Maaneet FF**Back in your arms**Updated on Pg 108 - Page 61

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...may....👏👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

Twinee🤗

why is it that m always spellbound after reading your updates!!!
its awesome😳 loved the confession😳
really eager to see what's in store next😉 soo jaldi update kario😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it so they r going on a date
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyy meri mayu i mishhed you babes🤗 how is everything going with you? and OHH-EMM-GEE....babes what an update!!😳 AHHHHHHHH.....kitna beautiful confession tha!!....i am still in maaneet land😍 everything was perfect....the dialogues...the setting...their emotions and your beautiful writing made it all the more magical👏 you writing took me in a trance...and the dialogues were mindblowing....oyee kya khathi hain?....itna acha kaise likhti hain?😆
your description of maan as the savior was amazing!!
from HP to Delhi, the way he has made an impact in her life....till now, we were seeing maan's pov and how he perceived their relationship....and hearing geet now simply made it special!
rab ne bana di jodi!😳
oyee hoyee a date, eh?
can't wait for the romance shomance😉
now update jaldi karna
love you!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa🤗

Thanks for all the Heart Melting replies!

Next update in the another 45 minutes!

Love U All😳

Love
Mayuuuuuuuuu<3<3

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Posted: 14 years ago
Holaaaaaaaaaaaaaa I am back!🤗

This part is dedicated to me nut case friend Ruchiiiiiiiiii🤗

I hope that you will all enjoy this part!


