! Don't talk to me' let me go! Sarre dhoond rahe hon gay"

"Geet I just wanted to say-"

He was cut off with Geet's frightened expression. Her eyes widened and'..

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHAHHHHHHAHHH!!!!!!!"

"Kya huwa Geet!!!!!"

He looked back but saw nothing. She jumped onto him.

"Maan it's a snake!!!!!!!!"

He was now carrying her and her head was tucked on his shoulder. Her eyes were closed shut.

"Kahaan?"

"Oye salle! Neeche dekhna aata nahi hai kya?"

He looked down and controlled his laughter. He then smiled.

"Maan why are you standing here! It's gunna bite!! RUN!! Save us before we-'"

"Geet, it's a garden snake, it's the size of your hand, not even. You won't die!"

"Tum mujhe marvana chahte ho!! Maan run!"

"I'm not your personal fitness trainer, kay jo exercise karna chahoo gi main karvaoon ga.BTW its gone. Tumne usko bhagaa diya"

She opened one eye to see if the coast was clear..then the other.

"Ye koi chor nahi tha jo maine bhaga diya."

Armaan and Anji came.

"Sorry guys humme nahi pata tha yahaan pe censored content hai"said Armaan covering his eyes.

"Waise Maan, why are you carrying her?"said Anjali laughing with Armaan.

Geet glared at Maan then said.

"Latter mangwaoon ya firetruck yahaan se utarne ke liye?"

He set her on the ground. She grabbed a confused Anjali's arm and left to picnic site.

"Main, Yeh LARDKI!"

"Lardki! Kahaan?"said Armaan.

Maan glared at him then stormed off.

Armaan went after him.

"Yo, man chill!"

The girls decided to go for a hike dragging their hubby's in case of animals.

When they reached the waterfall the girls started taking their track suits off.

"YEH KYA KAR RAHI HO?" said Dev.

The girls ignored and jumped into the water. They had shorts and tanks on underneath. But Geet climbed up and sat on a rock to soaked her feet.

"Smart! Yaar humne kyun nahi socha?'' said Atul.

"Because tum lardkay ho and you guys have no brain!" yelled Ridzi

Armaan took his shirt off and jumped into the water with that.

"Dikha de mere bhai!" yelled Atul jumping after Anjali.

"Nahii''. Stop!" yelled Ridhimma and Anjali while blocking the splashes that soaked them.

Naintara and Dev were in their little corner admiring the beauty while romancing.

Maan took his shirt off and went to where Geet was.

She was busy encouraging Anji to notice him behind.

"Geet!! Tum bhi aao na!"shouted Ridz without looking over to her.

Geet got up and saw Maan. She was startled and lost balance. He quickly grabbed her waist, crashing her into his bare chest. Geet felt the heat. She opened her eyes and saw his abs. Her eyes lingered over his body. Not only was he handsome but had a perfect body too.

She then realized she should stop being perverted. Maan noticed this and'smirked wider.

"If your done with your eye exercise can I say something?"

"Darn! He noticed." she thought

"Main'maine kuch nahi dekha, aur na to tum koi John Abraham ho ke main tumpe fida ho jaaon."

"I know I am better, aur agar kuch nahi dekha toh sharma kyun rahi ho?"

"Main nahi sharma rahi!"

"Really."

"Behre hoo, kahaa na"

"Toh phir tumhari cheeks kyun red hain?" he said pointing with his eyes.

He then pulled her closer and'kissed her cheek.

"See it's burning up too.." and then his phone started ringing, so he balanced her and went to answer, leaving Geet to touch where he had kissed her.

PRECAP:

Rainy night.


Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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mesmerizing update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Originally posted by: Sofna

ahhhhhhhhh lovin the updtesssssss....



Thank you 😊
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awsome!!!

plzz..do continue soon..
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oh pls dont stop pls do cont i love it thanks see soonnnnnnnnn
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lovely update.. enjoyed the sweet maneet moments.. do continue soon
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wow that superb dear :-). Please cont soon and can you add me in pm list please
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Chapter 11:

It was evening now, and everyone was seated around the garden of the cottage they were staying in. The grown-ups left because guests started to arrive for the wedding-early. The couples were all to themselves.

"Geet tum honeymoon par kahaan jaao gi?" asked Ridz

"Geet go somewhere romantic!"said Anji with excitement.

"Maan virji aapko humhari bhabhi ke liye time toh nikalna parega'."said Naintara smiling.

"To bataa na yaar, tera bhi toh honeymoon hoga na??" said Atul.

"Personally, I always wanted to go to Paris with my future hubby'so'yeah"said Geet avoiding Maan.

"Oooooooo how romantic!!!" said the girls and then giggled.

"What about you bro?"

"Sure..Paris it is then"

"Yaaaayy"cheered the girls.

Then all of a sudden it thundered.

Anjii went and grabbed Atuls arm. Atul looked soo proud.

"Armaan'"said Ridhimma freaked by the thunder.

"Duty calls"said Armaan then sat beside her and gave her a quick peck on the cheek.

Maan looked at Geet's frightened expression.

It started to drizzle.

Anjii, Ridz, and Naintara ran to the porch. Geet was running but something pricked her leg and she yelled..

"OUCH!!"

Maan rushed to her while everyone looked worried.

"Kya hua??"he said holding her shoulder.

She pouted and looked down at her foot. They stayed like that for a bit looking at eachother, then Maan picked her up.

"Awwww"said Armaan.

"Waise hua kya?"asked Dev.

"Yaar , dono kitne cute lag rahe hain, let's leave, waise bhi Ridz you said you wanted to cook.."said Atul.

"Let's go" said Ridhimma and lead them into the house.

They stood there until Maan felt a drop fall on his nose. He then carried her to the swing placed on the porch.

"Dard ho raha hai?"

"Nahi, nahi maine to phoolon pe step kiya hai na? dard to sirf insaanon ko hota hai."

"Tum har waqt aisay kyun baat karti ho?"

"Sorry, main bhool gayi thi, you don't speak with your mouth?"

"Geet'"he took a piece of tissue paper and wiped the blood away.

"Can I leave?"she said lamely

"NO!"

"Whatever'by the way it's okay we don't have to go anywhere for our honeymoon. Your probably too bust anyways."

Maan was mad now, really mad.

"I'm sorry DAMN IT!!!" he said pulling the swing closer so that their faces were inches apart.

She was taken aback and grabbed the swings hand rests for support.

"I shouldn't have been so egoistic. I have been trying to apologize the whole day but tum'you keep ignoring me and now this'"

"What do you want me to do?"

"I'm getting married for the first time too!" he said looking deeply into her eyes.

Geet could tell he was hurt his eyes turned black. She felt guilty. Maybe she took it too far?

"Fine' so were going to Paris?"

"YES!" he replied.

She kissed his cheek and ran under his arms quickly leaving him shocked now. She stopped at the door.

"You might want to rub the lipstick mark off"

PRECAP:

No precap. Suggestions welcome :P

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Guys i have a realli bad headache so i decided to post a short update..:S

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