Part 17


Both Geet and Maan are in the parking when Maan ordered the driver that he was going to drive today. The driver tried to protest but in vain. Today was his first official date. He was so excited; gosh!
Geet intervened and tried to protest but later gave into his demands.
Maan: "Geet main ye shaam tumhare liye bahut khaas aur yaadgar banana chahata hoon. Geet ab tumhari enquiry commission khatam ho gayi ho to ab hum chalien?
Geet punched him lightly sliding her arm; both were nearing the car. Maan and Geet separated and Maan opened the door and made him comfortable in the driver's seat. Geet was waiting for Maan to actually open the door like she had seen in the almost all bollywood films. She was left fuming; and sulkingly looked at Maan and gave him a killer look.
Maan: "Geet tum koi rani ho kya jiske liye shubh muhurat nimalwaoonga gaadi main baithne ke liye?"
She replied curtly;
Geet: "Koi zaroorat nahi hai Khurana saab."
Showing her anger she slammed the door hard after seating next to him.
Maan: "Mohartama ye gaadi bahut mehangi hai aur mujhe bahut kasht karne padte hai paise kamane ke liye. Tumhare jaisa main…"
Geet: "Wah Maan Singh Khurana wah! Aapka saara kaam to main karti hoon aur aap mujhe hi bhashan de rahe hai? Ye tevar; ye raub aur aapki ki ue badi badi aankhen aur kisi ke saamne chalte honge; mere saamne inka koi upyog nahi hoga. Pange lene chod dijiye na maan. Aur waise bhi aapki dadi ne kaha hai na ki aapko meri har baat maanni hogi. "
"Kyunki main aapki hone waali patni hoon. Aur aapko apni honewaali dulhan ki har baat maanni hogi."
She said with an air of superiority! She was just too lucky to have found him; and his family! How much she craved for love; and dadi showered that motherly; gentle love on her. Just like her mother. Sigh!
Maan just smiled and continued;
Maan: "Jee meri honewaali begum saahiba! Ab nikal le?"
Maan was driving and at the same time stealing glances; to see his lady love! He was seeing Geet enjoying life after such a long time; her priceless smile was back! He just prayed that let whatever happens; I will always keep you happy Geet! Geet you are my light; my life; I want to drown in our love; please keep close to your heart always; coz my heart doesn't know any beat unless its yours! Geet always be with me!
Geet was just looking outside the window; in the dark night; Maan wondered what was she seeing? In this dim light of the streets what was her source of attraction that she is avoiding any conversation with me? Just then she said;
Geet: "Maan gaadi rokiye na; wahan main ek chaat waale ki dekha hai aur baby ka man kar raha hai woh chaat khaaye. Maan jaldi rukiye na; bahut bhook lag rahi hai."
Maan looked at her; tried to convince her that they are heading towards their dinner date; but to no avail. He gives into his Misht's wishes and parked the car. She almost teared apart her seat belt and ran towards the chaat waala!
Maan saw her and just smiled; he loved giving into her wishes; how ever childish they may be; eating chaat in her pregnancy was too sane! He patted his head and headed to be with his Mishti!
Geet: "Maan jaldi aayeena na; mujhe aapko ye golgappe khilane hai. Maan; Maan."
Maan came rushing and by the time he reached she had already eaten 10 of them; plus she had aloo chaat!
Maan: "Geet ab bas bhi karo na; kitna khaogi? Bahar ka khana ab tumhare liye theek nahi hai. Ab chalo humain kahi aur jaana hai."
Geet mocking anger; making a puppy face that completely melted his heart; she continued;
Geet: "Maan aapko sirf apke bacche ke padi hai. Maine khana nahi khaya to kuch nai?"
Maan: "Kya karron geet uski hi chinta hogi na; uski maa to khud ka khyal nahi rakhti na."
Geet interrupted; sliding her arms around his arm;
Geet: "Baby ke papa hai na mera khyal rakhne ke liye; mujhe takleef uthane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai."
She couldn't argue more with her man!
Geet: "Babaji ye mujhe kaise insaan ke saath fasaya hai?" she muttered under her breath.
Maan: "Geet; Geet kya kahan tumne?"
Geet: "Kuch nahi maan. Chale warna hum late ho jayenge na?"
Another puppy expression; Maan pays the vendor and come to the car. Finally after their cute little fights; Maan came back to normal; but Geet was still in her own world! Geet wanted to do something crazy; put of this world; she wanted to drive.
Geet: "Maan aaj main gaadi chalati hoon."
Geet please don't be insane.
Maan: "Geet main tumhari aur humari baby jaan khatre main nahi daal sakta; tum please baad main chaloa. Aaj mujhe chalane do."
Geet: "Maan aapki ye Punjab ki sherni ko gaadi chalana aata hai."
Maan: "Main jaanta hoon geet lekin tum maa bannewaali ho aur main koi risk nahi lena chahta; aaj mero baat maanlo."
Geet saw the concern in his eyes; the love he has for their baby and off course her!
Geet: "Par ab aapne than hi liya hai to main aapki baat manoongi."
As he stepped further; she said;
Geet: "Waise main aapki har baat maanti hoon…"
Geet he screamed! She responded;
Geet: "Yeh gussewaali laal laal aankhen; ye raubdar aawaz aapki office ke saamne chalti hogi; aapki honewaali biwi par nahi. Samjhe ki nahi?"
Maan: "Haan geet bahut acche se samajh gaya; ab chalien?"
Maan was driving and both reach a dhaba; the same one where they had come last time. Geet was too stunned; she placed her palm on his forehead and checked his temperature.
Geet: "Maan aapko bhukhar to nai hai; to phir aap mujhe dhabe main le aaye? Kuch to gadbad hai?"
Maan: "Geet kyun ab main dhabe main khana bhi nahi kha sakta?"
Geet: "maan maine aise to nahi kaha than na? maine to bus ye pooncha ki maan Singh Khurana who bhi is dhabe pe khayenge?"'
Geet: "aap tumne to mujhe yahan aane se pehle bhashan diya than na; ki mujhe biwi ki hare k baat maanni hogi; wahi to kar raha hoon. Main jaanta hoon ki tum yahan who khaoogi jo tum ghar pe nai bana sakti."
Entwining his fingers with hers; he led her inside and sat on the same place where he sat the last time! The same guy came to take the order. He rattled the menu in front of maan; maan barely picking up a few names; highly irritated;
Maan: "Ek minute; tum aisa karo kit um memsaab se order lo; main tab tak haath dho ke aata hoon."
Geet: "Chotu tum aisa karo ek paneer masala; butter chicken; ek biryani; kuch lacche parathe aur do lassi laana. Aur haan pyaaz aur nimbu laana mat bhoolna."
He nodded and Geet was here trying to control her hunger; and Maan came there.
Maan came back and was trying to make himself comfortable on the seat; a couch? Geet laughed; maan yelled geet.
Maan: "Yeh hamara ghar nahi hai. Itna kyun has rahi ho?"
Geet: "Kyun" was the quick reply!
Geet: "Main aapke saath hoon iska matlab ye nahi ki main has nahi sakti. Yahaan aap mere maan sir nahi hai aur na hi main aapki secretary. Main yahan aapni marzi ki maalkin hoon."
He terribly wanted to lose the fight for his lady love; but them his ego came in between. Maan Singh Khurana never loses!
Maan: "Geet tum ye bhool rahi hon ki aabhi tak tumne mujhe aapna istifa nahi diya hai; to technically aaj bhi tum meri liye kaam karti ho. Tum meri secretary ho!"
Geet got up with a sprang;
Geet: "Suniye bhaisaab; dekhiye ye kya keh rahe hai? Main inki honewaali biwi hoon aur mujhse kaise baat kar rahe hai? Babaji kaise insaan se pyaar karwaya hai aapne?"
Maan: "Geet ye kya kar rahi ho? Meri izzat ko mitte me mila rahi ho. Geet hum ghar par nahi hai; neeche baitho aur khana khao; baby ko bhook lago hogi na. "
Baby and her heart melts; she instantly sat down and was having her food. She noticed that he was not eating.
Geet: "Maan aap khana kyun nahi kha rahe hai? Khana pasand nahi aaya kya? Thanda ho raha hai."
Maan: "Jab tak mera baby khana nahi khata aur uski maa to main kaise khaoon?"
Geet's eyes well up and wiping her tears; she feeds him a morsel of food. Both are enjoying their dinner. The smile on Geet's face is back! The glow; the same innocence! She was witnessing happiness after a long time; it's enough; she has faced enough hardships; it's only going to be joy now!
I know you guys are going to be ready with rotten tomatoes and eggs for such a short part; but trust me the confession writing part exhausted my mental capacity. I promise the next part will surely Maaneet moments; and loads of romance!
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Loads of love❤️❤️
Mayuri❤️❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yayyyyyy Me first to comment..lolz😆
Awesomee update Mayu
Awh soo cute Date
Loved it
Gr8 part...Lolz I liked Maan's talking..haha Geet tum koi rani nahi ho and all..and
Mohartama😆
awhhh soo cute maan cares for the baby soo much..love the aloo chat scene yummy..lolx
and uff thank god when i read geet wanted to drive i thought it will be an accident like in the show..lolz but no yay😆
Awhh Lovely maaneet scenes and esp the baby talking ones..maan is soo cute
Loved the date mayu😳
awesome job..amazing part
Cont soon
Thank u
Luv ya<3

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesoome.
superb.
fab.
loved it...
thanx for the pm......
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the update yaar 😊
loved it yar , fab and awesome yaar
mayu i miss u yara 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mayu..even thought u did not PM me....i read ur update 😳 and Waaah...kya update hai...loved their nok jhok...jab tak kissi bhi relationship me nok jhok na ho..toh kya mazza na..😆 love it... and haan stop saying these lines from the next time..
I know you guys are going to be ready with rotten tomatoes and eggs for such a short part;

This was not a short update..and none of ur updates are short..So please try to avoid this line, coz yeh line aapke FF ko shobha nahi deti 😳 love u 🤗

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